AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10)

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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

lovely story...
nice ending...

real people with good heart still around...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

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shonajain

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Posted: 8 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy
res for Mayur, Jas, Ankie and all my sweethearts😳

Big bear hug Janna🤗

But yeh kya sara delay ka blame mujhepe daal diya😲... Can't u just b honest 4 once & admit that u r lazy bumm😆 See me 4 instance main besharmi se qubool karti hun.. Han main hun Lazy😎
Hope u have been fine & everything's fine on that side of d world😛

Coming 2 updt
You r so good Janna seriously.. d way u wrote last part wid such simplicity ki feel hi nahi hua u were dealing wid such nazook plot😛... Sachi u blow our minds literally... Acid victim thing didn't occurred in my mind even once untill it was mentioned but still i was not affected cuz Asad was such a Gem that he made her so special
His speech at Apne was bang on 👏.. Yeh chota Asad usse rudely baat kyun ki😕... Zoya ki jealousy lol was quite cute... & than he proposed her... that Date wala part showed her brave self & i loved Asya being so compy wid each other... If they would have met some other way this is how they must have behaved right😊... But all's well that ends well.. Their destiny wanted 2 unite them this way😊 & at last they adopted chota Asad from Apne after mrg

Janna brilliant execution u've done 2 d challenging plot.. a huge applause 2 Sam di again 4 such a touching Poem 👏... Kudos 2 this awesome Jodi😛

Dher Sara Pyaar🤗
abhi kuch samjh nahi aa raha aur kya bolun😆

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surbhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#255

I loved the wholeee ts apple 🤗 hugss fr a wonderful n heart touching plot.
loved the way it came out at last with asad zoya becoming asya ❤️
the simplicity with which u wrote all the scenes n the feel of the stry just makes u majboor to think over such social things
and I so so so love little asad 😆
Asad is a gentleman ...ur writing makes me want things u knw 😉 😆
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anyways so glad that u shared this ts with us all
and saima di ki poems were like a cherry on the cake ❤️

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Binzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Superb part bano..

Loved it...

Finally Zoya said qubool hai..great..

Thankuu somuch for giving us this wonderful story..

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#257

Absolutely Loved it...

You need to write more

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#258

In love with this flawless story

Any amount of praise would be less for it

The way you have handled such a sensitive issue was commendable

Finally asya get their happily ever after

Was truly a treat to read this wonderful work

This would definitely remain my favourite work on the forum

Thanks for such an amazing work😊

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tashi96

@tashi96

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Posted: 8 years ago

#259

Hi bano! I have read a lot of fanfiction, yours too but this...

This was just so sweet! We can't even imagine what sort of trauma a girl goes through after such attacks but they so deserve a guy who appreciates them and love them just as they are! This is something that lifted my mood, you really are a good writer! And I hope and pray such special girls get an Asad in their life, inshallah! 😊