New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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Posted: 9 years ago

Helloo Lovely People...🤗

Pehchaan kon??😎...LOL d same lazy writer who is giving updts after so long these days...🤣 but what 2 do things keeps happening in life😳

Khair Hope u all r doing good in ur respective lives😃.. cuz neither i see my frnds here anymore nor d crazy stalkers sigh😔...Looks like they r really busy in other shows😭😡

Without much bak bak let me happily announce that d much awaited FS (hope so😳) has finally landed on this thread🥳...yes yes d lazy me khaao some Taras on readers & finally posted it...🤣

So a warm heartfelt welcome🤗 officialy on this thread🥳 of my brand new story.. Hope u have a wonderful experience cuz honestly seeing such good response made me nervous😳 but i hope u ppl like this new taste of my Khichdi too..😆

Awaiting for ur response this time fearfully☺️...Please don't throw shoes or tomatos😳 phekna hi hai toh🤔...yeah throw some flowers, yummy food or hugs & kisses my way...other than that i won't accept anything😆😆 i m telling u

Chalo now scroll down 2 read no more wait😳

INDEX

Chapter 1 - Below

Chapter 2 - page 15

Chapter 3 - page 26

Chapter 4 - page 33

Chapter 5 -

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~*~ Sab Teraa ~*~

Chapter- 1

A new day starts bringing with it hopes & aspirations of a new day. Sun rose shining brightly in the sky to awake the world. Its beaming rays entered through the net curtains into the bedroom of the owners of Khan Villa.

Zoya stirred in her sleep as the stubborn rays played peeka boo through the curtains of her window trying to wake her up. She softly moaned to be disturbed so early in the morning as she was never a morning person & tried to hid her face in her soft pillow. To her dismay she wasn't able to breathe & lay comfortably in that position.

As she tried to turn around she encountered another problem. A manly hand was securing her waist in his firm hold. She smiled & very carefully turned to face the other side where the man holding her tightly was sleeping soundly. Her smile brightened seeing him sleeping with a smile on his face. His babyish face just won her heart once again. This was a sight to behold which she loves to admire whenever she wakes up first.

Asad frowned a little & Zoya got confused seeing those lines on his forehead suddenly. But soon she understood when Asad pulled her to himself that he was missing her warmth. As their naked bodies came close under the sheets Zoya blushed remembering their last night's shanghaians. It was Asad's Birthday, his first after their marriage & they celebrated it in their own unique way after celebrating with the family.

She hugged Asad & kept admiring his face while her mind went back to the time remembering their love story till now.

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It all started with Zoya's arrival in Khan Villa. Zoya Farooqui was daughter of Zainub Farooqui who was a very close friend of Dilshaad. Zainub's husband died very soon leaving her to raise her two daughter's Zeenat & Zoya alone. Dilshaad was also raising Asad & Najma alone after Rashid betrayed & left them. So this common factor of being single mothers & the struggles that it brought brings Dilshaad & Zainub very close as friends. After some years Zainub left for New York with her daughters to live with her cousin brother.

Zeenat was now happily married to Anwar & Zoya has just finished her studies. And before starting her career Zoya wanted to have a little break before she gets super busy, by visiting her birth place. Zainub contacted Dilshaad who was more than happy to have Zoya Home.

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Thus here it was Zoya in Dilshaad's beautiful Home entering after many years...

-MA Phuphi You have such a lovely house. Zoya said complimenting once again.

After being welcomed by Dilshaad, Najma & Asad all were sitting in the living room where she still couldn't stop admiring the beautifully designed building.

-Thank You beta. But it's your house too so feel at Home. Dilshaad replied affectionately.

-Awe You are so sweet Phuphi.

-Zoya waise aap toh hamein saalon se nahi milin phir aapne humein pehchana kaise? Najma asked curiously.

(By the way Zoya You haven't met us for years so how did u recognize us?)

-Come on Najma it isn't that difficult han. Phuphi toh aaj bhi waise hi hain jaise pehle thin lagta hi nahi ki inse barson baad mil rahi hun. Sachi Phuphi aap toh aaj bhi utni hi young hain. Zoya teased Dilshaad lifting her chin with her hand.

