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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it
Sanam & seher was out of danger
Liked their scene
Zoya heart transplanted
You finished the update with suspense
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
So finally sanam and seher are safe and united with their family and loves
Loved the conversation between sanam and aahil
And the cliffy end of the update is making me eagerly wait for the next one
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww u just had to leave us grasping at straws
Suspense
So sanseh are fine ,zafar is healthy and so is armaan
Zoya got the heart but she is in a comatose state meeting her deceased ones
But hey tells her she is needed more on earth than with them
Love Sahil love and proposal
And sehaan reunion
Aww raziya prays to correct her sins and be a better grandmother than she was a mother
Asad is waiting for his zoya
Aww the letter was so heartbreaking thr she wrote
Qubool hai
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: raspi

It was gud n suspence is too much luved it n tnxxx fr pm

I do love suspense in such situations 😆 You welcome 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
thx 😊 By the way I love the your profile pic 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Loved it
Sanam & seher was out of danger
Liked their scene
Zoya heart transplanted
You finished the update with suspense
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thank you! Every one is finally safe and sound 😉 Suspense is much needed in this case 😳 Will do so! And you welcome!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update
So finally sanam and seher are safe and united with their family and loves
Loved the conversation between sanam and aahil
And the cliffy end of the update is making me eagerly wait for the next one
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you! Aahil and Sanam are finally back together 😆 The cliffhanger is just to tease you a little 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Aww u just had to leave us grasping at straws

Suspense
So sanseh are fine ,zafar is healthy and so is armaan
Zoya got the heart but she is in a comatose state meeting her deceased ones
But hey tells her she is needed more on earth than with them
Love Sahil love and proposal
And sehaan reunion
Aww raziya prays to correct her sins and be a better grandmother than she was a mother
Asad is waiting for his zoya
Aww the letter was so heartbreaking thr she wrote
Qubool hai
Cont

Aww what a long comment yaar!
Zoya conversation with her deceased family was much needed for her to come back because as you realized, she didn't turned the page completely. Their good bye was a way to allow her to move on with her life. As for Sahil, they're finally back together after a looong time 😆 And Sehaan are my OTP after Asya! I was so damn angry when they both got killed 😭 The letter was something I added in the process when I try to think about how Zoya will act on the real place. I tried my best to give them the same mentality as in the show but with little changes too in order to keep it as good as possible 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

~14~

Two weeks later.

Asad brought Zafar to Zoya. She was still weak from the operation but she was awake. When Asad entered the room with the tiny baby in his arms, Zoya smiled.

She had spent 6 whole months thinking that she wouldn't be able to see her baby. And there he was, just few meters away from her.

"Look who has come visiting his loving mother!" Asad exclaimed and Zoya giggled. She extended her arms and Asad put the little Zafar in her arms.

"He's so beautiful!" She sobbed. "He's adorable!" Zoya kissed his forehead lovingly. He had exactly her face apart from his nose which was Asad's.

"I love you Zoya.." Asad said. It seemed like being on the verge of losing his Zoya had given him the strength to tell her how much he loved her.

"Zoya, I have a surprise for you!" He exclaimed and left the room to come back with none other than Zeenat! Unfortunately, Anwar died from a disease 14 years ago..

"Api!" Zoya shouted and Zeenat walked to her and hugged her tightly.

"You should be punished! It's been seventeen years that I'm looking after you and..." Zeenat broke down and Zoya wiped her tears away.

"Api,now everything is okay. We're one big family!" Zoya exclaimed and Zeenat giggled.

They discussed for a while, catching up after so many years apart from each other. Then Sanam and Seher entered the room, both in wheelchairs along with Dilshad.

"Ammi!" They said simultaneously. Zoya smiled at them lovingly.

"Ya Allah! Zoya they're so much like you!"Zeenat gasped and Zoya chuckled.

"The beauty is hereditary in my family!" She joked and Humeira entered the room saying

"If it the case they would have looked like Asad bhaijaan and not you!" Zoya opened her mouth in an o shape.

"How could you betray your sister like this?! Mr Khan!!Will you stay here and let her insult your wife?!" Zoya said faking anger.

"Mrs Khan, you're very beautiful, but I have to admit that I'm more handsome than you." He teased and Zoya looked at him gasping.

