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Originally posted by: Raingoddess
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Unres ;) :)Sanam tried her best not to let the man touch her, but her attention was drawn to Aahil. He stood perfectly still with his eyes glowing in the dark.Her face paled and knew perhaps what was going to happen. "Control yourself! Don't become what you're not!"His rage versus her calm! The hold she has over him is beautiful! And her wordsSanam led out a dreadful scream. She could not believe what had happened. She could no longer move or breathe."NOOO!!"Horror matched his eyes as he saw the woman he had loved, fall down on the hard ground.I swear I felt Aahil's panic! You are so good at building suspense! 👏 You had my heartbeats racing even though I knew she wasnt going to die! Brilliant ⭐️ Aww, my Love.. Thank you so much for such a big compliment. Hearing you say this has really made me feel proud. I've worked really hard to master these things and the fact that you pin-point it, is overwhelming..Aahil sped up to her lifeless body and placed her head on his lap. Noo! Please no!'He pressed his hand into her wound, trying to stop the red liquid from spreading.Running a gentle hand through her hair, tears began to form in his red eyes. She looked so pale as her eyes were shut. Blood smeared across her lip."Sanam.." His voice cracked.Aww poor Aahil!! 😭😭😭 This part was so descriptive, I could literally see it play out before me! And of course, I heard KV's voice saying "Sanam"! Imagine how sexy he looks at this point! ☺️ But then his pain... 🥺Aahil lifted her body off the ground and growled loud enough to awaken the night and sped as fast as could. It could not be! Not her!'Aahil's love for Sanam melts me and touches my heart each and every time!! ❤️
I'm glad that it touches you every single time. Yay me.. 😆He shook his head trying hard not to give into the lustful red liquid. He almost couldn't control himself!Her blood - he wanted it! Closing his eyes, he took a deep breath .This is Ishq! This is Junoon! This is how pure Aahil's love for Sanam is! ❤️ Hayee, the words of yours made me go into a heavy SaHil Land... Yes, this is their Ishq.. Their Junoon.Sanam inhaled a deep breath, opening her brown eyes as caught a pair of red eyes. Her vision started to blur slightly but she did not feel any pain anymore. It was like she was healed from the painful incident. Yet, she had no strength to stay awake.Darkness began to invade her mind...Omg Sanam has become a vampire! 😲 I dont know whether or not I am ready for the twist (well of course I am 😆) but I do know that I cant wait to read the next part! 😉 So glad your updating tomorrow cuz otherwise I would have bugged you for an update till you did! 😆Mahwash this was perfect as usual! No one can mix suspense with passion the way you do! 👏 This was gorgeous! And I am sure the next update will be as well!! ❤️ Thank you so much for writing this love 🤗Esha.. Reading your reviews is always something I look forward to. Trust me, they are world apart and they always encourage me to keep writing.. Yes, people like us do lose motivation once in a while.. I don't even know how to express myself.. Thank you so very much. 🤗 This is the biggest compliment I have ever gotten for writing in a genre which is new to me. ❤️ You are the best, my beautiful soul.. I'm sending so much love toward your way. :) 😳
Jhanak
