FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Hey Simraa, once again your this part is excellent and fantabulous. I just loved it.

And the last paragraph was tooooo good. Loved the way you have put it together.


Originally posted by: sakuraa

A comfortable silence filled the car. The two of them didn't need words between them. The silence and the hold that he had on her hand was enough to convey their feelings to each other.

A wind blew through the partially open window and the curtains around the bed danced in the wind celebrating the love between the prince and his soul mate because this was a couple made in heaven and no power on earth could break them apart. He was a part of her and she was a part of him without each other they were both incomplete.



😳😍😊

Edited by parikhanvi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Good work Simra!!
Now who shold be credited for giving us these bequtiful FF's
Strike?
Article?
Promos......?
Whow so ever but beliebe me mindblowing!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

"Kyun? Hume to lagta hai ke aap bilkul sahi jag ape hain. Hamare bahon mein, hamare dil ke pas."

"woh aap jab hamare pass hote hain to humare under aik ajeeb si feeling hoti hai aur aise lagta hai kai pait mein titliyan urdh rahi hain."

☺️😍

"He was a part of her and she was a part of him without each other they were both incomplete."



It's...I'm...like...wow.

I love the stuff that comes into your mind 😛 I hope even more gets there and we get more scenes from you.



Thanks! I have no idea how it comes to me but I am glad you liked it!! 😃

Originally posted by: rakhie

"A comfortable silence filled the car. The two of them didn't need words between them. The silence and the hold that he had on her hand was enough to convey their feelings to each other."

👍🏼
"woh aap jab hamare pass hote hain to humare under aik ajeeb si feeling hoti hai aur aise lagta hai kai pait mein titliyan urdh rahi hain."
☺️😳 Me too Rani, oh me too!
"the love between the prince and his soul mate because this was a couple made in heaven and no power on earth could break them apart. He was a part of her and she was a part of him without each other they were both incomplete."
👍🏼😍 Uff! Fantastic. But yeh dil mange more...so...



Thanks!!! so......soon! maybe the boat scene will inspire me 😉

Originally posted by: sumedha

keep it up

excellent



Thanks!!



Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.sooon



Thank you! I'll do my best to update soon!

Originally posted by: kiran_sherry

Simra just brilliant.. i mean i m totally speechless ..what to say .. u know i m infact imagining Kapil Anjali like this ..ur last 2 paras has actually created goosebumps in me ..please have more .. i want to read it yaar!!!!



Thanks!!! I am glad that you can actually see it happening! goosebumps?! 😆 I'll try to get another part up soon but we may not need that with the new episodes!

Originally posted by: DesiJuliet07

hey just wanted to say the three parts were AMAZING! Keep up the good work and cant wait for more! 😳



Thank you!!! I am glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: ixl105

Very nice..please update more..



Thanks, I'll do my best to soon.

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

Hey Simraa, once again your this part is excellent and fantabulous. I just loved it.

And the last paragraph was tooooo good. Loved the way you have put it together.




😳😍😊



Thanks Anvi!! 😳 I try my best to provide continutity. Now I am waiting for ur next part 😉

Originally posted by: yurafan

Good work Simra!!

Now who shold be credited for giving us these bequtiful FF's
Strike?
Article?
Promos......?
Whow so ever but beliebe me mindblowing!!!!!!!!👏



Thanks!!! ummmmmmmmmm well the first part was because of the strike, the second because of the article and the last because of the promo! LMAO...so all....I am glad you liked it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
oh dear tumhaaraa ye part padh kar hamaare dil mi bhi bahut saari titaliyaa ood rahi hain
simra it's lovely and very romantic too i can just imagine yura.......
yes ye dil maange more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bsingapury

oh dear tumhaaraa ye part padh kar hamaare dil mi bhi bahut saari titaliyaa ood rahi hain

simra it's lovely and very romantic too i can just imagine yura.......
yes ye dil maange more



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Thank you!!!! I have thought up what I am going to write up nextttttt but we'll see when I actually get some time to write it up!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Ola! A little disappointed with the new episodes, I am going to update in the next couple of hours...I am almost done the next part! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Well I am still to catch up with the epis, but looking forward to your next installment!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Here is the next part for all of you! I hope you like it! Please tell me what you think and how I can improve. Thanks for reading, enjoy!

