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--Aishwarya-- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update!! 👏

Thanks for the pm!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Loved it . Nice family is together at last. Yay.

yup! Now everything is sorted out! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Lovely update!! 👏


Thanks for the pm!! 😊

Thank you! And you welcome!
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Posted: 9 years ago

~15~

Later this day, the Khan family was having dinner specially prepared by Hayaa and her sisters. Hayaa looked at her family lovingly. She was thankful that even if Allah took away her parents, he blessed her with loving parents and four siblings. She laced her fingers with Rahat and then:

"Ammi, Abbu, I need to say something." She spoke softly. Seher listened to her melodious voice and didn't regret in nothing that she had paid her operation.

"Go on Tamatar junior!" Zoya teased and Asad elbowed gently his wife.

"Kya hua?" She asked.

"Mrs Khan, you have to know that she's not only Tamatar junior! She's Asad and Zoya's elder baby too!" They began arguing and Hayaa sighed before standing up.

"Your elder baby is going to have a baby!" She shouted and Asad and Zoya stared at her.

"Baby?" Both Asad and Zoya said simultaneously. While Sanam and Seher were already hugging their sister.

"No, she's expecting a tomato!" Dilshad joked and hit both Asad and Zoya's head softly.

"Of course she's having a baby!" She added and Zoya smiled while Asad grinned.

"Mubarak ho Grandma!" He said to Zoya and she glared at him before smiling.

"Mubarak ho grandpa!" She said. "Allah miyaan! Where is the sweets? She's announcing big news but still she doesn't give us sweets?" Zoya added.

"Ammi!" The three sisters said simultaneously and then giggled.

Zoya leaned against her husband's chest and whispered.

"This is the happiness I was looking for during these past 17 years." She said and Asad kissed her forehead lovingly.

Three days later.

The Khan were out for a diner at Rehaan and Aahil's house. Only Dilshad knew what was going to happen. Neither Asad nor Zoya knew that their daughters were going to be proposed. When they arrived, the house was a bit dark. Then they heard some music.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7utL0h9NC-Q

"Tum Ne Na Jana
Ke Main Deewana
Lekar Aaya Hoon Dil Ka Nazrana
Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na." Rehaan sang. He walked near Seher and kissed the palm of her hand lovingly.

"Tum Ne Na Jana
Ke Main Deewana
Lekar Aaya Hoon Dil Ka Nazrana
Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na." Aahil sang and walked to Sanam. He planted a chaste kiss on her cheek.
"Tum Jo Gumsum Ho To Main Hairan Hoon
Yeh Raaz Kaise Tum Ko Batao" Rehaan sang, dancing slowly with Seher.
"Tum Jo Gumsum Ho To Main Hairan Hoon
Yeh Raaz Kaise Tum Ko Batao" Aahil sang as he spun Sanam around.
"Tum Par Marta Hoon Main Sach Kehta Hoon
Maangke Dekhlo Mujhse Jaan" Rehaan sang as he spun Seher around.

"Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na"Aahil sang as he rocked slowly on the song with Sanam.
"Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na" They sang together kneeling in front of their loved ones.
"Tum Ne Na Jana
Ke Main Deewana
Lekar Aaya Hoon Dil Ka Nazrana
Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na" They sang together and both of them pulled a velvet box which hid a ring.

Zoya rocked Zafar in her arms while smiling at the scene. On the other hand, Asad was looking at the scene with a stern face...

"Mr Khan, today itself, I'm asking once again Seher's hand. I know many misunderstandings led us to this point Seher, but I'm still trying because to me you're more important than oxygen, you fill my life with happiness, you lighten every dark corner in my life. A second without you hurt more than being stabbed by a hundred knives at once! I can't live without you Seher because I love you!" Rehaan said kissing Seher's palm.



"I know that marrying me will be the best gift you've ever offered to me when all I gave to you was pain and I must be the luckiest man alive to be loved by you.. I did love you back in Punjab, I still love you today and I will love you for the rest of my life. Will you make me the luckiest man alive by making me your husband?" Aahil said.

Zoya hid her face in Asad's chest and began sobbing softly. Seher and Sanam ran to her immediately.

"Kya hua ammi?" Seher asked, pulling a strand of hair behind Zoya's ear while Sanam wiped her tears away.

"I just realize how big you've become. That's all.. I don't want my babies to grow up Mr Khan.." She cried and Sanam and Seher smiled knowingly.

"Even when we'll be 50, we'll always be your babies.." Sanam spoke, crying a little.

"Abbu, Ammi, are we allowed to marry the men we love?" Seher asked and Zoya nodded along with Asad.

"I accept to marry you Aahil." Sanam said.

"I'll marry you Rehaan." Seher said and everyone clapped.

"Mubarak ho!" Dilshad congratulated Asad and Zoya.

"Mubarak ho Sanam and Seher." Zoya said hugging her daughters tightly.

"You don't know how difficult you make it for me guys! A father will always want their daughter to be their little princess forever. But today I know that my daughters will be happy with men who love them more than I do.." Asad said smiling with happy tears.

Sanam and Seher hugged their father tightly.

"Just don't forget that I loved you first." He added and Sanam and Seher giggled.

~16~

Edited by Asyawriting - 9 years ago
muskaan17rocks thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww! This was seriously so sweet
I has this smile on my face throughout the update
It was amazing and a treat to read it
So glad to know that the family is happy together
Loved the proposal of rehan and aahil
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
ashlesha2 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
wwooow
lovely one.
mind blowing
interesting
so sweet
u know i liked each and every line.
wooow
famity unity
superv
wooow
sahil sehan marriage
fantastic
the song was romantic
fabulus
tamato tricks were funny and so familiar.

as a whole,
the part was completely excellent
extremely beautiful
so heart touching





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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update
Asya r getting old
One daughter making them grandparents
And the other 2 proposed to be married
Aww love Asad line
Remember I love u first
Cont
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
Haaya as tomato junior was nice
Family was happy to hear the news.
Aahil & Rehan proposed their love & they accepted.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Aww! This was seriously so sweet
I has this smile on my face throughout the update
It was amazing and a treat to read it
So glad to know that the family is happy together
Loved the proposal of rehan and aahil
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Thank you! Dude you're so much like me when I read something I love, I'll smile for a looong time hahha😆😆😆! I'll put a lot of songs in my stories for a while 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

wwooow

lovely one.
mind blowing
interesting
so sweet
u know i liked each and every line.
wooow
famity unity
superv
wooow
sahil sehan marriage
fantastic
the song was romantic
fabulus
tamato tricks were funny and so familiar.

as a whole,
the part was completely excellent
extremely beautiful
so heart touching





Thank you!! I miss Tamatar so much! I wish I had included her in the story but it would have been impossible because in the TV show, she had lost so much blood that it would have been impossible for her to survive while Asya died just before the fire started so if Ayaan was here as in my story, he could have easily save them on time..

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