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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Thank you so much sis! 😳
Glad you loved it and find it interesting...
hmm.. Will surely continue... Next update -> next week... probably soon (2-4 days)

Waiting😃 to read next..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Waiting😃 to read next..

Hmm.. Sis, was going through some worst time in life. Didn't yet started working on next update of this FF but will try to post by this weekend.

Sorry to keep you hanging.

-MN

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

I was looking forward to read this

But so much Hindi

I don't know what I am reading don't know the language

So I am totally lost

Like when I read the intro was all excited but now I am sad 😭

Wish I t was written in more English

So Asya met seems to know each other guess they work in same building

Can't believe he just let her go

Bang

Love the compliment the poetry very nice

Plz will really appreciate if it is written with more English

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: anopama
I was looking forward to read this
But so much Hindi
I don't know what I am reading don't know the language
So I am totally lost
Like when I read the intro was all excited but now I am sad 😭
Wish I t was written in more English
So Asya met seems to know each other guess they work in same building
Can't believe he just let her go
Bang
Love the compliment the poetry very nice
Plz will really appreciate if it is written with more English

Oops I'm really sorry.

I thought everybody who watch QH know hindi. And I tried my best to show this as much as realistic using their language.

I had to learn this new style just for this. Lol.

You seemed to be completely lost because it's nothing sad there.

Story is goin through the beginning again, I'm showing how they met and started feelings.

Thank you very much for your comment.

I already wrote half of the second Chapter just like this, it's beautiful because of using their language.

the only workaround I can do is add a translation for readers like you.

If possible will add translation lines for first chapter as well and PM you once again.

Greatly sorry to break your expectations.

Will try to cover up soon.

Thanks again,

-MN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Only English version of my first chapter is on Page 7!

See here: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4494780&PID=128254291&#p128254291

Rejoice everyone having trouble reading and / or understanding Hindi/Urdu dialogues.

Thanks a ton, I hope now everybody is happy.

-MN

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Omg

So so appreciate u for doing this

I love it

So doctor farooqui

Aww she is in a hurry her brother is waiting

So asad saves her and then drops her

I believe he is not in eye contact becuz he is hiding his feelings

He may hve shut off but have ha awaken

Aww love his compliment beautiful things have to be hidden

So I guessing mazp is younger bro and faaz is the older one

Aww zoya blackmail keeping ur bhaijaan secret

Love this

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: anopama
Omg
So so appreciate u for doing this
I love it
So doctor farooqui
Aww she is in a hurry her brother is waiting
So asad saves her and then drops her
I believe he is not in eye contact becuz he is hiding his feelings
He may hve shut off but have ha awaken
Aww love his compliment beautiful things have to be hidden
So I guessing mazp is younger bro and faaz is the older one
Aww zoya blackmail keeping ur bhaijaan secret
Love this

Haha! Thank you so much sis! 😳 Glad you loved it. 😃

hmm... Yup Dr. Farooqui.. 😆 her elder brother was waiting for her and troubling her... 😛

Asad saved her then dropped her on the steps. 😆

Yes, he is hiding his feelings its not yet love but more than attraction. 😳

😳 His one liners will be amazing.. look forward for more to come.

Hmm.. Both are elder brothers but Maaz is immediate elder to zoya and Faaz is elder one of both. Actually its like this (Sadia>Faaz>Maaz>Zoya>Maria{decreased}) they are five children in farooqui house.

Zoya is the jolliest and the most emotional of the all.. She loves being pampered, and she is independent girl but spoiled in some sense. Her parents are worried about her marriage. She is not yet recovered from her sister's loss and her past.

Thanks again,

Good news is I will post two versions from now. And second chapter is almost 60% done. Its emotional and constructive one. Hope to post it by tonight or tomorrow.

I'm trying my best I can, hope it will be up to the expectations.

-MN

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago