New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Lovely start!
Continue soon!

Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Firstly thank u for my translation
Made it easier for me
So thanks
Love the start
So Asya is married
But seems Asad was married previous
And out of thr he is blessed with beautiful Zara
So they grew up together until zoya migrated
And now 17 yrs later she is back
Looking forward to read more
Thanks again for the subs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome update
Loved the story start
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awww this is such a cute start! :) continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Nice start dear
Liked Zoya entry scene & especially telling najma how she recognised Asad. Zara & Zoya scene was wonderful. She got a crime partner in Zoya. Waiting for next update soon to see how they fall in love & then marry. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome start..
love the banner..
thanks for the pm..
continue soon




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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Res


unres

kaan pakad ke sorry bcox i'm late

u know na how much lazy i'm 😆

sab se pehly tight hugs for a new story 🤗

congo shongo bestu 🥳

banner is so nice, and the baby is cute

so asya are married

kya baat hai bestu tu bhi meri tarha morning sessions pe focus karne laga hai 😳 🤣

mujhe sab se zaida aisy scenes hi pasand hain

acha toh asad ka brdy tha and they enjoyed in their way 😉

tu kab se bigad gayi 😆

par yeh kya zara not asya baby 😲

meko yeh cheez no pasand k asad ki kisi or k sath beti hai 😭

i know abhi zoya hi mom but still uski life mai zoya se pehly koi aur 🤢

thank god woh mar chuki hai 😆

i know i'm sounding badtmeez par kya karen asya fever hi aisa hai koi or bardasht nahi hota 😆

acha toh zoya bachpan ki dost hui

abhi india aayi hai or wapis hi nahi gayi

KV ko permanent residence bana liya shaani ne 🤣

overall beautiful update

meko yeh tera new style pasnad aaya 😃

abhi jaldiii se update de de mere se no waiting 😳

lots of love bestu ❤️




han han teri laziness door door tak mashoor hai 🤣

han han hugs back tyt wali...soch na 1 manage nahi hotii duji likh daali🤣

i know lovely banner😳

oye story ki demand thi main kya karti puri karni hi padi🤣

I know tera tharki mode on hai kuch waqt se😆

awe i know Bestu but yeh bhi story ki demand hai
🤣 & bachon se kaise bair bache man ke ache😳 just imagine i m saying this 😆 par nahi plot aisa tha islye😉

nahi nahi bol le kisne roka hai😆

Hanji bachpan ke saathi & apni name plate chipka ke hi rahegi Zoya😉

konsa style🤔

han de dungi itna work load mat daal ek saath have some sabr😉

Love u too😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing start to an amazing story
Loved reading it to the core
Especially the different concept of the story
And not to forget the amazing banner is the first attraction to the story
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊



Glad u liked it
Thanks 4 ur lovely response Muskaan😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: raspi

Its such a nyc nd intresting stry just luved it nd plzzz buddy me nd pm me plzzz



Originally posted by: Amina...

WOW !!!
Such A beautiful Story Jas ...!!!
It Was Amazing ...!!!
The Way You Have Written It ... Its AWESOME ...!!!
Loved It Sooo Much ...!!!
Please Continue Soon ...!!!
And Please PM Me Of You Can ...!!!



Thank u 4 ur lovely response dear😃

& 4 getting Pm's u have 2 buddy d PM acc. link is given just below d updt😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: MayurChan

SatSriAkaal Jas...😊 ( I hope maine yeh sahi type kiya hai ...nahi toh muaf kardena 😳)

Coming to the new story...well I am quiet excited to read something more and different from Forum's most Sought after Reader-cum-Writer.....and I must say I am not disappointed at all..👏
This is an amazing concept...well I think present forum and its people are acceptable enough to accept these things even though it still irk me to some extent but yes it is good to read these things...
Coming to the story...well I am intrigued from the start...
EK baat aachi hai...start mein dono saath hai...and end mein bhi like at the end of the chapt...they we together I mean in other circumstances...but still..
Babies and unki photo bahut hee cute hai...👍🏼
Banner is also good...👏
Liked reading this part...
Don't let this story on hanging...yeah whatever joh uss sentence ka correct form hai...😆
Continue sooonish...😃



LOL Mayur spelling se zyada feelings matter karti hain so worry not😊😉
Hope u have been well aajkal kahan rehte ho?...never saw u slking any thread 😆

Forum's most Sought after Reader-cum-Writer.. really itna chane ke jhaad pe mat chda bas...theek thaak likh leti hun bas😆😳😆
awe trust me Mayur i'll also have d same reactions otherwise but as i mentioned in d starting note this story was so long in my mind & i just want 2 take it out & share bas isliye likh di...i know it irks but Asya ka Romance bhi hoga na so usse Khush ho jana😳
awe i know u catch d smallest of things Mayur😃😉...& as i know ur secret tu jab tak kuch bhi bolega mujhe tasali hogi ki u r liking it warna kuch nahi bola matlab pasand nahi aaya🤣

I m glad u enjoyed 1st chapter & banner & babies😃...Konsa sentance?😕..i will😊

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