New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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Monali5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Brilliantly written fallen in love with the story ❤️👏

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Alya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Wowww really interesting,i love it 😊continue soon,and please if you can do pm me when update 😊

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Unres on page 2 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hey do PM when u update next

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: MayurChan
I know but kuch religious greetings ko sahi se na bole na toh matlab alag padd jata hai...par aapne phir bhi nhi bataya ki yeh sahi kaha ki galat maine...
Koi chane ke jhad pe nhi Chadha raha hu main...joh hai so hai...Mano ya na Mano...

No...if being completely honest then Asad ka bacha rahe pehle se toh chal jaata hai...par yehi situation agar ulat hoti Zoya ke angle se toh aacha nhi lagta na...so finally dono ki taraf se comment karna pada...😳

Nahi aisa koi secret waali baat bhi nahi hai...

And sentence toh who wala ki " DON'T LET THIS STORY ON HANGING " who grammatically wrong hoga..bas..😃

I hope next part ready hai...😳

Han han baba yeh bilkul sahi likha tha tune😆 don't know if u know d meaning so lo yeh bhi pad lo😉

Sat means "truth", sri is an honorific word and Akaal (or Akal) means "the timeless being, God"; thus the phrase can roughly be translated as "Truth is the ultimate God".

Ok maan lete hun than tareef & Khane ko mna nahi karna chahiye 🤣
acha yeh baat tu badi depth main sochta hai than main toh itna socha bhi nahi tha😆 but mayb i m biased cuz i m writer😳
but yeh sentence hai kaha boht dhunda mila nahi mujhe?😕 & thode boht error ho bhi jata hai na main note direct likhti hun idhar bas updt likha hota hai advance..
Han ready hai but main asmanjas main hun jyada narrative lag raha hai😕 & yeh readers ke tagde response ne dra diya hai mujhe... jinhe i guess lag raha hai Zara ka role boht hoga but maine story Asya ke hisab se plan ki hai... ab kaafi scene's add karne pad rahe hain mujhe Zara ke😕

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -Prinky-
Mera bhi res 😊
unres finally 😊

Kaha se start karu...
Okay so first the Banner...and the title of this story...Amazing !!!!
I was so curious when I saw this Banner and the title coz...i loved this song so much & I was so eager to know what concept you brought for us...
And it was just Amazing !!!!
When I read the start...to laga...okay so AsYa are married...
then the flashback...Zara in the picture and there was another story with Asad's past...and it was totally surprised me...And I like it...something different we got to read...
Now please don't make us wait so long for the next update...
so much eager to read further...continue soon...
Ohh I forgot to mention...Zara is so so cute 😊 and lovely scene with Asya-Zara...😳

awe Thank u Depu🤗
yeah song is very soothing & mesmerizing & Romantic concept se match kiya so i added that😳
I m glad u liked d start & Asya & Zara bas ab hope u'll keep loving it till d end😆
Thank u depu 4 such a sweet response😃
Lots of Love🤗

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
This is so cute!!!
So adorable!!!
Zara is a cutie and the baby picked is as cute
Owh so AsYa are married
N here Zoyas is a guest but different story
N sooo very adorable
I loved that welcome wala scene
Aache se leli Zoya ne sabki
N specially dilshaad k saath isss sooo sweet
And then the whole ZaYa and AsRa scene were sooo cutteee
Loved all the dialogues
Beautiful update
I like the writing style

N banerrr isss sooo very beautiful!!
Cute story
So adorable
Why only a FS?
Thoda lamba stretch kardete !!
Really sweet just like the author??
Loved it
Please updateee sooonishestyyy!!

P.s 30+ to kab me hogae likes...ab update dedo!

Hi Riddhi nice 2 see a new reader😃
Well Welcome 2 my story🤗
& thanks 4 such encouraging response.. I m delighted 2 know u liked d story & concept😊.. hope u keep reading & like it further too...
FS isliye ki 1 fix plot mere mind main hai & i can't strech it too much warna draggy lagega😳

Lol i never noticed abhi dekha seeing ur comnt we have crossed d limit😆

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a
Lo aa gayi main!!! 😃
Hi Jas!! How are you dr??

New story wow!!
AsYa married!
Then Zara n kahani mein aur ek kahani!
Well achikhasi plot banayi tumne!
Zara to kinni cute hai!! Aww!
Great so far!!
Waiting to hear more...

See u on ff thread!😃

OMG Trish u here😃 Its such a pleasant surprise.. Welcum back sweetu🤗
Me fine...u tello... exam finish?

& thank u so much 4 reading it.. i mean kitne din baad ayi & sigha responding on my story.. u made me so happy girl🤗
Hope u like it as much as u liked d start.. keep tab on this FS😉😆

hehe yeah c u on FF thread😃... TC

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: asyakabhidreamy
No words !!!!
It was so beautifully written yar
I really loved it
Woow I'm so happy
Married life of Asya is something I just love to read
Your khichdi really taste so so damn ggood
Update soon pagal don't make us wait more now

Originally posted by: asyakabhidreamy
I'm hereee
😛 😃

Swagat hai ji aapka🤗😆
I m happy u loved my Khichdi Gita😆 don't worry u'll keep getting this dose regularly🤣
waise i didn't knew u'll like it knowing Asad was married b4 but shukar u didn't said anything 4 that😆
thanks 4 response & han i'll updt soonish re😆