ShaNak new love story updated part 52 on page 99

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hey guys actualy i hd smethn in mind regarding shaan n khanak so i thought 2 transform it into a fiction & here i am bt let me warn u dat i hve never in my lyf written any fiction so i realy dnt knw hw vl it turn out 2 b bt i hpe u ppl lyk it n ya i cudn't thnk f a name for dis fiction so pls suggest a name 2 me for dis fiction.

Introduction

Shantanu Khandelwal

24 years old, a total charmer. He lives in Mumbai. He is very handsome, smart & charming & all the girls just drool over him. He loves to flirt with girls but at the same time he is very sweet & loving by nature and also a total prankster but he never wants to hurt anyone. He is very independent & wants to create an identity of his own. He loves his parents a lot and his parents were his 1st priority & then khanak, his best friend

Khanak Mehra

24 years old, she is very pretty & elegant. She lives in Delhi. She is very very talkative & can't stop once she has started talking but at the same time she is very kind-hearted & caring by nature and loves her parents a lot. Being the only child of her parents she was always very pampered but still she was never demanding and her parents were the most important people in her life & after them shaan was the most important person in his life because shaan & khanak although not staying in the same city but still were best friends & their friendship was considered unbreakable.

PART 1

Shantanu khandelwal's parents & khanak mehra's parents were best of friends & so were shaan & khanak. Although living in diff cities their friendship was considered unbreakable. Shaan's parents considered Khanak as their own daughter & loved her a lot & same was the case with Khanak's parents & Shaan. They used to talk on the phone everyday for hours. Today, everything was going fine & it was just a normal day for everyone but shaan decided to go on a vacation to meet Khanak & her family

At Khandelwal's house

Shaan: good morning mom, good morning dad

M & D: good morning beta, kya baat hai bahut khush lag rahe ho aaj, aisa kya hua hai says madhvi

Shaan: hua hai nai mom hone waala hai main aaj delhi jaa raha hun maine aap log ko kal bataya toh tha ki main aaj delhi jaa raha hun khanak aur uski family ke paas & main kuch din wahi rahunga

Madhvi: oh haan beta tumne bataya tha I m sorry main bhool gayi waise kab ki flight hai tumhari

Shaan: 2 baje ki hai n abhi 2 bajne mein jyaada time nai bacha hai toh main thodi der mein nikalta hun

Sunil: ok beta apna dhyaan rakhna aur wahaan pahuch kar hame phone zaroor kar dena

Shaan: yes dad

At 12:30 in the afternoon

Shaan: arre dharma jaldi chala yaar meri flight miss ho jaayegi

Dharma: shaan baba aap bilkul chinta mat karo dharma ke hote hue aapki flight kabhi nai ho sakti abhi aap dekho dharma kaise aapko 10 min mein airport pahucha dega poocho kyun?

Shaan: arre nai poochna yaar tu bas mujhe jaldi se airport pahucha de

At the airport

Shaan: chalo thankfully time pe pahuch gaya ab meri flight toh nai miss hogi

Announcement: passengers travelling from flight no. IE7215 going to delhi kindly come to gate no.3 the flight is about to board

Shaan: wow ab main itne time baad finally apni best friend se milunga

At mehra's house

Khanak: mom dad aap log mujhe airport tak drop karoge ya main khud jaun

Mom: arre par beta tum kahan ja rahi ho

Khanak: arghh mom aap phir bhul gaye aaj shaan aa raha hai itne time baad toh obviously main hi toh usse airport lene jaungi na isiliye pooch rahi thi ki aap log mujhe drop kar rahe ho ya main khud car leke chali jaun

Mom: arre haan beta I m really sorry main toh bhul hi gayi thi ki aaj mera beta aa raha hai aur tum ek kaam karo tum usse khud hi lene chali jaao waise bhi who tum se specially milne aa raha hai

Khanak: mom aap bhi na kuch bhi bol rahe ho who hum sab se milne aa raha hai

Mom: haan haan waise khanak tumhe shaan ko aaj hi pick up karna hai airport se aur uski flight half an hour mein land karti hogi toh tumhe ab nikalna chaiye

Khanak: oh haan mom maine toh time dekha hi nai chalo mom main ab chalti hun bye

Mom: bye beta dhyaan se drive karna aur shaan ko jaldi se leke aana

Khanak: yes mom bye

Mom: bye beta

At the airport

Shaan came out of the airport & saw a smiling khanak & immediately a smile also spread across shaan's face seeing khanak smile

After seeing shaan in front of her she immediately ran towards him with full speed & hugged him tight & shaan also hugged her back

Khanak: shaan hiii tum jaante nai ho maine tumhe kitna miss kiya hai n finally u r here I m so glad ki tum aa gaye

Shaan: maine bhi tumhe bahut miss kiya khanak main bhi tumse milna chahta I missed you so much khanak

Khanak: chalo shaan tum thak gaye hoge itni travelling ke baad lets go to the car & u knw wt ab mujhe bhi drive karna aata hai so u cnt tease me anymore

Shaan: wow dats great ki tum bhi finally drive karna seekh hi gayi ho so lets go

Khanak: haan chalo n I m driving ok?

Shaan: ok baba ab chale

Khanak: haan chalo

In the car

Khanak was constantly talkn n talkn n talkn telling shaan about how her family missed him so much

Khanak(while driving): aur tumhe pata hai mom aur dad tumhe kitna miss kart the in fact poore time woh tumhari hi baatein karte hai poore time poochte rehte hai shaan kaisa hai,kya kar raha hai, delhi kab aa raha hai

Shaan: oh god khanak tumhara bolna abhi tak kam nai hua god yaar tum kitna bolti ho thak nai jaati kya

Khanak: kya main bahut bolti hun acha chalo theek hai bolti hun naa toh theeke ab main bilkul nai bolungi bilkul chup rahungi n she turned her head to the other side pouting

Shaan(laughed at her reaction & den said): achcha theek hai baba I m sorry tum bilkul nai bolti ho ab toh pls meri baat maan jaao pls , he held his ears with his hands n said sorry khanak

Khanak laughed at him after seeing him holding his ears & said: chalo theek hai iss baar maaf kiya par agli baar nai karungi

Suddenly an idea struck shaan & he was back 2 his flirting W*H khanak vich he hd not dne since a long tym as dey hd nt talkd d last 2 days

Shaan(flirtatiously): waise khanak tumne kaha ki mom aur dad mujhe bahut miss kar rahe the n den he leaned a little towards khanak n said with full intensity in his eyes-- par khanak kya tumne mujhe miss kiya

Khanak saw shaan leaning towards him & thought wt ws happening 2 him although shaan used 2 flirt W*H her venever dey talked on phone bt since last 2 days dey hadn't talkd so she hd completely forgotten abt shaan's flirting & ven shaan askd her did she miss him W*H such intensity in his voice she felt herself blushing

Shaan saw her blushing & smiled 2 himself n he thought y nt take advantage of d situation n leaned more towards khanak n nw shaan ws vry close 2 khanak n asked again in his husky voice'bolo na khanak tumne mujhe miss kiya kya

As soon as shaan leaned towards khanak she stopped d car n somehow she managed 2 say a yes very shyly and seeing her in such a situation shaan laughed out loud n khanak understood dat he ws flirtn W*H her again n she said: shaan tum phir se mere saath flirt kar rahe the na main tumhe nai chodungi n starts hitting him on his shoulder W*H her hands

Shaan: arre khanak kya kar rahi ho lagti hai yaar

Khanak: ye tumhe mere saath mazak karne se pehle sochna chaiye tha

Shaan: achcha theek hai yaar sorry

Khanak stopped hitting him & said its ok & smiled

Shaan: ab ghar chalne ka irada hai yaa n he smiled mischievously

Khanak: shaan tum bhi na waise bhi mom dad tumhara bahut der se ghar pe intezaar kar rahe hai so lets go

Shaan: ok lets start d ride

Khanak: ya

After some time dey finally reached khanak's house

Khanak: finally pahunch gaye chalo andar chalte hai main servant ko boldungi ki tumhara saaman le aaye

Shaan: ok chalo

Khanak's parents welcomed shaan n he touched der feet n gave dem a hug

Khanak's dad: shaan beta aayo lets sit n chat

Dey sat down on d sofa n startd chattn

Khanak's dad: aur shaan beta Mumbai mein sab log kaise hai aur sunil mujhe ab bhi yaad karta hai ya nai aur madhvi ji kaisi hai

Shaan: sab theek he uncle Mumbai mein toh aur haan papa aapko bahut miss karte hai unhone mujhe aapko bolne ko kaha tha ki woh aapko bahut yaad karte hai aur mom bhi theek hai in fact dad aur mom toh poore time aapki aur aunty aur khanak ki hi baatein karte rehte hai

Khanak's dad: chalo achcha hai ki sab theek hai chalo ab shaan khanak tum log baatein karo main 5 min mein aaya

Khanak: ji dad

And shaan & khanak startd talkn dey ver jus talkn in general n after 10 min khanak's dad & mom came n all f dem talkd n didn't realize dat it ws 8 at night

Suddeny khanak's mom saw d tym n tld every1 dat her & khanak's dad hd 2 go for a party tdy so dey went 2 get ready n left n tld khanak nt 2 trouble shaan much n entertain him nt make him bored while khanak jus gave her mother an angry glare & her mother & father left leavn shaan & khanak alone in the house

PRECAP:- shaan & khanak in the hospital


guys pls forgive me if u dnt lyk dis fiction n if u dnt lyk it den i wnt continue


Edited by shiksha_03 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hye
dear shiksha 😃
i am loving ur simple way of telling a good story do continue as and when u have time
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shiksha...u better continue....
try PMing me wen u update!!....
they r left alone in the house......hmmm....interesting!! lol ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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shiksha, another new take on shanak, but still keeping true to their characters. enjoyed reading it and looking forward to the next instalment. haila home alone..... aisi kya hua that they end upin hospital🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Shiksha..............
loved the FF.............
pls continue..... n update soon........
ok shaan n khanak r now alone in house................😆
i want to read more .............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one !
Do continue !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continue!! Its nice!!
Vaise hosp..padhke I got a hundred new ideas as to what cud they be doing alone🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

Hye

dear shiksha 😃
i am loving ur simple way of telling a good story do continue as and when u have time




tanx a lot for liking it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vatsalya

Continue!! Its nice!!

Vaise hosp..padhke I got a hundred new ideas as to what cud they be doing alone🤣


thank u n well hospital mein kya hota hai woh toh u ll get 2 knw in d next part only
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

hey shiksha...u better continue....

try PMing me wen u update!!....
they r left alone in the house......hmmm....interesting!! lol ;)


thank a lot n ya i ll definitely try n lets c wt hpns in d house ven dey r alone
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