AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10)

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

I just don't know what to say after reading this one Bano

It's a very sensitive plot...and the way you write this...awesome job !!!

And the poem is just amazing...!!!

looking forward to read more...

continue soon...

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MayurChan
RES for " I.B.P "

thank you so much for the res mayur

res for now

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blueberry02

@blueberry02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Wow...dis is such a beautiful story with a sensible plot
asad lost her sister n in da same way zoya lost her family due to her scar
i hate zoya's family...selfish people!!!
But now zoya is happy with her big family...
I loved asya's 1st meeting
n da poem at the end is very heart touching...so beautifully written.
Super update btw
cont soon

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Great story

The whole concept is brilliant n sensitive

The poem is heart touching

A great job dear

Docontinue soon

Already in love with the story

Zoya is having a very hard time...from a young confidentgirl to a scarred woman ..the lonely life...

Hope Asad will bring her out of the shell..

Waiting for next part

Edited by --Mirage-- - 8 years ago

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Nice concept ...

Plzzz continue soon n do pm me

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Huggie Janna tyt 1 🤗

meri maani nahi na piche se kar diya updt 😆 ...Koi ni I love u ❤️ & Bhala ho Mayur ko ja agar pehle pahunch jaye toh sabke liye res kar deta hai 😛

Coming 2 TS or its FS..kya maine sahi suna 😆 Chalo hum toh khush hi honge but yeah FS hui toh u'll take 2 weeks who meko manzoor nahi hai 😈 ... meko peanut ke mumma papa ki story bhi padni hai 😆

Chalo abhi seriously coming 2 plot
Its really a hard hitting 1& kudos 2 u 4 taking up d plot 👏 Sam di ki poetry was also awesome blossom something that tugs ur heart 😃
So both Asad & Zoya had a terrible past... poor babies 😭 I 1st felt Asad had tough 1 as he lost his parents at tender age & than had 2 face tough life 2 provide 4 Niks & later lost her too his only family ...But it takes great courage 2 come out of that phase & than become something so that u can help such ppl who also suffered same tragedy in life... I can say he's grown up 2 become a great Human being 👏 👏 or he could have also got lost in darkness & spoilt his own life & future.

Coming 2 Zoya her story also was heart wrenching... 4 a period of her life she has lived a normal life wid high spirits but 1 incident changed her life... d family she Loved all her life disowned her what can b more hurtful than that... A wounded soul got more pain while she has 2 b showered wid love & care.

Asya ki 1st meeting was unique & so happy shappy... & I felt ki Asad ke aate hi her old self came out... d way she shouted at him it was so natural at normal meeting yahi hua hota. & than their monologues Asad ki curiosity 2 see her, & Zoya's fear & the insight of her heart... d girl inside her who yet wants 2 b loved it will move anybody's heart 😔...therefore it brings more questions in my head that how can her parents turn their backs 2 their own blood & flesh 😕

It'll b interesting from here 2 see how & where Asya ki destiny will lead them 😊 ... & will her family make a re entry in her life? How will love blossom & Zoya's reactions 2 it... Btw Janna u toh told us some other concept par yahan toh waisa kuch tha hi nahi??... abhi aage ayega ki hume ullu bnaya 😆 😆

Chalo Love u🤗... jaldi isse finish karo taki Peanut ke mumma papa ki rentry ho 😆 😆

upar maine kya comnt kiya I don't know & if doesn't make any sense toh isse bura sapna samjjh ke bhul jana 🤣

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Special RES for Tehs and Jas ...

I love this GIF ❤️ tu kahan se dhundta hai yeh pyare pyare gifs Mayur 😆 meko nahi milte
Khair thanks 4 d res 😃

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Salaam Bano...

This is something serious...

First of All Welcome Backk...Aapi...😊 , I know she is not here yet...but her words are here...and they are enough to fill for her absence...I will get back to the poem later..

Coming to the update...,

Well this was wonderfully written Bano...we can see how sensitively this OS and its topic had be written...

Kudos to you for the topic...and i can say Aapi's influence is their in the words...because this topic somewhat reminds me of Aapi's work...because she used to write on such topics...

And how you adapted this on ASYA is very good...i like how you wrote about Zoya and her life , her struggles and how she is living her life now...Will see how Asad fits into her life now...

And at last the poem...have no words for that..it is just beautiful , kind of it sad also ( which you GUYS Love ) ...

Well written part ApPy...

Continue soonish...😊