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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update
Loved reading it
Happy that finally seher is aware of all of maya's evil deeds
Glad to know zoya woke up and asya confrontation was a treat to read
Hopefully sanam and seher would be saved
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon

Thank you! 😆 Everyone will be okay don't worry! I won't give them a second chance to kill them..That would be illogical..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: raspi

it was gud finally zoe woke up nd she needs transplant n hope she will be fyn n tnxxx fr pm

Yup the little warrior is finally up! I hope that I won't deceive you 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice

Aww asad breakdown was so sad
He will give his heart to keep his zoya alive
Maya needs a nasty death like her mother
And maybe the twins along with maya brothers need to punish her
So is razia trying to be good
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Thank you! I have to admit that it's very sad now but soon everything will be okay 😆 Razia is so much like a bipolar freak! First she wanted to help Zoya then she wanted to kill her daughters! 😡 I was so angry with her character that I decided that she will be good for now 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Plz, make others including SaSe also strong
As its really tiring to see only Maya as always stronger physically🥱
Razia seems nice
Hate how SaSe r not able to do anything to Maya being them 2 instead of being alone
Hope to see Maya losing now

Thank you! Your request is so damn cute 😆 It looks like a little girl asking for a gift after being nice 😆😆😆 (Sorry, actually I'm a very weird girl, just deal with it 😃😆) Don't worry! Everything will end good!
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Posted: 9 years ago

~12~

Asad roamed around the house, looking for her but no one was here. He called Dilshad to know if she was there with them but she wasn't. He was looking everywhere when he spotted the piece of paper on the table.

"I've got her..cordially, Billo Rani." He read and realization hit him. Sanam and Seher were trapped into Maya's game.

Asad called the police immediately to press charges against Maya for kidnapping. He then called Rehaan.

"Mr Khan?" Rehaan asked unsure.

"Rehaan, I know that you did nothing to hurt my daughter. Please come to hospital, we'll meet there." Asad said and Rehaan said yes before leaving immediately.

They met at hospital and Dilshad found it odd that Rehaan and Asad were together as they broke all the ties with each other after this damned night.

"Ammi, I need all of you to go with Rehaan and to stay with him. Maya, who is Tanveer's daughter has kidnapped the twins!"

"Ya Allah! Maya is Tanveer's daughter? What will she do to our babies?" Dilshad sobbed.

"Calm down Ammi, everything will be okay. Asad Jeeju will bring our daughters back home safe and sound." Haider said and hugged Dilshad. Then they all left to Rehaan and Aahil's mansion.

On seeing her childhood mansion, Humeira got nostalgic. Dilshad on the other hand remembered all the bad memories she shared with this house. It had witnessed the end of her beloved Rashid, it has witnessed the death of her daughter Najma.. She walked to the bathroom where she found her daughter and touched the floor and she sobbed.

"Najma, you had proved your love for Zoya and Asad a lot of time..Please, don't leave them by themselves! Ya Allah! You gave me the right to see once again my children, please don't forbid them to see their children!"

Aahil looked at Rehaan surprisingly.

"So you're saying that Maya had kidnapped Sanam and Seher?!" Aahil shouted overthrowing a table. "If I had known that this f**king witch was Ammi's daughter!" He shouted and Dilshad ran to him.

"Stop it will you? None of us knew this! Your anger won't bring Sanam and Seher back home." Dilshad said and he broke down, crying on the floor.

"Bhaijaan, please! You need to stay calm! Mr Khan is looking for them." Rehaan said and brought Aahil to his room.

Maya had driven until the doll factory. She threw them on the floor and she laughed.

"You had killed my mother here didn't you? Today you will kill your mother in this doll factory too."

Maya shouted. Then she began sobbing.

"Why on earth did you kill her? She didn't do anything for the past years and you f**king killed my ammi!" She screamed.

"She has destroyed all our family! And I'm happy that we killed her! She didn't have to kill my grandfathers, my aunty...She took us away from our parents! That's all she deserved!" Seher said and Maya hit her.

"Don't touch my sister!" Sanam shouted and she hit Maya. Maya shot at Seher on the leg.

"Ah!" Seher shouted in pain.

"Seher!" Sanam said horrified.

