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Originally posted by: vidhu1

Ohhh well thanks for the PM bro!! 😊 😊
M reading the first asya story solo far!!
Well I should say that ur skills are awesomely fantabulous!! 👍🏼
Idk how u manage of getting a perfect and appealing story line!!
The way you portrayed asya's felling was amazing!!
My fav. Part was the one in stairs!! Their dialogues were solo awesome!!
This is my first experience to the muslmani language!! This is solo beautiful!!
All the dialogues look so great and beautiful in this language!!
The story is just great!! M srslyloving it!!looking forward to other parts
N m happy that u didn't just quit writing!!
Just go on n m make this story the one most awesome asya story!!
Good luck!!
Once again thanks for the PM 😃

Originally posted by: Zehra28

Can u pm me too plz! I love ur ff

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Hello chotu si pyaari si sis! 😳

Hmm.. yup I know.. 😆 I was joking...

I know HTML stuff STML bhi ab dictionary mein add hogaya.. 😉

hmm... to mein 10 saal buddha hoon aapse.. 😃

nope you are not dharthi par boaj, wo to sirf mein hoon... 😛

Wow, please add me to your freezer list... 🤣 and gimme your autograph jaldi!! ...plz plz plz.. 😳

hmmm I know, I will keep quiet, ek dum sui giri chup chap! 🤣

(Thanks for making my day with your comment and bringing a smile on my face. Btw second thanks for reminding me I have to post an update here.) 😆

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

hmm... Your welcome..but no thanks.. PM ke liye koi thanks karte hein..😆

Wow first AsYa story?

Thank you soo much sis for your appreciative comment sis!😳

haha! Maybe its with the style of my writings you feel it appealing...😛

hmmm. Same pinch I too loved writing that staircase part... It was just a quick thought though came out well..

hmm... you mean urdu language...😉I love writing dialogues using it, because it has a touch of reality that's why... I love writing real stories or close to reality scenes.

Oh wow... Glad you loved it... efforts paid off..😃

Next parts will be coming out soon due to over than expected response and positivity here... I its the first time I'm shocked to see this type of feedback..😆

Hmm... I never stopped writing in reality, I couldnt... I was writing a sad story on YuvLe past few days and began writing on AsYa for making my promise. If you like you read my story on YuvLe (sad story) check it in my signature (In Loving Memories). I'm sure you will love that one too... (some 7-8 chapters are up already)

I dont know if I can make this one one of the best AsYa stories, but I promise to write my best and with my heart.

Thanks a ton for best wishes.

Please dont thank me for PMs...😳

Take care and god bless you sis!

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Are buddhe nahi...

Ok, Mr Old man... 😉

Insan dil se jawan hota hai...pata hai khoobsurat ka dialogue hai par koi copyright thodi hai

haha... Even my heart has turn old... hmm to phir meri chotu si pyaari si masum si nanhi si bacchi si sis ke naam par copyright kardete hain, usme kya hai..😆

Freezer ki jagah to gayi...TV chalega??

Oh no.. TV nahi chahiye, Grinder, Blender ya toaster banado... I dont want to be Idiot box. Vacume Cleaner bhi chal sakta hai...🤣

Ab Bhai ko kon autograph deta hai...

Hmm.. Bhai ka haq toh sab se pehle hota hai.. isiliye Plz. my chotu si pyaari si masum si nanhi si bacchi si sis Autograph dedo jaldi! 😛

Acha usko eng me kuch pin drop silence jesa bolts hai na?

hmm right! 😳

Oye hoye update kardiya...me jaing and reading

Yup! jaldi se padhlo, only when you are free. 😃

Phir commenting

ok waiting... 😳

One thing mere na annual fest hai monday, ko to possible hai I may not comment till then...anchors ki practice zyada chalegi to Sorry if I m not able to comment

Oh aisi baat hai.. Your bro can wait, no problem.. 😊 All the Best!

Ek bar free hojau to mast beth k commenting ...

Haha... Ok no problem! 😆

Chalo bye gn take care keep smiling be happy

Bye Take care, good afternoon... 😉 You too my smile buddy! 😃

Chotu so pyari Si masum si nanhi so bacchi

Ridz

Originally posted by: vidhu1

Ohhh ya that's urdu!! Sry!! 😛
Now one thing as I know aap bade ho mujhse toh app mere bhaiya ho!!
Bhaiya aapki story rocks!!
Yuvle story toh mai paka padhungi and one more thing tell me ki Kya koi reply ke liye bhi PM karta hai?


😛

Aapka name Kya hai? 😛
Aur han positivity toh had jagah hoti hai bas negetivity use khatam kar deti hai
Even m shocked by itni +veness i mean yahan par fandom fights nahin hoti kya? 🤣 🤣
Last thing PM ke liye no thanks 😆

Well thanks for your blessings

Originally posted by: priyabarunsobti

hey bhaiyya...

hello my sweetest fangurl sis!😊
nice update... mujhe bahut achi lagi...

thank you sooo much sis! glad you liked it. 😳

asad nd zoya nok jhok wow hilarious...

wow really, hmmm thank god I made you smile! 😃

specially... dis particular sentence i really liked it... kabhi kabhi kisi ka thankq udar hi chod dena chahiye kise pata agli mulaqat mein hissab barabar hojayega...

hmm.. sahi hai na! 😉

i liked it so much... i txtd dis to all my frnds yu knw...

haha! what seriously? 🤣 you will get one liners like this! 😆
Zoyas past i guess will b revealed soon...

hmm.. not that soon , but soon! 😛

all in all wonderful update...

thank you again!

waitng fr d next update...

next update coming week..
lots of love

love you too sis! 🤗 smile karo you dont look good sad!
frm yur fangurl

priyabarunsobti