AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10)

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Ajuzangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Love it

Very beautifully written

Love to read more soon

Thanks for pm

Update soon

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Very beautiful concept.
Totally lv it.
Intrstng.
Xcitd 2knw asya's lv journey..
Whn asad saw side profile of zoya &th8 her 2b a beautiful grl tht remind me a old film 'satyam shivam sundaram' featuring sashi kapoor &zeenat aman.
Hope it ll nt go lk tht film whr ML leave FL aftr seeing her face.
Ovarall lv it.
Pls pm me if possible.

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Basanti 🦄

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Unrrseed comment on page 1 😊

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Happy to see you with another Different Story on ASYA(KABHI).😊

It was So Interesting and Awesome TS.😊

Zoya Part was so sad.😭

How can Zoya's Parents also do like this with her.😭

Asad(KSG) Past also so sad,her Sister also victim of this Acid Incident.😭

ASYA(KABHI) Part was Awesome.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Conversation was so Nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Feelings towards Zoya was so Nice.😊

The Poem was Awesome.😊

Thanks to Saima-Syed fo this Poem,it was so happy to see with this Poems.😊

Thanks to Miss-Appy for mentioning these Poems.😊

Please Continue soon and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Very beautiful concept.
Totally lv it.
Intrstng.
Xcitd 2knw asya's lv journey..
Whn asad saw side profile of zoya &th8 her 2b a beautiful grl tht remind me a old film 'satyam shivam sundaram' featuring sashi kapoor &zeenat aman.
Hope it ll nt go lk tht film whr ML leave FL aftr seeing her face.
Ovarall lv it.
Pls pm me if possible.

Mentioned the same movie

S3 was a beautiful movie

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Amazing update loved it so much.

Continue soon.

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

A breathtaking start to a beautiful story

Really very speechless with this amazing work

Loved how you used a very realistic plot that many girls go through in real life

Looking forward to know that does asad support her in spite of knowing what she has gone through in her life

Please continue soon

Eagerly waiting for this one

😊

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anuv6

@anuv6

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

awesome...interestng nd new one
i read the poem so many times nd i just wanted to save it fr myself , its just beautiful. i felt every time when i read i, nd it just filled my heart nd i can say it like a mem poem.
it... made the story, like beautiful scars of life.
yess, ur writing way is soo beautiful dear esp the way u described ASYA feelings when they met each other...excellent nd perfect.
waiting eager fr ur nxt update...update sooon :)