New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: anopama
Firstly thank u for my translation
Made it easier for me
So thanks
Love the start
So Asya is married
But seems Asad was married previous
And out of thr he is blessed with beautiful Zara
So they grew up together until zoya migrated
And now 17 yrs later she is back
Looking forward to read more
Thanks again for the subs
Cont

Awe i m glad it became easier 4 u😃
Yes they r married & he was married b4 u got that all right👍🏼
Really glad u liked it...thanks 4 reading🤗
will continue soonish

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting..

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
👏 vry interesting start

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Beautiful update
i really like this type of stories

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome start
Zoya and zara bonding cute
Excited for next
Thanx for pm
Plz pm me for next
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Persiko
lovely

Originally posted by: Chillichick
Lovely start!
Continue soon!

Can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Awesome update
Loved the story start

Originally posted by: TheNamesV
Awww this is such a cute start! :) continue soon :)

Originally posted by: sasir
Loved it..
Awesome

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice start dear
Liked Zoya entry scene & especially telling najma how she recognised Asad. Zara & Zoya scene was wonderful. She got a crime partner in Zoya. Waiting for next update soon to see how they fall in love & then marry. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Linsie
Awesome start..
love the banner..
thanks for the pm..
continue soon

Originally posted by: MissSparkling
nice

Thanks a lot all of u 4 reading & leaving ur reviews...really happy wid d positive response...keep reading & motivating me so that i'll keep d updts coming😳

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Replies done😃

A rqst 2 readers plz try 2 unres ur post that u take previously cuz i m confused kisne pda hai & kisne nahi😳😆

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Now ppl who resed but haven't unresed plz do that soon😳

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: jas91

LOL Mayur spelling se zyada feelings matter karti hain so worry not😊😉
Hope u have been well aajkal kahan rehte ho?...never saw u slking any thread 😆
Forum's most Sought after Reader-cum-Writer.. really itna chane ke jhaad pe mat chda bas...theek thaak likh leti hun bas😆😳😆
awe trust me Mayur i'll also have d same reactions otherwise but as i mentioned in d starting note this story was so long in my mind & i just want 2 take it out & share bas isliye likh di...i know it irks but Asya ka Romance bhi hoga na so usse Khush ho jana😳
awe i know u catch d smallest of things Mayur😃😉...& as i know ur secret tu jab tak kuch bhi bolega mujhe tasali hogi ki u r liking it warna kuch nahi bola matlab pasand nahi aaya🤣

I m glad u enjoyed 1st chapter & banner & babies😃...Konsa sentance?😕..i will😊

I know but kuch religious greetings ko sahi se na bole na toh matlab alag padd jata hai...par aapne phir bhi nhi bataya ki yeh sahi kaha ki galat maine...

Koi chane ke jhad pe nhi Chadha raha hu main...joh hai so hai...Mano ya na Mano...

No...if being completely honest then Asad ka bacha rahe pehle se toh chal jaata hai...par yehi situation agar ulat hoti Zoya ke angle se toh aacha nhi lagta na...so finally dono ki taraf se comment karna pada...

Nahi aisa koi secret waali baat bhi nahi hai...

And sentence toh who wala ki " DON'T LET THIS STORY ON HANGING " who grammatically wrong hoga..bas..😃

I hope next part ready hai...

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sapana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

awesome part,
loved it.
banner is so beautiful.
waiting for next part.

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Basanti 🦄

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

This is so cute!!!

So adorable!!!

Zara is a cutie and the baby picked is as cute

Owh so AsYa are married

N here Zoyas is a guest but different story

N sooo very adorable

I loved that welcome wala scene

Aache se leli Zoya ne sabki

N specially dilshaad k saath isss sooo sweet

And then the whole ZaYa and AsRa scene were sooo cutteee

Loved all the dialogues

Beautiful update

I like the writing style

N banerrr isss sooo very beautiful!!

Cute story

So adorable

Why only a FS?

Thoda lamba stretch kardete !!

Really sweet just like the author??

Loved it

Please updateee sooonishestyyy!!

P.s 30+ to kab me hogae likes...ab update dedo!

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Lo aa gayi main!!! 😃

Hi Jas!! How are you dr??

New story wow!!

AsYa married!

Then Zara n kahani mein aur ek kahani!

Well achikhasi plot banayi tumne!

Zara to kinni cute hai!! Aww!

Great so far!!

Waiting to hear more...

See u on ff thread!😃

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asyakabhidreamy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

I'm hereee
😛 😃

Edited by asyakabhidreamy - 9 years ago

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

No words !!!!
It was so beautifully written yar
I really loved it
Woow I'm so happy
Married life of Asya is something I just love to read
Your khichdi really taste so so damn ggood
Update soon pagal don't make us wait more now

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