The colour of devil #thread II [update p29]

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I've finally post the prologue of the second thread of my story A second chance! It's better for you to read the 1st thread to understand a bit this story 😆


#Thread I

Prologue.


Zoya and Asad had gone to the airport to pick up Antara, Sheereen, Ayaan and his family. Zoya didn't tell anything about Antara and neither did she talked about her baby. She wanted to surprise Dilshad.

"Mona bhabhi!" Ayaan said when he saw his sister-in- law.

"Raabart!" Zoya said and hugged him friendly then she knelt down to pick her daughter up.

"Mummy! I've missed you so much!" Antara said.

"I missed you too darling!" Zoya replied.

"And what about me!" Asad said faking to be upset.

"Dada!" Antara said then she ran towards her father. Zoya hugged Sheereen, Kareena and Amitabh. Then they went to Khan villa.

Khan villa.

Zoya and Asad were back to Khan villa with their daughter and Ayaan's family. Zoya entered the house and called for her family. Dilshad and the girls came to meet the family.

"Ammi, girls, I want you to meet someone." She said then Asad entered the house with Antara.

"Ammi, this is your granddaughter, Antara." Asad said and Dilshad walked slowly towards Antara. Antara was a perfect mix of Asad and Zoya, her attitude was all Zoya's though. Sanam, Haaya and Seher walked towards their sister as well, hugging her tightly. When they broke the hug, Antara asked:

"Momma, I want some pizza." Seher smirked before taking her hand and they ran to the kitchen laughing. Then Ayaan, Sheereen, Kareena and Amitabh joined the family. Dilshad had thanked them and especially Ayaan for saving her children. Then Zoya asked to talk to her mothers.

"Actually, I know that we had already a lot of emotional events today but we need to tell you this." Zoya said while Asad held her hand.

"Ammi, Zoya is pregnant." Asad said.

"Oh that's amazing!" Sheereen said.

"Sheereen ammi, you've done everything possible that a mother could do for me. And I will never be thankful enough for that. But I'm asking you if Dilshad ammi can name our future baby as you had named Antara and..Salman.."

"Zoya you have a son?! Where is he?" Dilshad asked excited.

"Ammi, Salman died 7 years ago." Asad said and Dilshad hugged them. She knew already how painful the loss of a child could be.

Maya's pov.



I was taking care of a sick man when I got a call so I picked it up.

"Maya?"

"Kya hua?"

"Your mother is dead. Seher and her family killed her."

"What do you mean Raziya? I had told you to keep an eye on her! She wasn't supposed to find her family!" Maya said.

"I couldn't do anything! Your brother Rehaan told her about Sanam and I had managed to keep her away from Sanam when she came back but they got back together! I was going to kill her but you told me not to do so and now she has killed Tanveer." I sighed angrily. I had to go back to India! I had to destroy Sanam and Seher along with their parents! I knew that I shouldn't have told Asad or Zoya about their daughter but what could I do! They came surprisingly! I couldn't hide the pictures of Seher. But I will surely kill them.



Zoya had taken Haaya with her to a park near the house. Rehaan was waiting for them, not knowing why he had been called there.

"Rehaan." Zoya said and he stood up facing Haaya.

"Rehaan, your mother has done a lot of bad things, you know it already but you have to know something. She has also separated a sister from her brother. Rehaan, Haaya, actually you're both Imran Qureshi's children."

Punjab, India.

Khan family were finally in Punjab. Rahaat had called them to say that him and his family would pick them up. Asad and Zoya were still unaware that their daughter Haaya would marry their nephew Rahaat, plus they never saw Rahaat as he lived with Nikhat and Djamil, her husband, in Canada before he had decided to go back to India while they were going to England.

"Asad, if my son-in-law is late, I think this engagement won't happen as it's bad for the future family-in-law to act like this." Zoya said kidding.

"The bad mother-in-law's act isn't suitable for you Zoya bhabhi." Zoya heard Nikhat's voice behind them and all the family turned around. Antara ran into Nikhat's arms.

"Phuphi!" Nikhat hugged her tightly then she saw Dilshad, Sanam, Seher and Haaya. Her eyes were full of tears when she saw them. She hugged them one by one.

"Sanam, Seher, I'm your phuphi Nikhat. You can come to me each time you'll be tired of your parents fights!" Nikhat teased and Sanam and Seher laughed.

"As for you Haaya, there is no need to say that you have to call me ammi as well!" Nikhat said and Haaya wasn't listening as she was looking at Rahaat with love.

"Nikhat beta, I think Haaya isn't listening to you as she is already imagining her wedding with our little Rahaat." Sheereen said and Haaya blushed as she noticed that they were talking about her.

The family left and Dilshad, Asad, Zoya and their children had stayed over Dilshad's house while Ayaan's family and Sheereen were staying at Rahaat's house.

"Jaan, I'm exhausted!" Zoya said while they entered their room. Asad wrapped his arms around her and put her to bed. He sat at the end of the bed and started massaging her foot. She fell asleep peacefully and he left the room. He sat on the sofa and looked at the photo of Najma on the wall. Tears filled his eyes as he looked at his little sister.


TBC

Chapter 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very interesting start
Loved reading it
Happy to read some happy family time
So maya is tanveer's daughter
Beautiful banner
Seeing it, it seems that soon shad is also going to enter opposite sanam I guess
Just a request,
Don't let sanam just forgive aahil like that
Make him pay for what he has done
Looking forward to the story and the progression of the characters
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was too gud nd a new mayajaal on the way n tnxxx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

A very interesting start
Loved reading it
Happy to read some happy family time
So maya is tanveer's daughter
Beautiful banner
Seeing it, it seems that soon shad is also going to enter opposite sanam I guess
Just a request,
Don't let sanam just forgive aahil like that
Make him pay for what he has done
Looking forward to the story and the progression of the characters
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you 😆 Yup Maya is her daughter 😕 Thank you! I've made this banner in a rush 😳 Yes Shaad will going to enter soon! Sanam will try her best to make Aahil pay but love is so much stronger! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: raspi

this was too gud nd a new mayajaal on the way n tnxxx fr pm

Thank you for reading it! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update
Khan khan dhan reunion
Maya is tanveer's daughter
Haya Rahat gonna get married
Continue soon :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Maya is tanveer daughter. Razia informed her abt tanveer death. Full family reunion was nice. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
Banner was nice
Asyawriting thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajanshul

Beautiful update

Khan khan dhan reunion
Maya is tanveer's daughter
Haya Rahat gonna get married
Continue soon :-))

Thank you! I wanted to create a good plot so yes Maya will be the devil 😆 yup! They'll finally be married!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Maya is tanveer daughter. Razia informed her abt tanveer death. Full family reunion was nice. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
Banner was nice

Thank you! Raziya and Maya will stick up together..😭 Thank you! I enjoyed writing it! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Firstly love the banner
So shaad is also entering story
Omg maya seher friend and roommate is tanveer daughter
So she had a hand in things in India too
So she is set to come for revenge
Love the family reunion
All the happy times
Aww Asad missing his tamatar
Continue soon

P.s how come u give the second thread a new name
Thought it was a different story

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