FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 5

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

Wow Simra, just wowww. I mean with all seriousness, this is what honeymoon of madly & deeply in love couple should look like. How perfect is this. Creatives where are you'll, please read this scene, and copy if not everything then alteast some ideas. I hope the boat scene is somewhat similar to your scene Simra.

Awesome work Simra. As usual, I loved your last para, and specially the last few lines:
"She knew that there were people that still did not accept the fact that a maid had married a prince and would cause problems but she also knew that as long as her and her kuwarji were together they could overcome those obstacles. They were stronger as one because they were two parts of one soul residing in different bodies. They were soulmates."

This is so true, that Neil and his gf are all set to create problems, if not between them, then alteast spoil their mood at every opportunity possible. But if YuRa are together, then they can easily face all the problems.

Great job Simra! 👏

>"Taiyar hona hai? Kyun? Hume to aap aisay hi bahut khoobsurat lag rahe hain."
>"Hame dusron kay bare mein nahin pata laikin aap to hamesha sundar lagti hai."
How cute! The prince is just perfect. 😊

Originally posted by: yurafan

Too Good Simra,

Just too good. Perfect yaar yeah Creatives kuchh sekkhenge yaa sirf FF se hi kaam chalana padega I hope creative could learn something from this.

Brilliant!

Nidhi

Originally posted by: DesiJuliet07

Simra that was another part that was beautifully written!

Man wish we get to see some mischivious moments b/w YuRa on their honeymoon! What a trea would that be huh?!?....btw I loved the parts were they are being mischivious with each other! I can soooo imagine the scene happening! 😳

keep up the good job! 👏

Originally posted by: bsingapury

edxcellent work simra...and i also love everything that you have written that playfulness and chhed chhad but last para i loved the most that's our yura soulmate

hope creative also show us some lovely moments between them

keep it up dear and give us more yura moments

Originally posted by: rakhie

If todays epi delivers nothing, then I shall live on the euphoria of your FF until something good comes along.

Cheers me dear!!

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Simra. Loved it.

Your prince is just ideal...and your Rani is a blushing bride who's comfort level with her husband is increasing. Just perfect.

I think I am enjoying this more than the epis at the moment. Please do continue.

Originally posted by: jibi

Hi Simra,

it was really awsome and quite natural. I enjoyed every bit of it.

You know, i watched the episode after reading your FF and after reading the update. And it all mixed up. When, in the episode, rani got up in the morning i was waiting her to caress yudi's face, but she did not do anything and came out of bed and i was surprised what happened, according to update she was supposed to go near yudi. Then i remembered it was your FF, of course better than the actual show. 😃

And as Nisha said, these FFs are better than the actual epi. 😛

Originally posted by: sumedha

like it a lot

Originally posted by: pop77

Nice part Simra..

i can wait next part..

Enjoy Dad's birthday & Bakri Ed..

Here you guys go! A brand new lengthy part. Hopefully you all like it. Sorry if there are typos etc i didnt have time to edit it. Please Please let me know what you thought!!! and Thank you for reading!!

Part 5

Yudi walked out of the washroom to see Rani wrapping her sari around herself. He slowly walked up behind her and gently placed his hand on her bare waist and pulled her against himself. Rani surprised dropped the sari. She looked up to see Yudi staring at her as he gently moved his hand along her waist to her flat stomach pulling her tighter against him. He leaned down as Rani closed her eyes taking in the feeling of his hand trailing along her bare skin as his breath fanned across her face. Yudi was stunned staring at the beautiful picture his wife made. He leaned down to kiss her his own eyes fluttering shut but all of a sudden he found himself kissing fingers instead. He opened his eyes to see Rani smile and pull away from him but as she moved away from him, Rani felt herself being pulled back. She looked back to see him holding her sari walking closer as moved away loosening the sari from her waist. She realized that she would soon be left in just her blouse and petticoat. Rani stopped moving away surprising him and instead started walking towards him. When she reached him she gently reached out to stroke his cheek and stood on her toes to gently brush her lips against his cheek. As Yudi stood there in shock, she laughing and gathering up her sari ran into the washroom leaving him standing there staring after her. As she closed the door he let out a laugh reaching up to touch his cheek.

Rani walked out ready to go and saw Yudi standing with his back to her staring out the window. She walked up behind him and reached out to touch his shoulder and just as her fingers brushed his shoulder he turned grabbing her shoulders, spinning her around and trapping her in his arms against the window. He stared down at her eyes smiling at the surprise in her eyes. His eyes roamed her face memorizing her face as the morning sun lit up her features making her seem like she was glowing. He gently stroked her face with his fingers watching her eyes flutter shut and a shiver pass through her body. He marveled at the fact that he could create such a reaction in her and he leaned forward his lips brushing her forehead. Rani could feel his breath on her face and her heart beats quickened. She sighed in contentment as his lips lingered on her forehead. In a brave move, she moved her hands up his chest clasping her arms around his neck. Yudi trailed his lips along her cheek down to her neck and pulled her into a tight hug with her head against his shoulder.

"Rani, hum aapse aik baat kahen?" Yudi whispered into her neck making her shiver at the ticklish feeling of his lips moving against her skin. Rani just nodded her head.

"Hum aapke saath yahan pe akele jo bhi pal bitai gai, woh hame hamesha yaad rahen gai, humare zindagi mein yeh aik naya moord hai aur is nai moord ki shuruat in khoobsurat pal ki saath karenge. Mein chahta hoon ki aapko in pal mein har khushi mile aur woh khushi hamari puri zindagi hamara saath rahe."

Rani hearing this smiled as tears of happiness formed in her eyes, she quickly turned away to wipe them before he saw them but Yudi caught her hand as it reached up to do so and turned her around to look at him.

"Yeh kya, hum to aapko sirf khush karna chahte the laikin yeh aanso?"

"Yeh aanso khushi kay hi hain Kuwarji, inhe girnay dijiye. Hum bhi yehi chahte hain kay aaj kay baad hamare nai zindagi khushion say bhari ho."

Yudi trailed his hands down her arms to clasp her hands pulled him against her said, "Theek hai to phir hum aapse aik vaada karte hain, kay chahe kuch bhi ho jai hum humesha aapke saath rahengay. Ab hame chalna chahiye."

"Kidhar, Kuwarji?"

"Bas aik jaga." He held on to her hand as her led her out of their little cottage. Rani followed him out to see a table set out covered in rose petals facing the beautiful scene. There was a light wind blowing making her shiver. Yudi seeing this pulled her close wrapping an arm around her waist smiling as she shyly looked away.

"Kuwarji, yeh sab aapne hamare liye?"

"Haan Rani, ab chaliye, hame aaj bohot kuch karna hai."

They walked to the table and Yudi helped Rani into her seat. He then pulled his chair next to hers and sat down. Rani looked at him surprised. She had expected him to sit across from her.

Yudi looked at her and said, "Kya karien Rani, lagta hai kay hume ab aapki aadat ho gai hai, aapse bus thodha si bhi dur hum nahin baith sakte hain. Ab shuru karein?"

Rani just nodded and starting putting food into Yudi's plate. He looked at her surprised that she knew exactly what he liked and what he didn't. As they started eating, he reached out without looking at her and grabbed her hand. Rani looked at him but he continued to eat, even as she struggled to make him let go, acting like everything was normal.

"Kuwarji, hamare haath chorday na."

"Kyun?"

"Kyunke koi dekh laiga." Rani had now turned herself to face him.

"Laikin yahan pay to koi bhi nahin hai, Rani." Yudi turned to look at her, smirking as he saw the exasperated look on her face. He pulled they clasped hands to his lips brushing his lips against her knuckles looking at her the whole time with that look in his that made Rani feel like her stomach had butterflies in them. Rani just turned red and looked down. Yudi just shook his head, laughing on the inside, as he took in the fact that despite spending so much time with him his wife still got embarrassed over the tiniest things. He picked up a piece of fruit and held it to her lips making her look at him. He just looked at her nodding his head toward her. Rani leaned forward to eat it frowning as he pulled it away laughing at her expression. She turned away pretending to be upset with him still holding on to her hand. Yudi just got up and kneeled next to her turning her towards him holding the fruit out to him saying, "Hum to mazak kar rahe the. Ab yeh khalijiye warna hum bhi nahin khaengay." Rani smiled and using her free hand grasped his as she ate it. She pulled back and took some from her plate offering it to him. Yudi ate it holding on to her hand and brushing a gentle kiss against her fingertips before letting go.

They finished their breakfast and Yudi pulled Rani out to the main house and into a car refusing to answer any of her questions about where they were going. Before leaving her went to the manager and gave him specific instructions. He then followed her into the car giving the driver a slip of paper with instructions on it. As they sat in the car, Yudi noticed that Rani's pallu had conveniently covered her hand and so he reached under it to gently caress her hand with his fingertips, looking away as he saw her head jerk up to look at him. He looked out the window smirking as he grasped her hand, brushing his thumb along her hand as he felt her trying to remove her hand from his grasp, holding on tighter. He turned to look at her wanting to laugh at the look on her face. Rani looked up at him, and froze stunned at the look in his eyes, causing her to freeze and continue to look into his eyes. They both stared at each other and were jerked out of the moment when the car came to a stop.

Yudi helped Rani out of the car and she was stunned to find them standing outside a beautiful palace made of red stone. Rani turned around to face Yudi smiling and to his surprise grabbed his hand saying, "Kuwarji, aapko pata hai. Jab hum chotay the to hum hamesha chahte the kay hum aisa mehel ko dekhe jahan pay itne purani kahaniyan chupe hai har aik kone mein!"

Yudi decided to tease her saying, "Kyun kya hamera mehel mein koi kami hai kya?" He laughed as Rani started stuttering, "Nahin Kuwarji, hum to bas'" He stopped her by place his fingers against her lips and said, "Hum jaante hain, hum to bas mazak kar rahe the. Ab chalen?" Rani happy that he understood took the hand her held out to her and followed him as her led her into the palace intertwining their fingers together.

A young woman, Payal, was waiting to show them around. She took them around the palace showing them the different rooms that kings and queens had lived in telling them the stories behind them all. As they walked across a courtyard Yudi saw a woman selling bangles by the side and he asked Payal to wait for them as he pulled Rani towards her. Rani wondered what he was up to as he stopped in front of the woman and started searching through the bangles holding a finger to his lips telling her to be quiet every time she asked him what he was doing.

Yudi finally found the green bangles he was looking and paid the woman. He pulled Rani's hand towards himself gently taking of the bangles that she was wearing despite her protests and started putting on the ones that he had bought.

As he gently pulled of her old ones with the utmost care trying not to hurt her and put on the new ones one by one Rani stopped questioning him and stared at him trying not to cry as her heart felt like it was floating and she felt how much he loved her in every caress and touch as he worked slowly. She didn't know what she had done to deserve him but thanked god that she had found him. She vowed to find a way to do something for him everyday no matter how little it was just to show him how much she loved him. She could hardly believe that they had only been married a few days because to her it felt like they had been together forever and even though they had the rest of their lives together it didn't seem like they had enough time together. Soon they would return to the real world filled with responsibilities but Rani knew that they would always find time for each other because to Rani, he was her addiction just like she was his and without each other she knew they would not be able to survive.

that is amazing .... love it.