"You try something like this again and next time, she'll be dead!" Maya threatened.

Sanam looked at Seher and muffled a sob.

"Let her go, please Maya!" Sanam pleaded and Seher swallowed hard, thinking about how she had treated her twin sister. The pain she felt due to her leg was nothing compared to the shame she felt for misjudging her.

"Nope..I won't let her go!" Maya said then smirked before taking them back in the car. She drove to the hospital and without being noticed, she entered Zoya's room. Zoya gasped on seeing the three of them.

"Let my daughters go!" She shouted.

"Never in your wildest dreams Mrs Khan!" She said. "Did you thought about the consequences when you made me an orphan? It's time for you to pay."

Maya managed to leave with the three of them and went back to the doll factory.

Zoya was stressing and she knew that soon she'll give birth, she felt it. Maya took a plastic bag and gave it to Sanam. "You're going to choke your mother or else I'll kill Seher." She ordered to Sanam.

"Kill me instead Maya because I won't do anything to harm my mother nor I'll let you kill Seher." Sanam jumped on Maya and they fell on the floor.

"Sanam!" Both Zoya and Seher shouted. Zoya felt some contractions and realized that she was about to give birth!

Sanam was fighting against Maya when she felt some pain on her stomach. Seher wanted to help her sister but her leg, which was badly injured was paining like hell.

Sanam looked at the knife which was deep in her stomach and then she looked at her mother and at Seher.

"Ammi.." She whispered and Maya pushed her out of her.

"Sanam!" Zoya screamed and she wanted to run to her daughters but she was too weak to be able to do so. Maya smirked, walking towards Zoya.

"If you're going to kill my daughters, then kill me first! I won't bear seeing the loves of my life dying!" Zoya sobbed.

Maya raised the knife, not caring about the white halo which appeared on the corner of the room. She was going to stab Zoya but something forbid her from doing so.

"No one will ever kill the daughter of Ghafoor Ahmed Siddiqui!" Mr Siddiqui roared holding Maya's wrist tightly. He held her wrist so tightly that it broke.

Maya winced in pain and as she was trying to take the gun, it went away as Najma pushed it away. Najma grabbed her neck and was strangling her when Gafoor stopped her. "No one will take away my bhabhi and my daughters' happiness! And you have to deal with it!"

"Najma, you're not a murderer. Allah is the one who has the power on its creatures." Gafoor said.

"May Allah make you suffer like you have made suffer my family!" Najma said and as if the Almighty has heard her prayer, an iron bar fell off the roof and skewered Maya's body.Then Najma kissed her nieces and Zoya's forehead.

"Everything will be okay. Bhaijaan will be coming Zoya." Effectively, Asad was on his way along with Raziya and Shaad who had finally discovered Maya's plan.

When they arrived to the doll factory, Asad was horrified on seeing his wife lying unconscious on the floor while Sanam and Seher were bathing in their own blood. As for Maya, who cared for her fate? He immediately called an ambulance for his Zoya and their daughters.

He remembered how Raziya and Shaad came to him, revealing how they helped Maya and how they were now sorry for their bad actions. They said to Asad that Maya was going to kill them were they killed her mother, that's how they found where to go.

The ambulances came and nurses took care of the three women.When they arrived at the hospital, a doctor called Shaad as Sanam was going to give birth.

"Shaad.." Sanam whispered. "Shaad, it's time for us to say goodbye..you'll be an amazing father for our little Armaan, but let me help you on fixing your mistakes.. please tell to the doctors..that I want to give my heart to this woman whom you hurt by helping Maya.."

"You..You know?" Shaad asked.

"I'm not the type of girl you can lie to jaan..I love you Shaad.."She said and a tear felt from his cheek.

"Dont be sad..Please don't be sad.." She said and kissed his hand.

"I love you Sanam.." And then she was rushed to the operation theater.

~13~

Edited by Asyawriting - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sad 1 bt it was amazing n the way sanam n sehar l7v each other is lovely n tnxxx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful chapter
But very emotional
Hope everyone comes out of it safely
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Thank god maya is dead
Zoya and her daughters r saved
Shaad sanam to give her heart to zoya
Hope zoya and baby is fine
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