ShaNak new love story updated part 52 on page 99 - Page 3

hey shiksha.. i didn know u updated the second part.... wonderful... very emotional... waiting for ur next part

Originally posted by: roshnimanoti

Sent u a pm did u gt it?

ya i got it n i hve replied 2 it also

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

hey shiksha.. i didn know u updated the second part.... wonderful... very emotional... waiting for ur next part

hey tanx a lot n ya i cudnt change d title dis tym bt ven i update d next part i ll change d title so dat u get 2 knw dat i hve updated d next part n i vl update soon

Originally posted by: Yasharanrocks

awsme yaar.plz cont soon.....

tanx a lot n d next part will be up in 10 min

ok guys part 3 is here i hope u lyk dis part also

PART 3

Khanak gathered a lot f energy n patience n went W*H shaan n took der parents body n since it ws early morning shaan decided dat dey wud do all the things performed tdy only so that khanak doesen't get bothered by people's comments n all everyday n khanak agreed W*H shaan coz he knew wtever shaan ws doing ws for her benefit only n so dey did d antim sanskaar f her parents dat day n khanak had done everything herself n while the puja ws going on some ladies ver talkn abt khanak's parents

Lady1 :- bechare mr & mrs. Mehra pata nai kya ho gaya inke saath, bahut achche log the aur dekho toh inke saath bahut bura hua

Lady2:- haan bahut bura hua aur kisne socha tha ki itni jaldi unki maut ho jaayegi bechaare bhagwan uki aatma ko shaanti de

Lady3:- aur toh aur bechaari khanak betiyaa ka toh socho uska toh ab iss duniya mein koi raha hi nai who bechari ab bhala kaise poori duniya ka saamna karegi akele n den dey went 2 khanak who ws standn behind dem n listening 2 everything n d ladies said khanak beta hume bahut dekh hua tumhare mom aur dad ki khabar sunke aur hum jaante hai ki ab toh tum iss duniya mein bilkul akeli ho gayi ho aur tumhe sahara dene ke liye koi nahi hai par beta tum bilkul chinta mat karna kisi bhi cheez ki zarrorat ho toh hum hamesha tumhare saath rahenge toh kya hua agar tumhare maa baa piss duniya mein nai rahe toh n dey stressed on d words iss duniya mein nai rahe toh coz dey ver saying all dese dialogues purposely n said hum toh hai na tumhe kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho bejhijak humse maang lena after all tum hamaari bhi toh beti ho na n khanak ws gettn vry uncomfortable after listenin 2 those ladies talks n shaan who ws watchn d whole scene frm a distance n ws listening 2 everythin came 2 khanak's rescue frm d ladies n tld d ladies by putting his hand across khanak's shoulder n said:- ki aap logon ko khanak pe apni meherbaani dikhani ki koi zaroorat nahi hai aur jahaan tak khanak ke akele hone ka sawaal hai who main kabhi hone hi nahi dunga kyunki mere hote hue khanak kabhi akeli nahi padh sakti main usse kabhi bhi akela nahi padne dunga main hamesha uska saath dunga har dukh mein har such mein har musibat mein main hamehsa khanak ke saath rahunga usse kabhi apne se door nahi karunga n after listening 2 shaan d ladies jus pouted at shaan & khanak n left frm der speaking all kinds of nonsense n shaan tld khanak:- khanak tumhe aise logon ki baatein sunne ki koi zaroorat nai hai yeh jaan pooch ke aise bolti hai isiliye tum inke baton ko bas ignore karna theek hai n khanak said:- par shaan yeh log sahi toh keh rahe the ab mera iss duniya mein hai hi kaun main toh yeh sochti hoon ki main bhi kyun nai mar gayi n immediately shaan put his finger on her lips to stop her frm speaking any further n said:- khanak tum kabhi aisa mat sochna ki tum iss duniya mein akeli ho kyunki mere hote hue tum kabhi akeli nai hogi main tumhara saath kabhi nai chodunga main apni aakhri saans tak tumhara saath dunga yeh mera waada hai tumse khanak aur kabhi bhi aisa mat sochna ki tum akeli ho theek hai n khanak nodded her head in a yes & smiled bt still khanak ws nt back 2 her normal self coz she didn't talk much except for jus replying 2 people who wud talk 2 her in fact she wud only talk 2 shaan and no1 else n shaan & khanak hugged each other.

After sometime they broke frm der hug n both f dem jus lukd here n der n khanak jus put a strand of hair behind her ear n after smetym shaan said:- dining hall mein chale sab hamara dhoondh rahe honge & khanak nodded her head in a yes & said chalo. Dey both came 2 d dining hall n shaan stood beside khanak after sometime people started leaving but before leaving dey jus told khanak dat it ws really vry sad to hear about ur parents n pls take care of yourself & if u need anything v r always der for u n khanak said a thank you to them den after sometime everyone left, all the guests & khanak's relatives everyone left den khanak also told shaan dat she was tired so she just wanted to get some rest & shaan agreed with her because he thought that khanak must be really sad & depressed now so she might want to stay alone for some time and calm herself so she went to her room & shaan went to his. When khanak entered her room she forgot to close the door completely & so the door was half open but khanak did not realize that the door was half open. Shaan just went inside his room & sat on the bed thinking that what he thought was it correct & then he got the answer of his question that yes what he was planning to do was correct & so he talked to his parents on the phone regarding what he was thinking (ok people don't stress your mind by thinking what shaan was thinking because you will get to know that very soon) & his parents solved his problem & said that what he was thinking was totally correct & he should proceed with his idea.

In khanak's room

Khanak was sitting on the ground with her head on her knees & her knees were sticking to her body & she had her parents photo in her hand. She looked at her mom & dad's photo & started crying loudly & was constantly saying:- kyun aap log mujhe chod ke chale gaye mom dad kyun & she continued crying with her mom & dad's photo in her hand

Khanak:- mom, dad maine toh kisi ka kuch nahi bigada kabhi bhi kisi ke baare mein kuch bura nahi chaha aur na hi kabhi kisi ka bura kiya toh phir mere saath kyun bura hua, meri zindagi mein hi itne dukh kyun likhe hai bataiye na mom dad bataiye na n she continued crying.

Khanak:- meri kismat mein itne dukh kyun likhe hai mom dad bataiye na kyun n khanak just kept crying

On the other side after talking to his parents, shaan walked out of his room to get some water for himself but on his way he heard khanak's crying so he stopped on his path outside khanak's room & since the door was half open he could see everything going inside khanak's room, he saw khanak crying loudly & decided to go in & talk to her and as soon as he was about to step inside her room he heard her speaking something and he stopped at the gate of her room & started listening to what she was saying. After listening to what she was saying even his eyes became moist & he had tears in his eyes but he wiped his tears because he knew if he would cry & break down then even the amount of strength khanak had till now she would lose that strength also because shaan knew that he had to remain strong to make khanak strong & if he would go weak then khanak would totally break down & no one would have been there to control her if he breaks down so he wiped his tears & decided not to cry in front of khanak & this time shaan was really moved by khanak's tears he was himself for the first time crying by seeing khanak's tears. After listening to what khanak was speaking he just sticked to the wall & thought:- kyun khanak ke saath aisa hua kyun, kya galati thi uski jiski usse itni badi sazaa mili, woh bechaari toh hamesha sabka achcha hi chahti aur sabke saath achche se rehti thi toh phir uske saath itna bura kyun hua kyun & he just closed his eyes & said:- ab khanak meri zimmedari hai aur main tumhe kabhi apne se door nahi hone doonga khanak. Main tumse waada karta hoon main tumhari life mein woh saari khushiyaan waapas laaunga jiski tum haqdar ho main hamesha har mushkil ghadi mein tumhara saath doonga I promise khanak I promise & after saying this he finally saw that she had stopped talking & she was crying so he went inside & sat down on the floor next to her & shaan held her by her shoulders & as soon as she saw shaan she immediately hugged him & started crying uncontrollably & shaan hugged her back in a way of consoling her because he knew that right now she had totally broken down & needed a shoulder to cry on & he was there for her & he was totally correct khanak was actually totally broken now although she used to show that she was very strong & she can control herself in front of every one but now it was like saturation point for khanak because now she could not control herself anymore and shaan always knew that she was not as strong as she used to show so he was always around her thinking that whenever she would need someone the most he would be there & now was the situation where she needed someone & he was there for her to help her deal with all the problems & to support her in every possible situation