"Don't you remember Mr Khan? You always have to say that I'm beautiful no matter what!" She said and Asad chuckled. He kissed her and all the people in the room did puke noises.

"I love you Asad." She said and Sanam and Seher covered each other's eyes.

"Please, no PDA in front of the children!" Dilshad said and they all giggled.

"Let's give more attention to the little prince of Khan family!" Dilshad added and Asad showed his son proudly to Zeenat, Sanam and Seher.

A while later.

Zoya was relaxing in her room, breast feeding the little Zafar when Raziya entered the room.

"Zoya?" She called and Zoya looked at Raziya surprised.

"Tum?" She said and Raziya nodded. She walked to Zoya and held her hand tightly while Zoya furrowed her eyebrows in confusion.

"I know that I may have done a lot of bad things to you in the past and I'm really sorry Zoya. Even though apologising won't bring you back everything you lost by my fault. I've tried to become a best person by saving Seher from the fire 17 years ago. I tried to keep her as close as possible to you when you were in England...

Flash black.

Zoya was in the mall, shopping for clothes for Mr Khan after spending a whole night next to him at hospital. It had been a year already that they were in England. She missed her family so much! Zoya was looking at shirts when a woman bumped into her.

"I'm sorry!" Said Mrs Omarjee. Raziya looked at the scene and took a little Maya in her arms to come near Zoya. Seher was just behind Zoya a few feet away with Mr Omarjee. Raziya wanted Zoya to turn around to see her daughter but when Zoya turned around, some guys came in front of Mr Omarjee and Seher forbidding Zoya from seeing her daughter.

End of flashback.

" My behaviour is unforgivable Zoya and I know that but I hope that you'll forgive me somehow. My future near you, your family and Humzie remains in your hands only Zoya."

A month later.

Zoya had been discharged from hospital from a week now. She was strong enough to go back home, but she had to rest for a while though.

In a week, a party had been prepared to celebrate the birth of Zafar Ahmed Khan. Antara was coming back in India along with her uncle and aunty. On the other hand, Humeira and Haider went back to Dubai along with Raziya after a long argument with Zoya. In fact they weren't able to stay as Altaaf (I changed Humeira's son name) was on his exams' period.

"How are you Zoya?" Dilshad asked as she saw Zoya cooking.

"I'm good ammi. Don't worry!" She said and Dilshad walked to her and kissed her daughter's forehead.

"How can you tell me this when you almost died? I'm your mother Zoya! Losing you is an unbearable thought Zoya."

"I ain't go nowhere ammi! I promise!" Zoya said and hugged Dilshad tightly.

"Seher Ahmed Khan!!" They heard Sanam shouting from the room.

"Can't I eat pizza without being disturbed?" Seher replied. Zoya smiled then went to the room along with Dilshad.

Zoya saw they daughters arguing and cupped their ears.

"Ammi! It hurts!" They said simultaneously.

"What did I tell you already? I don't want you to argue together!" She shouted and both the twins looked at Dilshad for help but their grandmother didn't want to help.

"Ammi! But she's making a mess every where in the room!" Sanam said.

"She can't stop shouting at me for every thing!" Seher protested.

"Stop it you two! Seher stop making this room a mess, just make a mess in your part of the room! As for you Sanam, your sister isn't your slave and you are not the boss! Stop ordering her around!" Zoya said and Dilshad smiled. Allah gave to her children a piece of their own medicine. She remembered quite well when Zoya and Asad were arguing about little matters of life.. Zoya was going to say something when she heard a faint sob.

"Allah miyaan! I've been so busy with the big babies of this house that I forgot the real baby of this house!" She said and ran out of the room to pick up Zafar.

Dilshad had a smile plastered on her face.

"Ya Allah! I don't know what I did to deserve such blessings by having Zoya in my life!" Dilshad said and looked at her grandchildren who were still arguing about some lipstick.. She walked to her room and heard Hayaa and Rahat talking.

"I think it's time to say to ammi that I'm expecting a child jaan.." Hayaa said hugging Rahat from behind.

"You're right Hayaa, I think we can announce it tonight. After all, ammi is recovering well and she will probably be happy to hear about your pregnancy!" Rahat said and Dilshad grinned.

'Hayaa is expecting a baby!' She shouted in her head. She was so much showered with happiness that not even the slightest bit of sadness wouldn't affect her.

~15~

Edited by Asyawriting - 9 years ago

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