New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016) - Page 7

Originally posted by: shinta.chinta

Wowww really interesting,i love it 😊continue soon,and please if you can do pm me when update 😊

Originally posted by: Sp8699

Hey do PM when u update next

Originally posted by: jas91

Han han baba yeh bilkul sahi likha tha tune😆 don't know if u know d meaning so lo yeh bhi pad lo😉

Sat means "truth", sri is an honorific word and Akaal (or Akal) means "the timeless being, God"; thus the phrase can roughly be translated as "Truth is the ultimate God".

Ok maan lete hun than tareef & Khane ko mna nahi karna chahiye 🤣
acha yeh baat tu badi depth main sochta hai than main toh itna socha bhi nahi tha😆 but mayb i m biased cuz i m writer😳
but yeh sentence hai kaha boht dhunda mila nahi mujhe?😕 & thode boht error ho bhi jata hai na main note direct likhti hun idhar bas updt likha hota hai advance..
Han ready hai but main asmanjas main hun jyada narrative lag raha hai😕 & yeh readers ke tagde response ne dra diya hai mujhe... jinhe i guess lag raha hai Zara ka role boht hoga but maine story Asya ke hisab se plan ki hai... ab kaafi scene's add karne pad rahe hain mujhe Zara ke😕

And about the story...it is an FS na...pehle jaise story planned hai waise kardo...warna jitna atka ke rakhna haina update...utna alas aayega usey yahan chapne mein...so joh hai woh toh do aap pehle...baki yeh FS jaaake SS bane...koi gal ni jee...😊

Originally posted by: _yash_

it was really nice looking forward do pm me

Originally posted by: Buddhu_Sa_Mann

i love it !!
amazing and interesting

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

Exotic

Beautiful

Excellent

Do pm me further

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Amazing...marvelous...superb!!!

You are a rockstar Jas!!! 😉 ⭐️

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

You didn't fail to impress me...I loved the update a lot!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Haan woh matlab toh Google waalon ne batadiya tha...par phir bhi aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa...

😳

Sahi kaha aapne... dono ko pata nhi...par khane ko toh kabhi nhi...

Mera bas chale toh aisi stories padhoon heee na...jismein aise pehli shaaadi ke track hoo...but then ek time ke baat maturity aati hai...and hum agar Zoya ko aise imagine nhi kar sakte toh yahan ki Ladies Police peeeche padh jayengi...ki Asad karey toh koi ni...and Zoya ne kiya toh bura hoo gaya...😆

Mein apne hee comment ki baat karr raha tha...@pink mein dekho...kahin aur dhoondne ki kya zaroorat thi...hahhaha

And about the story...it is an FS na...pehle jaise story planned hai waise kardo...warna jitna atka ke rakhna haina update...utna alas aayega usey yahan chapne mein...so joh hai woh toh do aap pehle...baki yeh FS jaaake SS bane...koi gal ni jee...😳😊

Take Care.