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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Nice chapter..

Interesting..

Loved brother-sister bonfing

And AsYa interaction.. was very cute..

Do cintinue soon..

Looking forward to read more ...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Liked...

Thank you so much! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: fatima30
Nice story
I'm intrigued
Looking forward to more

Thank you so much sis! 😳

Next update next week. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: enhance

You're welcome bhai.

Okay read the prologue and the first chapter. Amazing prologue, really cute. Asad visiting Zoya at her clinic. His teeth were fine but he came just to see her. And she too was intrigued by him. The chemistry build-up was nicely written.👏

Chapter one, so Zoya is the one who only knows Maaz Bhai's secret 😉 and Maaz seems like a great brother. The other brother is nice too. I hope to see more of this sweet bros-sis relationship in the story. Usually in serials, not much emphasis is given to the sweetness of siblings relations... so enjoyed reading the chapter.😃

Yes, I would like to know about that TEI FF.

👍🏼

Thank you so much for the comment and appreciation sis. 😳 Your words really meant alot. 😊

Hmmm.. AsYa are made for each other but these to stupids always run away without making any confession. Asad is attracted towards Zoya from the first time he saw her (before this story started) and thats why he followed her for something next!

Hmm.. Yup Zoya and Maaz bhai share a very nice bond and are also partners in crime. Zoya knows about his brother's girlfriend and she loves her and accepts her as her bhabhi and want them to live a happy love filled life.

Hmm.. Other (elder) brother Faaz is married and is also nice but ... he doesnt share a nice bond with Zoya, he scolds her at times and cares her rarely. He is influenced by his wife's ideology. (part time villain -to be introduced next..) He thinks Zoya must get married ASAP, simply as go away from home.

Basically the story is all about Zoya and her struggle. Before marriage then after marriage. In the past and for the future.

We will have very cute and emotions filled moments between Zoya and Maaz for a considerable length/

Hmm.. TEI - FF based on YUVLE, its a (verrry) sad one, read only at your risk.

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4491837

Take care god bless you sis! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Like Asya small talks
Zoya became serious after teasing by Faiz. She was angry but her Maaz bhai was there. Looking forward for an update soon. Thanks for pm

Thank you so much! 😳

Hmm.. AsYa small talks will be USP of the FF. The most entertaining one!

hmm.. Yes Zoya was angry after Faaz bhaijaan teased about love, she was ditched by her first love.

Maaz Bhai is a unique character he has all the tonics and candy for Zoya's happiness.

Expect an update next week!

Your welcome. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing start
Beautifully written
Love their first meeting and what asad said to zoya was so cute...
But seems like we are in store to read some dark past
Looking forward to know what it is
Please continue soon😊

Thank you so much sis for the appreciation and comment! 😳

Glad you loved AsYa scene. 😆 Asad is a hero, so his dialogues will always be heart touching..😉.

Hmm.. We have a big dark story running secretly behind the scenes. It will be out soon.. But the question is will Asad and Zoya accept it and move forward and if yes how?

Expect an update next week. Trying to figure out the heat level here. LOL!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: soumya.g
Nice update bhai...
seems like zoya have a great bonding with her bhaijaan ...love their talk...
As usual our messy ms.farooqui falls ...in arms of AAK...mitwa moment ...oh god I missed it so much

I just love it when he said KUBHASOORAT CHEESON KO DAKHI REHNI CHAHIYE...
but zoya have bad experience in love...now she is hating it...but I m sure asad will surely convince her..

So beautifully written ...I m sure this ff is going to be one of my favourite ...u write really well...and u should write more...
thank you so much for the pm...

Thank you so much sis! 😳

Hmm.. Zoya and his bhaijaan has a greatest and cute bond... I love them both after AsYa combo in this FF. After all Maaz is Worlds Best Bhaijaan. 😆

Hahah! Miss. Farooqui is a bubbly and clumsy girl. She has a greatly powerful and attractive charismatic persona as well as a soft heart. She is a modern girl with soberness in her genes. But she is a girl who unknowing falls for AAK all the time. An unknown pull she has for AAK.

AAK is a kind of personality not usually found, he has the best manners and etiquette as well as a soft and pure heart. He is already in love with Miss Zoya but he is bound by some code of conduct of his sober nature. He wants a queen not a princess to be his wife.

Hmm a big thank you sis for the huge amount of appreciation, I hope I can make it up to your favorites mark.

Writing is my part time hobby, I love to express my emotions and feelings with my writings, and this one is on a special request from my IF sis. 😊

(off topic : You can read my other works mentioned in my signature - if you want)

Your welcome. 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: aachal20
amazing ff.love it.love chapter 1.love asad zoya meet and their talks.whats wrong in zoyas life.great bonding between brother and sister.cant wait to read more.update fast.will be waiting.

Thank you so much sis ! 😳

Glad you loved it. 😃

Hmm.. Zoya was ditched and was abused by her first love, she is now feared to love someone again. And hate the word love.

Bro and sis are entertainment ki dukaan! 😆

Haha! sis rahem karo I cant write fast... Update next week... Stay tuned! 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Nice chapter..
Interesting..
Loved brother-sister bonfing
And AsYa interaction.. was very cute..
Do cintinue soon..
Looking forward to read more ...

Thank you so much sis! 😳

Glad you loved it and find it interesting...

hmm.. Will surely continue... Next update -> next week... probably soon (2-4 days)