ShaNak new love story updated part 52 on page 99 - Page 2

very nice.... loved it... waiting for the next part....

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

very nice.... loved it... waiting for the next part....

thanks a lot

hey sweety u writeen very well plz continou

Hey guys tanx a lot for ur appreciation n encouraging me for continuing dis fiction n d 2nd part is here n I hpe u lyk dis part also jus lyk d previous part

PART 2

Shaan & khanak ver alone in d house. Dey ver sittn in khanak's room & jus talkn in general & as usual khanak ws constantly talkn n shaan ws listening 2 her. They ver jus talkn ven suddenly d light went off & it ws completely dark in khanak's room except for d moonlight dat ws cmn frm khanak's window n highlighting der faces

As soon as the light went khanak got vry scared & immediately without thinkn abt anythn she hugged shaan tightly n startd crying like a baby & shaan ws shocked as 2 y khanak ws crying & hugged him lyk dat

Shaan (while hugging khanak):- khanak kya hua tum aise ro kyun rahi ho

Khanak (crying):- shaan tumhe pata hai na ki mujhe andhere se kitna darr lagta hai phir bhi tum mujhse pooch rahe ho ki main ro kyun rahi hun

Shaan:- khanak dnt tel me ki tum abhi tak andhere se darti ho, c'mon khanak & shaan started laughing

Khanak(broke the hug & said):- shaan tum bahut bure ho I hate u yahaan mujhe itna darr lag raha hai aur tum ho ki mujh par hi hans rahe ho hw cn u laugh at me lyk dis shaan.

After saying dis khanak turned 2 d other side & after seeing dat it ws completely dark she again got scared n hugged shaan again n on d other hand shaan ws jus laughing continuously coz he cudnt control his laughter anymore thnkn dat khanak ws still scared f dark but den he composed himself

Shaan:- achcha khanak I m realy sry I promise main ab tumpe bilkul bhi nai hasunga chalo ab toh pls rona band karo, but khanak ws still cryin n she ws shakn coz f her fear f darkness n shaan realized dat she ws actually very scared rite nw n he decided dat he'll search for sme candles 2 light he tried getting up bt cudnt coz khanak ws holdin him very tightly but still he tried 1ce again btw s unsuccessful bt dis tym khanak understood dat shaan ws tryn 2 get up

Khanak(crying):- shaan pls mujhe chod kar mat jao tum jaante ho na mujhe andhere se kitna darr lagta hai phir bhi tum mujhe aise chod kar ja rahe ho

Shaan(broke the hug & took khanak's face in both his hands):- khanak main tumhe kabhi chod ke nai jaunga kabhi bhi nai so pls relax aur main bas candles dhoondne ke liye uth raha hoon taaki thodi roshni ho jaaye ,& he tried getting up 1ce again bt khanak held his hand & signaled him through her eyes not 2 go anywhere pls, den shaan sat on his knees took her hand in his & said

Shaan:- khanak agar main candles nai lekar aaunga aur unhe light nai karunga toh phir roshni kaise aayegi aur phir hum aise andhere main thodi na bethe reh sakte hai

Khanak:- shaan phir main bhi tumhare saath chalungi candles dhoondne, main yahaan akeli nai rehne waali

Shaan:- shaan thought for smetym as 2 hw dey vl move together in dis dark bt den nodded his head & said theek hai khanak tum bhi mere saath chalo ok & khanak jus smiled & shaan wiped her tears as gently as he cud n said meri khanak rote hue bilkul achchi nai lagti & jus pinched her nose & khanak smiled

Shaan & khanak ver tryin 2 walk together bt shaan ws nt able 2 find d candles coz he ws nt able 2 move coz f khanak's firm hold on him so he tried dat khanak cud leave his shirt vich she ws holding vry tightly but den he understood dat he wnt b able 2 free his shirt frm khanak's hand so he tried takin out his cell W*H 1 hand so dat he cud hve so light 2 search for d candles but in d process he lost his balance & khanak also lost her balance & the both tripped & fell on the bed. Shaan ws on top of khanak & his cell dropped frm his hand, then he ws tryn 2 search for his cell on d bed & in dis process his hand accidentally landed on khanak's face n as soon as his hand touched her face, both f dem felt a huge amount f current flowing in der bodies n shaan & khanak ver for d 1^st tym gettn attracted towards each other. Shaan started caressing her face with his hand vry softly n gently n she jus closed her eyes in anticipation n shaan lukd at her closed eyes in d moonlight & for d 1^st tym he saw hw beautiful & elegant khanak lukd. Shaan slowly moved towards khanak n his lips ver nw inches away frm her lips but der very passionate & intense moment ws disturbed coz d light came & both f dem came back 2 der sensed n jus stood up feeln embarrassed & lukd here & der & cudnt believe wt dey did n wt dey ver actually feelin for each other for d 1^st tym n den both f dem together said sorry khanak, sorry shaan n startd laughn. Suddeny khanak's phone rang n she saw it ws her dad's call she picked it up & said

Khanak:- hi dad hw's d party going?

Person on d phone:- dekhiye madam in sir ka aur unki wife ka ek bahut bura accident hua hai, inki gaadi ek truck se bhid gayi thi isiliye inko bahut chot aayi hai aap pls jaldi se hospital aa jaaiye inki situation bahut critical dekhti hai

After listening 2 all dat khanak's phone dropped frm her hand n she ws shocked n tears came frm her eyes n she fell on d ground n seeing khanak lyk dis shaan also sat on d ground & asked her

Shaan(held khanak by her shoulders):- khanak kya hua khanak kuch toh bolo kya bola uncle ne, he shaked khanak by her shoulders & again said bolo khanak kya hua

Khanak:- after smetym khanak came back 2 her senses & managed 2 say a few words shaan shaan dad aur mom'''''..shaan dad aur mom ka'''''''shaan said haan khanak bolo aunty aur uncle ka kya den khanak finally spoke n said shaan dad aur mom ka bahut bada accident hua hai aur woh log abhi hospital mein hai

Shaan was shocked & he cud jus manage 2 say a what in dat situation n den khanak said haan shaan mom aur dad ka accident hua hai n she startd crying uncontrollably n hugged shaan n shaan consoled her by holding her tightly 2 him n den khanak said shaan hume abhi hospital jaana hoga chalo n shaan nodded in a yes & said haan chalo

Shaan knew dat khanak ws nt in a state 2 drive rite nw n so he startd driving himself n in d car khanak ws crying uncontrollably & shaan tried 2 drive as soon as he cud bt d traffic ws 2 much n he kept pressing d horn multiple times n den banged his hand on the steering n said shit yeh traffic bhi na isko bhi abhi hi aana tha but then he saw khanak crying uncontrollably & said khanak pls relax karo bilkul chinta mat karo uncle aur aunty ko kuch nai hoga khanak pls relax n den he saw dat d traffic ws cleared up & so he startd driving as quickly as he cud n finally dey rchd d hospital n shaan said khanak tum chalo main gaadi park karke aata hun n khanak jus got out n banged d door f d car n ran W*H full speed. She went 2 d reception & askd d receptionist der abt her parents n she tld her dat dey ver in a vry critical condition in room no. 204 towards her right n khanak ran n after parking d car shaan also rchd outside der room n saw khanak seeing her parents thru d glass, he den saw d condition f khanak's parents n realized dat der condition ws realy vry critical n dey ver badly injured he then kept his hands on khanak's shoulders & consoled her & she jus startd crying & hugged shaan n shaan also had tears in his eyes bt he didn't let those tears cme out coz he knew if he wud cry den even khanak vl break down n he cnt see khanak breaking down so he controlled himself bt der hug ws disturbed by d doctor

Khanak: doctor mere mom aur dad kaise hai doctor

Shaan: boliye doctor uncle aur aunty kaise hai

Doctor: dekhiye pls apne aap ko sambhaalne ki koshish ki jiye woh actually mr aur mrs mehra ki haalat bahut kharab hai unki situation abhi bahut critical hai unki body hamari medicines par kuch respond hi nai kar rahi hai aur unke bahut khoon beh chukka hai isiliye ab hame 2 ghante baad unka check-up karna hai us hi ke baad kuch pata chal paayega n pls apne aap ko sambhalne ki koshish ki jiye n mr shantanu main aapse kuch baat karna chahta hun aap pls mere office mein chaliye n shaan nodded his head in a yes bt b4 leavn he tld khanak:- khanak main thodi der mein aata hun tum yahaan betho aur pls yahan se kahi mat jaana ok he makes her sit on d chair & holds her face n said khanak apna dhyaan rakhna main bas abhi aaya ok & khanak jus nodded her face in a yes n shaan tld d doctor chaliye n both f dem went 2 d doctor's room n meanwhile khanak ws jus sittn on d chair crying

In doctor's office

Doctor:- dekhiye mr. shantanu miss khanak abhi bahut bure sadme mein hai isiliye unke saamne yeh sab baat karna theek nahi tha isiliye maine aapko yahaan bulaya

Shaan:- aisi kya baat hai doctor jo aap khanak ke saamne nahi bol sake

Doctor:- actually mr. shantanu mr & mrs. Mehra ki tabiyat hadh se zyada bigad chuki hai aur aur''''''''..

Shaan:- aur kya doctor boliye doctor aur kya

Doctor:- aur unko bachana ab almost impossible sa hai aur yeh baat main miss. Khanak ke saamne nai kar sakta tha

Shaan: kya, nahi doctor aisa nahi ho sakta aap pls kuch bhi kariye par unko bacha lijiye doctor pls doctor pls , shaan said dis while folding his hands in front f d doctor

The doctor then held his hands n said dekhiye mr. shantanu aap aise toot nai sakte kyunki agar aap hi toot gaye toh miss. Khanak ko kaun sambhalega aapko unhe bikharne se sambhaal na hoga kyunki aap hi hain jo unhe sambhal sakte hai aur agar aap hi bikhar gaye toh who jee nai paayengi isiliye pls control kijiye aur apne aap ko sambhaal ne ki koshish ki jiye pls aura b mere khayal se aapko miss. Khanak ke paas jaana chaiye unko iss waqt ek apne ki bahut zaroorat hai aur iss waqt sirf aap hi unhe sambhaal sakte hai isiliye pls ab aap miss. Khanak ko jaa kar sambhaliye

Shaan agreed & ws abt 2 leave ven d doctor said aur haan mr. shantanu abhi iss bare mein miss. Khanak ko kuch mat bataiyega unhe hum 2 ghante baad check-up ke baad hi sab kuch bata denge n apna dhyaan rakhiye ga n shaan said ji doctor & left frm der

Shaan sat next 2 khanak n saw her she ws luking totally in shock n she had gone into depression n shaan saw her crying so he wiped her tears with his hands its ok khanak kuch nahi hoga aunty aur uncle ko n khanak just placed his head on shaan's shoulder n shaan held her by her arm n dey stayed in peace in dat position for some time n finally khanak relaxed a little because she had got a shoulder 2 cry on n den after sme tym d doctor came 2 shaan n khanak n said ab main mr. & mrs. Mehra ko check karne jaa raha hun n usi ke baad kuch bata sakta hun main unki condition ke baare mein.

The doctor went inside d ward n checked khanak's parents for some time n after about 15 minutes he came out W*H a sad face

As soon as he came out, khanak asked him doctor, doctor mere mom aur dad kaise hai doctor boliye na doctor aap aise chup chaap kyun khade hai kuch toh boliye doctor pls bataiye ki mere mom aur dad ab kaise hai kaisi condition hai unki doctor pls kuch boliye & finally d doctor spoke I m realy sorry main unko nahi bacha paya. Khanak ws totally shockd nw n she questioned d doctor:- doctor aap mazaak kar rahe hai na mere mom dad'''''..mere mom dad ne aapse kaha hoga mujhse mazaak karne ko boliye na doctor aap mazaak kar rahe hai na mere saath n den she turned 2 shaan n said shaan inko bolo na yeh mujhe sach kyun nai bata rahe bolo na shaan kuch n den she again turned 2 d doctor n said doctor kuch toh boliye pls n she started crying again n den d doctor finally said I m realy sry par kaash main bol sakta ki main mazaak kar raha hun par main mazaak nai kar raha hun aapke mom aur dad ab iss duniya mein nai rahe n after saying dis he left frm der n khanak lukd at shaan n jus collapsed bt before she cud hit d ground shaan caught hold f her n she ws nw in shaan's arms. shaan lifted her n made her sit on the seat near dem n den sprinkled sme water on his face n khanak finally came 2 her senses n shaan asked her W*H a lot f concern in his eyes khanak, khanak tum theek toh ho na bt khanak ws unable 2 speak anythn after hearing d news abt her parents n she did nt speak anythn, shaan tried a lot so dat she wud speak smethn bt she ws in total shock den d doctor came n askd dem 2 take d body f khanak's parents.

Oh Gosh !!

oh wow...ok i cant wait for next part ...great job!!!

Originally posted by: togepe30

Oh Gosh !!

Really sad !

I guess now Shaan will take her with him and she will live with the Khandelwals

nw wt vl shaan do u vl get 2 knw dat later on only hehehehe................

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

oh wow...ok i cant wait for next part ...great job!!!

tanx a lot n i ll update soon

Heyya! Ur jst 2 gud shiksha..... Jst read both d parts.... Luvd it..... D way u describe each situatn jst 2 gud..... Update soon.....
p.s. Cn u plz edit d title whn u update d nxt part den it wil b easy 4 us 2 knw if u hv updated.....

Originally posted by: roshnimanoti

Heyya! Ur jst 2 gud shiksha..... Jst read both d parts.... Luvd it..... D way u describe each situatn jst 2 gud..... Update soon.....
p.s. Cn u plz edit d title whn u update d nxt part den it wil b easy 4 us 2 knw if u hv updated.....

tanx a lot n i vl update very soon bt i dnt knw hw 2 change d title so i m nt able 2 do it so cn u pls tell me hw 2 do it