Khanak knew she cannot hide her tears from him, she can hide her tears & lie to everyone but not him so she finally cried her heart out. While weeping she told shaan:- shaan mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai bolo na shaan maine kiya kya hai jo mujhe yeh sab bhugat na padh raha hai. Bolo na shaan mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai maine kabhi kisi ka bura nai chaha aur naa hi kabhi kisi ke saath bura kiya toh phir mere saath hi kyun bura hua bolo na shaan pls bolo na shaan & she kept on crying. Shaan then broke the hug & looked at her & gently wiped her tears from her face & cupped her face in his hands & said :- khanak har insaan ki life mein bura waqt aata hai aur tum bas yeh socho ki yeh tumhari zindagi ka bura waqt chal raha hai par khanak bure waqt ke baad achcha waqt bhi aata hai aur tumhara bhi achcha waqt aayega bas kuch din ka hota hai yeh bura waqt phir tumhari zindagi phir se pehli jaisi ho jaayegi aur tumhari zindagi mein bhi achcha waqt aayega den shaan was saying in his mind main launga tumhara achcha waqt, main tumhari khushi tumhe waapas lautaungi, main tumhari zindagi tumhe waapas jeena sikhaunga aur yeh mera waada hai tumse khanak & suddenly he was distracted from his thoughts by khanak's voice & khanak was saying:- shaan tum sach keh rahe ho kya meri zindagi waapas pehle jaisi ho paayegi, kya meri zindagi se yeh bura waqt chala jaayega aur achcha waqt aayega meri zindagi mein & shaan nodded his head & said haan khanak yeh sab kuch ho ga bas tumhe thoda sa intezaar karna hoga aur apne aap ko sambhalna hoga. shaan thought that khanak would have needed some sleep so he asked her to sleep for sometime but khanak said that she does not feel like sleeping but then shaan said that she should sleep for some time & she will feel better after she wakes up & khanak finally agreed with shaan & decided to sleep for sometime. Shaan then stood up from the floor & gave his hand to khanak so that even she can get up, khanak took his hand & got up & lied down on the bed & shaan said:- kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh mujhe bula lena theek hai & khanak smiled & then shaan was about to leave when khanak held his hand & he turned around & ask kya hua khanak & khanak said :- shaan tum mujhe kabhi chod ke toh nai jaoge na kyunki agar tum bhi meri zindagi se chale gaye toh main jee nahi paungi & shaan told khanak:- khanak main tumhe kabhi bhi chod kar nahi jaaunga, main apni aakhri saans tak tumhare saath rahunga ab tum so jaao ok & khanak smiled & left his hand & he left the room & khanak slept.

wow shiksha dat was really very gud............... i can feel khanaks pain😭

hey shiksha!....jst read both the parts......

awesome... so touching yaar...loved it... pls continue soon

oh it was really nice dear loved it yaar .............shaan is sweetheart ur dialogs r perfect but plz some space in between is hard to read

i just read all 3 parts of FF.u hav written d emotional parts very neatly.i cud feel it.pls giv a title 4 ur FF so dat v can catch up with ur updates on time.r if possible add me 2 ur pm list.