(Come on Najma it isn't that difficult hun. Phuphi still looks the same as she used to be. I don't feel like I m meeting her after many years. Really Phuphi you are still young even today.)

-Chup Badmaash! Dilshaad laughingly scolded her.

-Aur tum mujhe pta tha is ghar main jo sabse cute golu molu si ladki hogi woh meri pyaari si baby Najma hi hogi. Zoya teased Najma knowing she whines a lot about her weight.

(And you I knew that whoever will be the cutest girl in the house that will be my sweet si baby Najma.)

-What say Phuphi yeh abhi tak wahi cute si teen saal ki pyaari si baby nahi lagti.

(What say Phuphi doesn't she still looks as cute & sweet as she was at three years.)

Dilshaad & Asad smiled fondly looking at Najma & Asad caressed her hairs when she pouted.

-Acha chalo maan liya par aapne Bhaijaan ko kaise pehchana?

(Ok I agree but how you recognized Bhaijaan?)

-Hmph...big deal Najma ab mana ki mujhe yahan se gaye satrah saal ho gaye aur mujhe bachpan ka kuch khaas yaad bhi nahi but thoda thoda mujhe yaad hai. Hamesha shaant, serious, ekdum akdu se look dene wala toh iss family main ek hi tha na. Bilkul aise... Zoya hardly tried scrunching her face to create that face.

(now i agree it's been 17 years that i left from here & i don't remember much of my childhood but i do remember a little. There was only one person in this family who always used to stay calm, serious & always giving akdu looks. Like this...)

While she didn't succeeded Asad on the other hand made one easily going all red in anger & embarrassment.

-Yeah just like that. Zoya quickly pointed at his face.

Watching Asad's face both Dilshaad & Najma burst out laughing & Zoya too joined in.

A loud wail from the adjacent room caught everyone's attention. Asad quickly got up & moved towards his room.

Seeing Zoya's confused face Dilshaad informed.

-That's Zara Asad ki beti.

-Oh. I remember Ammi ne btaya tha mujhe. I m really sorry for the lose Phuphi. I know how difficult it must be.

-It was but kya kar sakte hain. Allah ko shayad yahi manzoor tha. Dilshaad said sadly.

-Don't worry Phuphi everything will be alright. Waise ek saal ki ho gayi hogi na?

-No she's just eleven months old it's still a month away but I m sure tab tak tum yahan rahogi to celebrate her first Birthday.

-Ofcourse Phuphi humari little Princess ka Birthday hum dhoom dhaam se mnayenge.

-Bilkul.

-Phuphi can i see her??

-Ofcourse beta. Tum jao woh Asad ke room main hai.

-Okey. I'll be back. Zoya quickly got up & excitedly moved towards Asad's room.

-Najma aao tab tak hum kicthen ka kaam khatam kar lete hain.

-Jee Ammi

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Zoya lightly pushed the door of Asad's room to see an adorable sight. Asad was playing with a cute baby who was lying in the middle of cushions & pink comforter which she probably tossed aside not in a mood to be covered with it.

This is my cute little Zara

At first Zoya didn't wanted to disturb them but then something in her heart tugged her to move forward. As she got closer to the bed Zara's eyes caught her & she stilled. Zoya stood there completely spell bounded getting lost in Zara's innocent eyes which held her captive. She would have stayed like that if she wouldn't have heard Asad's voice.

-Zoya??

-I m sorry Asad woh i just...

-It's Ok she's Zara my daughter. Asad informed smiling at the baby who was playing with his finger.

-Hey babby. Hi ! I m Zoya ur Abbu's friend. It's so nice to meet you.

Asad removed a cushion so that Zoya could sit on the bed & Zara kicked he hands & legs excitedly wanting to be lifted.

-aeek..mmhhh...uuhooo... She answered in her own baby language giving beaming toothless grin.

-Awe..Can I hold her?

-Yeah sure.

Zoya very gently picked up Zara supporting her neck with the back of her right palm while the other rested on her tiny bump.

-You r so beautiful! So cute!

-mmm... Zara cooed looking intently at her face & than smiling goofily.

