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starlightango

@starlightango

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

very cool updates! that's so much. don't usually read these kings of stories, but hours a great! lots of twists and love the story live. can't wait to read more (hopefully?!😊) thanks again for the fabulous new take.

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NanduVijay

@NanduVijay

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Definitely didn't expect such a twist. Lot of questions are in my mind.
Is Sanam imagining everything? Has Aahil been turned into a vampire post his death?
Please update soon. it's too much suspense.

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Thank you for all your comments. 🤗 I know I have put everyone into a heavy daze where you've got so many questions to ask..

What kind of accident happened to Sanam and Aahil? How is their relationship with each other? Is Aahil really a vampire?? Is Sanam imagining it all? But then again, what about the bite marks from the very first chapter?

OH, I LOVE IT THE SUSPENSE! 😆! ... Sorry.. *Clear throat*

I promise you all everything will be clear in the next two updates, I have lined up. Everything will start to make sense.. I don't want to give away too much, but all I'm going to say is... Sometimes things hit us so hard that we cannot grieve emotionally.. Or can we..? 😉

Esha.. 🤗 I kid no one when I say "twist." I mean business. LOL! I don't know where that came from, I just felt like saying it. Anyway, I was so looking forward to see how you took the shocking update.

I love how you have come up with ideas.. That was totally awesome and you never know you might be right about certain things.. Aahil trying to distant himself from Sanam - could be..
Esha, you're my favorite writer and reader as well. Always so cherished and loved. ❤️

Thank you once again for the encouragement even though the update was a little confusing.. I will hopefully try to update this weekend. 🤗 And just so you all know, the update is NOT to be missed. 😉

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

amazing, what an interesting twist

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innocentangel4u

@innocentangel4u

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

OmG!!! My lips formed a big O' at the end of this!!! 😲 What was that??!! Aahil turned Vampire post-accident...?? And Sanam is suffering from some short-term memory lapse, I s'pose? Wait, I don't even know what I'm saying... 😕

But this part took me to a previous part... Part 3:

It had vanished. The long red scar, which he got exactly a year ago was gone...

Is that the same scar??? I mean did he get it because of the accident?

You have seriously woven an intricate web there... Not many writers are able to handle the flow of their stories like that... You are one talented writer, masha Allah... 👏

But you better clear off that intricate web... 😆 The update is shorter than I'd expected... And I'd even expected a lot more SaHil after the previous chapter...

Nevertheless eagerly waiting for the next part... Don't keep us on tenterhooks... Do update a long long part very soon😊

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: innocentangel4u
OmG!!! My lips formed a big O' at the end of this!!! 😲 What was that??!! Aahil turned Vampire post-accident...?? And Sanam is suffering from some short-term memory lapse, I s'pose? Wait, I don't even know what I'm saying... 😕

But this part took me to a previous part... Part 3:

It had vanished. The long red scar, which he got exactly a year ago was gone...

Is that the same scar??? I mean did he get it because of the accident?

You have seriously woven an intricate web there... Not many writers are able to handle the flow of their stories like that... You are one talented writer, masha Allah... 👏

But you better clear off that intricate web... 😆 The update is shorter than I'd expected... And I'd even expected a lot more SaHil after the previous chapter...

Nevertheless eagerly waiting for the next part... Don't keep us on tenterhooks... Do update a long long part very soon😊

First of all reading your long comments is always a delight for me. And reading the most beautiful and honored comment is so overwhelming. I am truly touched that you think so. 😳 I do try my best. Writing in a genre like sci-fi is not easy, especially when you want to create a certain world for your lovely readers. I must hug you for this one.. 🤗

I must say, you're a very talented reader. 😉 You've got your eye into something which is important to notice. I'm really impressed that you got to put some of the puzzle together.. ⭐️

Don't worry, the next update is something which is not to be missed. It's filled with a lot of things.. 😉 Once again, thank you so very much for the beautiful and thoughtful review. I really appreciate it. ❤️

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Aimer_vous

@Aimer_vous

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Pt6

I love this part more than ever👏

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Am still confused😕
So ahil is dead n all that vampair thing is just her imagination😲
But zain had attacked her😕
God am really going mad continue soon plz😊

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago