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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh Simra, how romantic was this part. This is so what the creatives should have shown today. After reading your part I feel happy as well sad. Happy because it feels so good that we have such talented forum members like you who try to cheer us up when they show depressing RKAB episodes. And sad because creatives are hell bent on destroying a romantic love story. When I read FF and scenes out here, I feel, there is so much potential in YuRa, but creatives just dont understand this. We want simple romance on YuRa honeymoon, but creatives are determined to show us Yudi getting angry and Rani's mahan bhashans. Her bhashans could have waited until they reached the palace. Atleast honeymoon pe toh har waqt romance dikhate, otherwise whats the point of going on honeymoon.

Ok back to your scene, needless to say Simra, I just loved it. This is exactly what all of us in the forum need at this moment. There are various parts in your scene that I loved, specially the part when YuRa feed each other, how romantic is this. And this is how a newly married couple should behave on honeymoon, not loosing one opportunity to be romantic and expressing love. The atmosphere in honeymoon should be romantic, not of anger and negitive vibes. Again, only if creatives understood this.

Yudi purchasing bangles for Rani and making her wear it, this is such a cute scene Simra. And Rani's gratitude to feel so loved, is so natural. Once again, I loved the last few lines:

She could hardly believe that they had only been married a few days because to her it felt like they had been together forever and even though they had the rest of their lives together it didn't seem like they had enough time together. Soon they would return to the real world filled with responsibilities but Rani knew that they would always find time for each other because to Rani, he was her addiction just like she was his and without each other she knew they would not be able to survive.
Edited by parikhanvi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Wow simara...nice part!! i am so happy today that i spent time with Yudi..me mar Gayi...
best part is yudi buy bangle for RAni..
waiting for next part..
Edited by pop77 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
hi simara.

i'm telling u if there is a way track down the writers of RKAB n give them a good blasting.... u guys r showing wat writing is about ..

r the original writers in their right minds wen write sach bagwas 🤪 dialogs n scenes.....like yesterday 15th december ... they make u go all tingly n warm n then like Rani's " tandi pani " 😆 puts cold water on such a nice scene. . 😡

i'm telling u guys shud really storm RKAB writers office n giv prints of ur scenes
all u guys excellent job 👍🏼 .. take a bow 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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As he gently pulled of her old ones with the utmost care trying not to hurt her and put on the new ones one by one Rani stopped questioning him and stared at him trying not to cry as her heart felt like it was floating and she felt how much he loved her in every caress and touch as he worked slowly
That's me gone for the day! Wow..how perfect is this prince. And I'm so glad that in your FF atleast Rani behaves like a new wife.
She could hardly believe that they had only been married a few days because to her it felt like they had been together forever and even though they had the rest of their lives together it didn't seem like they had enough time together
That is exactly how I see YuRa's relationship, and how I think they feel too. Why can't the damn creatives see what we see. Fools!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ooh Simra, I almost missed this...if it hadn't been for Rakhie I would have definitely missed it.
Soon they would return to the real world filled with responsibilities but Rani knew that they would always find time for each other because to Rani, he was her addiction just like she was his and without each other she knew they would not be able to survive.
So true, so perfecty said. This is how it should have been...newlyweds gaining comfort with each other slowly slowly....
Thank you Simra. You've given me something to smile about on a day that just started out badly and didn't show any signs of improving...
Edited by Nisha_07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
yes simra that is really amezing and to lift our bad mood after watching yesterday's epi and i would prefer to believe thsi is the scene they showed yesterday
i really cannot believe creative find it difficult to show all this kind of tender moments is it that difficult if they try they could come up many ways but .....forget them damn whenever think about creative it spoils mood
about your part simra i really loved it and as you said they were addicted to each other and though they have live together but feels like not eanough
exclent use of words dear
we want to see something like thsi perfact romance , mischief and care and tender feelings
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow....another beautiful part....now I have butterflies in my stomach!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58


😳 Thanks!

Originally posted by: julielaldin

that is amazing .... love it.



😃 Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

Oh Simra, how romantic was this part. (😳) This is so what the creatives should have shown today.(We wish!) After reading your part I feel happy as well sad. Happy because it feels so good that we have such talented forum members like you who try to cheer us up when they show depressing RKAB episodes. And sad because creatives are hell bent on destroying a romantic love story. When I read FF and scenes out here, I feel, there is so much potential in YuRa, but creatives just dont understand this. We want simple romance on YuRa honeymoon, but creatives are determined to show us Yudi getting angry and Rani's mahan bhashans. Her bhashans could have waited until they reached the palace. Atleast honeymoon pe toh har waqt romance dikhate, otherwise whats the point of going on honeymoon. (Awww dont be sad they'll get their brains back soon!! but I completely agree!!)

Ok back to your scene, needless to say Simra, I just loved it. (😳) This is exactly what all of us in the forum need at this moment.(I'm glad I could provide some relief!) There are various parts in your scene that I loved, specially the part when YuRa feed each other, how romantic is this. And this is how a newly married couple should behave on honeymoon, not loosing one opportunity to be romantic and expressing love. The atmosphere in honeymoon should be romantic, not of anger and negitive vibes. Again, only if creatives understood this.(We can dream)

Yudi purchasing bangles for Rani and making her wear it, this is such a cute scene Simra. And Rani's gratitude to feel so loved, is so natural. Once again, I loved the last few lines(😃):

She could hardly believe that they had only been married a few days because to her it felt like they had been together forever and even though they had the rest of their lives together it didn't seem like they had enough time together. Soon they would return to the real world filled with responsibilities but Rani knew that they would always find time for each other because to Rani, he was her addiction just like she was his and without each other she knew they would not be able to survive.



Thanks so much darling!!! ur so sweet!! and I look forward to ur comments always because they are soooooo sweet!!!! Dont worry about the actual story line...I am sure that everything will be back to being good again soon esp since they are back home now...

Originally posted by: pop77

Wow simara...nice part!! i am so happy today that i spent time with Yudi..me mar Gayi... (😭dont die...I need u alive!!! come back!! 😆)

best part is yudi buy bangle for RAni..
waiting for next part..



Thank you!!!! The next update will be soon because I am on vacation after tmr 😃

Originally posted by: suranji

hi simara.

i'm telling u if there is a way track down the writers of RKAB n give them a good blasting.... u guys r showing wat writing is about ..(you find them and we'll join u in giving them a good blasting!!)

r the original writers in their right minds wen write sach bagwas 🤪 dialogs n scenes.....like yesterday 15th december ... they make u go all tingly n warm n then like Rani's " tandi pani " 😆 puts cold water on such a nice scene. . 😡 (I agree they had the perfect chance to make it a great episode yesterday)

i'm telling u guys shud really storm RKAB writers office n giv prints of ur scenes
all u guys excellent job 👍🏼 .. take a bow 👏 👏 👏 (Thanks hun 😳)



Originally posted by: rakhie

As he gently pulled of her old ones with the utmost care trying not to hurt her and put on the new ones one by one Rani stopped questioning him and stared at him trying not to cry as her heart felt like it was floating and she felt how much he loved her in every caress and touch as he worked slowly
That's me gone for the day!(😆 Fainted again?) Wow..how perfect is this prince. And I'm so glad that in your FF atleast Rani behaves like a new wife.(I see you have ur words back Rakhie!!! 😃 I write it out like I would like to see them!! )
She could hardly believe that they had only been married a few days because to her it felt like they had been together forever and even though they had the rest of their lives together it didn't seem like they had enough time together
That is exactly how I see YuRa's relationship, and how I think they feel too. Why can't the damn creatives see what we see. Fools! (they dont see it because they have lost it!!!)



Originally posted by: Nisha_07

ooh Simra, I almost missed this...if it hadn't been for Rakhie I would have definitely missed it. (Then I am very very glad that she commented!!)

Soon they would return to the real world filled with responsibilities but Rani knew that they would always find time for each other because to Rani, he was her addiction just like she was his and without each other she knew they would not be able to survive.
So true, so perfecty said. This is how it should have been...newlyweds gaining comfort with each other slowly slowly....(If only the creatives could hear us!!)
Thank you Simra. You've given me something to smile about on a day that just started out badly and didn't show any signs of improving...(ur very welcome!! Thank you for reading!!! I'm glad I made u smile!!!)



Originally posted by: bsingapury

yes simra that is really amezing and to lift our bad mood after watching yesterday's epi and i would prefer to believe thsi is the scene they showed yesterday

i really cannot believe creative find it difficult to show all this kind of tender moments is it that difficult if they try they could come up many ways but .....forget them damn whenever think about creative it spoils mood (I know...its not that hard to show...little things go a long way!!! a simple touch etc but these creatives...😭)
about your part simra i really loved it and as you said they were addicted to each other and though they have live together but feels like not eanough
exclent use of words dear (Thank you!!!)
we want to see something like thsi perfact romance , mischief and care and tender feelings (Agreed!!)



Originally posted by: DesiJuliet07

wow....another beautiful part....now I have butterflies in my stomach! (Thanks!!!! I am glad you liked it!!)



Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.sooon



Thank you!!! I"ll try to as soon as I can!

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Wow!!!! amazing! love it.....



Thank you!!!! for reading and liking it!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OUTSTANDING! Loved every bit of it Simra! wish this could have taken place in the drama it self because nothing you have written would be out of context for Yudi and Rani! Just reading it and imagining it making me so happy as well as making me blush!

Amazing!

You rock girl!

👏
Edited by sapna99 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapna99

👏

OUTSTANDING! Loved every bit of it Simra! wish this could have taken place in the drama it self because nothing you have written would be out of context for Yudi and Rani! Just reading it and imagining it making me so happy as well as making me blush!

Amazing!

You rock girl!

👏



😳 Thanks sapna!! ur so sweet!!! I made u blush?😆 I feel so proud LOL....I am glad that you can actually see this happen in the drama...Thanks again for reading and commenting!!

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