Zoya kept talking babyishly with her & softly pecking on her face while Zara was being her naughty self. She giggled, shrieked, gurgled, played with Zoya's shirt & entangled fingers in her hairs making Zoya hiss a few times.

While Zoya & Zara was enjoying all the fun Asad kept scolding Zara for pulling Zoya's hair something he considered to be bad behavior. To his dismay neither Zoya nor Zara listened to him. It was like Zara found a crime partner in Zoya & she sensed that she & Zoya are gonna be really fond of each other.

-Zoya Bhaijaan aayiye khana lag gya hai. Najma came to Asad's room to call them for lunch.

-We r coming.

Taking Zara from Zoya's hands both made way outside to the dining table.

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Alright ppl so here's d much awaited 1st part😆...Honestly i didn't wanted 2 post it soon but d excitement & wait u all showed compelled me 2 post it soon.😳 So cheers 2 all u ppl🥳

So yeah this is it & i m sure after reading half of u will b like what's this😲 paani phir gya armaano pe🤣 & u might want 2 run away but i m toota phota writer who is still learning😳 so just cut me some slack😆

now that u r done so please leave back ur reviews in order 2 motivate me so that i give u nxt part more fast than i intend to😆

Ignore errors if any...suggestions & positive criticism always welcomed...

Every1 plz make ur presence in d comnts...Silent readrs toh shy hain so u ppl just leave me likes...main ussi se khush hun😆 Hausla badta hai no. of likes dekhke 🤣 warna frnds ne toh padna chod diya hai

Chalo than see u after 30 likes wid nxt updt😃 & yeah tried 2 give subtitles 4 Anopama let me know dear if u still have any problem understanding 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi frnds

This is d PM id

if u want PM 4 this story u have 2 buddy this acc. only😊

Plz don't send reqsts 2 my real id Jas91 which many readers do

& plz leave ur reviews PM tabhi milenge🤣.

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chholabhatoora

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey,i am new here! seems like there will be a kid in this story,and i love these stories update soon

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Annie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chal me bhaging...U post soon! 🤗

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Mera bhi res 😊

unres finally 😊

Kaha se start karu...

Okay so first the Banner...and the title of this story...Amazing !!!!

I was so curious when I saw this Banner and the title coz...i loved this song so much & I was so eager to know what concept you brought for us...

And it was just Amazing !!!!

When I read the start...to laga...okay so AsYa are married...

then the flashback...Zara in the picture and there was another story with Asad's past...and it was totally surprised me...And I like it...something different we got to read...

Now please don't make us wait so long for the next update...

so much eager to read further...continue soon...

Ohh I forgot to mention...Zara is so so cute 😊 and lovely scene with Asya-Zara...😳

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Daljit Dhami

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Posted: 9 years ago

Story toh baad me ayegi maun toh banner pe fidha ho gayee

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Daljit Dhami

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Posted: 9 years ago

Story toh baad me ayegi main toh banner pe fidha ho gayee

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KAVYA

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Posted: 9 years ago

do pm me...cant wait for it

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Ashii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res

unres

kaan pakad ke sorry bcox i'm late

u know na how much lazy i'm 😆

sab se pehly tight hugs for a new story 🤗

congo shongo bestu 🥳

banner is so nice, and the baby is cute

so asya are married

kya baat hai bestu tu bhi meri tarha morning sessions pe focus karne laga hai 😳 🤣

mujhe sab se zaida aisy scenes hi pasand hain

acha toh asad ka brdy tha and they enjoyed in their way 😉

tu kab se bigad gayi 😆

par yeh kya zara not asya baby 😲

meko yeh cheez no pasand k asad ki kisi or k sath beti hai 😭

i know abhi zoya hi mom but still uski life mai zoya se pehly koi aur 🤢

thank god woh mar chuki hai 😆

i know i'm sounding badtmeez par kya karen asya fever hi aisa hai koi or bardasht nahi hota 😆

acha toh zoya bachpan ki dost hui

abhi india aayi hai or wapis hi nahi gayi

KV ko permanent residence bana liya shaani ne 🤣

overall beautiful update

meko yeh tera new style pasnad aaya 😃

abhi jaldiii se update de de mere se no waiting 😳

lots of love bestu ❤️

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