AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10) - Page 6

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Aur don Ji ko Janeman ne hike pe kaid krrliya!!

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Kiski Jaaneman Bhai ???😕

Loved the start...waiting for more :-)

Very interesting

interesting story with interesting concept.

Interesting story line...
Would love to read it further

This is so beautifully written!

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Okay so finally unressing

Topic kaafi sensitive hai so...

Concept I loved it 👏

Like totally

Now I am quite eager to know this

N I know you write in a practical and realistic way so hoping for the same

And.its difficult I know

But I love your writing style so having complete faith in you!

And as for the present chapter bohat pyaarra likha hai

Simply beautiful!

I already expressed my views regarding the goons...so I am calm right now 😆

For Asad and Zoya

I cannot compare whose pain is more...

They have suffered more than what they should

..in fact anyone should

Self confidence

Kisika bhi khatam hojae...

Only they know Ki kya satisfaction milti hai unhi

Thankfully Asad went on a straight path...

And he understands

Zoya bacche don't be judgemental..

Acche hai Asad miyaa 😳

The first meeting

Really beautiful

Loved it

MATLAB I don't know.kya bolu

It brought a huge smile on my face...

Lovely!!!

Pura sequence

The poem was so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

Touching.. So heart touching...

And that made your whole content so touching!!!!

Loved it

Awesome

Amazing

So beautiful

Bohat accha laga padhkar

A big all the best for the story!!!!!!!

Mujhe pata hai bohat acchi hogi

Ekdum full on trust hai

Main yeh sab bolrahi hu bcoz there is a reason...

Baadme bolungi

But lovely

Loved the first part

And I guarantee this will have a long run

Fandom hai aapka

N I want u to write on it

Mental Love is still one of my favs

So u will rock here!!!

Take care!!!!!

And I RES for meri jaaneman!! ❤️

Sabki pyaari Suearmaniac

haha thank u so much little darling !! i'm glad u liked it !! 🤗
chalo acha hai kam si kam acha toh laga, i felt ke shayad zyada sensitive topic ho gaya ho 😆
acha hai calm ho nahi toh mujhpe ghussa nikal deti😆
yes this story is about self-confidence and how ur past can reflect on ur present and future

Asad toh kuch zyada hi acha hai


haha Zoya Pataka ka asli chehra dikh gaya by being in Asad's presence😆
poem ka pura credit goes to Badi Aapi 😳
haha thanks a ton for the encouragement 😆
waise kya badmein bolne wali ho ?😆

Originally posted by: sasir

God ..
I am crying..
Really so emotional..
Kudos to zoya's n girls like her n u too .

really ? i tried to not make it too emotional, sorry 😒
yeah these girls have courgae and we can never say bravo enough 👏
thank u dear😳

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow this one touch tht spot

It is such a world out there

Scary at times to know what people can do

And then to have your only love ones turn there back on you

Asad went through this with his sis but he didnt unserstand her pajn at tht time but hopefully now he knows better

And hopefully he can reach outand be there for zoya

Cont soon

people tend to be horrible in this world and this is just a way of their deeds, that innocent people have tu suffer because of them 😡
Asad doesn no better now, but Zoya is not Nikhat either so he can't expect her to react the same way😉
thank u so much Anopama !! i'm glad u liked it 😳