Part 4

As the sun rose and lit up the room, Rani's eyes fluttered open. She fixed her clothes and looked around until her eyes came upon the sleeping form of her husband. She took in her husband's relaxed, smiling face and reached out to caress his cheek only to see his eyes flutter open. As they both looked into each other's eyes they remembered the night before.

Flash Back

As Yudi had been gently kissing her cheek and gently pushing her into a lying position, Rani shied away from him, turning away and trying to move away. Yudi reached out and gently turned her face towards him. Rani refused to look at him and stared at her hands. He smiled at his shy wife and leaned down to whisper in her ear, "Aapke gaal per yeh lal rang bohot acha lagta hai." He gently trailed his fingers along her cheek as she turned her face away, her hair covering her face. She quickly got off the bed and started walking backwards away from the bed as Yudi followed her slowly across the room.

"Rani, aap kahan ja rahi hain." She just shook her head smiling at him mischievously as he continued to follow her around the room. Yudi laughed at her playfulness and tried to catch her but the moment he got close, she would change directions. As she ran away from him she looked back and smiled but Yudi noticed that she was heading towards a corner and smiling to himself quickly walked towards her forcing her into the corner and trapping her with his arms. They both laughed and their laughter faded away as they both got lost in each other's eyes and Yudi reached out to hold her cheek and Rani's eyes fluttered shut. She felt her world tilt as he lifted her and set her down next to the bed. He took her pallu and started to unravel it, unwrapping it slowly while Rani turned red and refused to look at him. He once again picked her up and placed her in the middle of the bed and lay down next to her. He trailed his hand along her arm and gently grasped her hand bringing it to his lips and kissing it.

End of Flashback

Rani suddenly embarrassed at her thoughts and blushing jerked out of them and shook her head to clear it. She moved away only to feel Yudi grab her hand. She tried to get her hand away but couldn't and then she felt a gentle kiss on her shoulder. She squirmed away from him saying, "Hume taiyar hone jaana hai. Hamara haath chod dijiye na." Yudi wrapped his arms around her waist and said, "Taiyar hona hai? Kyun? Hume to aap aisay hi bahut khoobsurat lag rahe hain."

Rani turned and placed her head on his bare chest. "Aap bhi kitne ajeeb batien kartay hain, bhale koi subah hi subah uth kar khoobsurat lagta hai kya?" Yudi held her closer and said, "Hame dusron kay bare mein nahin pata laikin aap to hamesha sundar lagti hai."

Rani tried to move away again but he just tightened his hold on her waist. She then got an idea and moved her hands down to his waist and started tickling him and Yudi let her go shocked at the sudden and took this opportunity to get away from him. She laughed and ran away into the washroom.

After she was done her shower she realized that she had forgotten her clothes in the room. She decided to call out to Yudi to pass them to her.

"Kuwarji!"

Yudi was shocked to hear her call out to him and ran to the washroom door.

"Rani, kya huwa? Aap theek hain?"

"Kuwarji, hum theek hain. Woh hum apne kapde bhool gai. Aap hame dey sakte hain."

Yudi smiled and said, "Theek hai. Hum abhi late hain." He decided to have fun with this. He saw her clothes on the chair but decided to hand her one of his shirts and pants. He walked up to the washroom door and knocked.

"Rani! Yeh lijiye."

Rani opened the door and crack and put out her arm. Yudi trailed his fingers along her arm and put the clothes in her hand. Rani pulled her hand in and looked at the clothes. She was surprised to see his clothes.

"Kuwarji! Yeh to hamare kapde nahin hain."

"Woh hame aapke kapde nahin mil rahe thay to humne soocha aapko yeh deden."

"koi baat nahin kuwarjji. Hum aake khudhi dhoond leingay"

Yudi just smiled and looked up when he heard the door open. He saw Rani standing there drowning in his clothes. He walked towards her thinking about how cute and adorable she looked. Rani looked around and saw her clothes on the chair and realized that he had tricked her and decided to get back at him.

She turned away and said, "Kuwarji! Hamare kapde to wahan pe pare hain. Aap ne hame jhoot bola!"

Yudi caressed her cheek gently as he said, "Rani, hame maaf kar dijiye. Hum to bas aapse mazak kar rahe the."

Rani just walked away to get her clothes and didn't look at him. Yudi worried that he had made her angry followed her and hugged her from behind.

"Hame nahin pata tha ke aapko itna bura lage gai. Maaf kar dijiye na. Hum aisa kabhi nahin karengay. " He felt her body shaking and was worried he had made her cry. He quickly turned her around only to see her laughing at him. He was glad to see her so happy and surprised that she would trick him in such a way.

"Aap hamse mazak kar rahi theen?" He laughed along with her and picked her up and walked over to the bed and gently sat her down, trapping her with his arms as their laughter faded. He kneeled in front of her as she looked down at him.

"Rani, hume aapko aisa khush dekh kar bohot acha lag rahe hai. Hum sirf aapki khushi chahte hai. Hum vaada karte hain, aapke honton say yeh khushi kabhi nahin jaigi."

"Kuwarji, hum bhi yehi chahte hain, kay aap hamesha khush rahen." Boldly, she reached out and caressed his cheek gently and pulled her hand back. Yudi captured her hand and gently kissed it and holding it got up slowly. He pulled her towards him and she fell into his arms. He leaned down towards Rani, who closed her eyes waiting. She felt his lips gently brush her lips and cheek moving towards her ear. "Hum kapde badal ke aate hain, aap bhi tayar ho jaiye." Yudi placed a gentle kiss on her ear and walked away whistling. Rani opened her eyes to see him walking away. She was still lost in her feelings and stared. She shook her head to clear her thoughts and giggled.

As she started to get dressed properly, she thought of all the moments they had already spent together in the past few days and the many days they had together in front of them. She promised herself that she would do whatever she could in order to keep her kuwarji happy because as long as he was happy so was she. She knew that there were people that still did not accept the fact that a maid had married a prince and would cause problems but she also knew that as long as her and her kuwarji were together they could overcome those obstacles. They were stronger as one because they were two parts of one soul residing in different bodies. They were soulmates.

Edited by sakuraa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Simra, just wowww. I mean with all seriousness, this is what honeymoon of madly & deeply in love couple should look like. How perfect is this. Creatives where are you'll, please read this scene, and copy if not everything then alteast some ideas. I hope the boat scene is somewhat similar to your scene Simra.

Awesome work Simra. As usual, I loved your last para, and specially the last few lines:
"She knew that there were people that still did not accept the fact that a maid had married a prince and would cause problems but she also knew that as long as her and her kuwarji were together they could overcome those obstacles. They were stronger as one because they were two parts of one soul residing in different bodies. They were soulmates."

This is so true, that Neil and his gf are all set to create problems, if not between them, then alteast spoil their mood at every opportunity possible. But if YuRa are together, then they can easily face all the problems.

Great job Simra! 👏

>"Taiyar hona hai? Kyun? Hume to aap aisay hi bahut khoobsurat lag rahe hain."
>"Hame dusron kay bare mein nahin pata laikin aap to hamesha sundar lagti hai."
How cute! The prince is just perfect. 😊

Edited by parikhanvi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too Good Simra,
Just too good. Perfect yaar yeah Creatives kuchh sekkhenge yaa sirf FF se hi kaam chalana padega I hope creative could learn something from this.
Brilliant!
Nidhi

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