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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: rhythmsangh
amazing story

Thank you so much. 😳

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1056084

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: enhance
So far I've read the introduction and its fabulous. I'm interested in reading this! You are a very entertaining writer. Glad to see more writing from you.👍🏼 Will continue reading the rest soon. Don't like Afreen, lol!

Hmm thank you so much sis for the comment and appreciation it really meant alot. 😳

Hmm there is no story worth reading without entertainment, emotions, feelings and love. That's why I write something which is worth reading else I don't write at all. 😆

Hmm.. I wrote one more FF on TEI but it's completely sad till now and it's concept is very different,thats why didn't sent you a PM. If you like yo know about it I will be happy to PM future update. 😉

Take your time but don't force yourself... It feels so good people commenting after taking time to read. A big thank you for that.

Even I don't like Afreen, the villain of this story. (Miss. Poisonous) 😆 LOL!

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome and so cute..
loved it..:)

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Nice story
I'm intrigued
Looking forward to more

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enhance

@enhance

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Hmm thank you so much sis for the comment and appreciation it really meant alot. 😳

Hmm there is no story worth reading without entertainment, emotions, feelings and love. That's why I write something which is worth reading else I don't write at all. 😆

Hmm.. I wrote one more FF on TEI but it's completely sad till now and it's concept is very different,thats why didn't sent you a PM. If you like yo know about it I will be happy to PM future update. 😉

Take your time but don't force yourself... It feels so good people commenting after taking time to read. A big thank you for that.

Even I don't like Afreen, the villain of this story. (Miss. Poisonous) 😆 LOL!

You're welcome bhai.

Okay read the prologue and the first chapter. Amazing prologue, really cute. Asad visiting Zoya at her clinic. His teeth were fine but he came just to see her. And she too was intrigued by him. The chemistry build-up was nicely written.👏

Chapter one, so Zoya is the one who only knows Maaz Bhai's secret 😉 and Maaz seems like a great brother. The other brother is nice too. I hope to see more of this sweet bros-sis relationship in the story. Usually in serials, not much emphasis is given to the sweetness of siblings relations... so enjoyed reading the chapter.😃

Yes, I would like to know about that TEI FF.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Nice update
Like Asya small talks
Zoya became serious after teasing by Faiz. She was angry but her Maaz bhai was there. Looking forward for an update soon. Thanks for pm

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Amazing start

Beautifully written

Love their first meeting and what asad said to zoya was so cute...

But seems like we are in store to read some dark past

Looking forward to know what it is

Please continue soon😊

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soumya.g

@soumya.g

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Nice update bhai...
seems like zoya have a great bonding with her bhaijaan ...love their talk...
As usual our messy ms.farooqui falls ...in arms of AAK...mitwa moment ...oh god I missed it so much

I just love it when he said KUBHASOORAT CHEESON KO DAKHI REHNI CHAHIYE...
but zoya have bad experience in love...now she is hating it...but I m sure asad will surely convince her..

So beautifully written ...I m sure this ff is going to be one of my favourite ...u write really well...and u should write more...
thank you so much for the pm...

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aachal20

@aachal20

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

amazing ff.love it.love chapter 1.love asad zoya meet and their talks.whats wrong in zoyas life.great bonding between brother and sister.cant wait to read more.update fast.will be waiting.