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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Res ;)

Unres ;) :)

Sanam tried her best not to let the man touch her, but her attention was drawn to Aahil. He stood perfectly still with his eyes glowing in the dark.

Her face paled and knew perhaps what was going to happen. "Control yourself! Don't become what you're not!"

His rage versus her calm! The hold she has over him is beautiful! And her words

Sanam led out a dreadful scream. She could not believe what had happened. She could no longer move or breathe.

"NOOO!!"

Horror matched his eyes as he saw the woman he had loved, fall down on the hard ground.

I swear I felt Aahil's panic! You are so good at building suspense! 👏 You had my heartbeats racing even though I knew she wasnt going to die! Brilliant ⭐️

Aahil sped up to her lifeless body and placed her head on his lap. Noo! Please no!'

He pressed his hand into her wound, trying to stop the red liquid from spreading.

Running a gentle hand through her hair, tears began to form in his red eyes. She looked so pale as her eyes were shut. Blood smeared across her lip.

"Sanam.." His voice cracked.

Aww poor Aahil!! 😭😭😭 This part was so descriptive, I could literally see it play out before me! And of course, I heard KV's voice saying "Sanam"! Imagine how sexy he looks at this point! ☺️ But then his pain... 🥺

Aahil lifted her body off the ground and growled loud enough to awaken the night and sped as fast as could. It could not be! Not her!'

Aahil's love for Sanam melts me and touches my heart each and every time!! ❤️

He shook his head trying hard not to give into the lustful red liquid. He almost couldn't control himself!

Her blood - he wanted it! Closing his eyes, he took a deep breath .

This is Ishq! This is Junoon! This is how pure Aahil's love for Sanam is! ❤️

Sanam inhaled a deep breath, opening her brown eyes as caught a pair of red eyes. Her vision started to blur slightly but she did not feel any pain anymore. It was like she was healed from the painful incident. Yet, she had no strength to stay awake.

Darkness began to invade her mind...

Omg Sanam has become a vampire! 😲 I dont know whether or not I am ready for the twist (well of course I am 😆) but I do know that I cant wait to read the next part! 😉 So glad your updating tomorrow cuz otherwise I would have bugged you for an update till you did! 😆

Mahwash this was perfect as usual! No one can mix suspense with passion the way you do! 👏 This was gorgeous! And I am sure the next update will be as well!! ❤️ Thank you so much for writing this love 🤗

Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Oooh! Exciting! Can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Sanam, despite what happens after, she suffered the pain of dying. And poor Aahil when he thought he'd lost her, but he found a way. She awakened at the end.

How will she react? Will she change?

Still so many mysteries! You're keeping us in the dark . . . I have so many questions, but I guess that's part of the fun, right?

Update soon!

Edited by darkice7_12 - 10 years ago

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NanduVijay

@NanduVijay

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Thanks for the pm.

Want to know what is the actual problem between Aahil and Zain. Is he jealous of Aahil being powerful?.

Is Aahil going to change Sanam also a vampire?

Continue soon.

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

res for this chapter.

Btw, I have lost track of my comments, I dont think I am even commenting anymore. I am so sorry!

Continue to send in your works to me. I LOVE each and every bit you write sweets!!!!

I am commenting for all past works, present and future works!

You rock!🥳

P.S. Since, I am not really active anymore, and unable to watch the new season, pardon me for any lack of response.

Love

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innocentangel4u

@innocentangel4u

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Woah!! What a thrilling action-packed update Mahu!! 👏 Worth the long wait, I must say 😉

Btw, Sanam still doesn't know his name right?

What about the crazy twist, eh? 😃 Eagerly waiting for your next update... Please do update sooner

And thanks for the PM 😊 I'm glad you remembered to PM me among others

Just 3 days back, I was thinking of asking you when you were gonna update... But then I thought when you had said you'll update at the end of the month, I should take your word for it and wait some more 😆

P.s. Sorry for the late comment... My internet connection died yesterday after I'd typed it 😭

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

hope he can save her, oh no Zain got to her so soon

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Mahu I just read this story and it's amazing. Looks like you went on your own little paranormal fantasy before the shoemakers decided to go there? I love this bold Vampire Aahil! Imagine? Even Sage wanted Aahil to be a Vampire, and now they made the new guy one? Or at least that's the way it looks right now. Anyways, loving the dynamics at play in your story. Hope you write the next kart soon enough! I always love your banners. I don't know how to make one. Great job anyway!

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

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Does he not look hot or what!!!😳

Sanam is so under his spell as he is under hers long before already.

One late evening, Sanam stood staring at Aahil. Brown eyes were fixed on the man. No words were spoken since he had led himself inside.

There was a small hint of irritation and defeat across his sharp features. "You think it was a mistake." She stated.

"Tell me if I'm wrong? Go on and say it."

No response came nor did he even bother to raise his gaze into hers.

Letting her arms fall down by the side of her body, she whispered. "Leave. I want you to leave this damn place!"

This is a touching moment and my heart went weak 😔

So I was thinking, this Abeer is the Nida in here? She will be jealous of Sanam and soon there will be trouble in paradise? I'm very curious how this triangle will play out, if there is one that is?! 😃I love Hamza...😛

This thing called "Aahil vs Zain" is about Zain's jealousy over Aahil's power? This is such a THRILLER!!! Oh, I just can't wait for this "WAR" between these two.

And then they met in a horrible situation. I can imagine how Aahil couldn't get hold of himself anymore. The view of him standing so furious before Zain and Sanam.

"You think it was easy fighting those? They were no real vampires like us, Aahil! I just wanted to see the look on your face when your own words will turn against you."

Shock and horror ran across his face.

"A slow and painful death you say? I'll give it to you."

😲 I was shocked to read this! Could Aahil not recognized or sensed that the others weren't vampires? Oh Aahil, I feel you man!

Zain stabbed Sanam before Aahil?!😲 He has guts I must say. He is so mean 😡. I think he is under estimating Aahil's power and strenght here.

Oh Aahil 😭. I know he's in a shock mode, but why had he not jumped at Zain and fought with him a little bit? He let him go easily. But I guess Zain will pay for it big time. I jus can't wait for their next encounter! THRILLING!!!

He shook his head trying hard not to give into the lustful red liquid. He almost couldn't control himself!

Her blood - he wanted it! Closing his eyes, he took a deep breath .

After a short moment, he placed his hand on the hard bed as his eyes were fixed on her breathing.

This is making me so proud of Aahil. His love for Sanam is bigger than his thirst for blood.

Sanam inhaled a deep breath, opening her brown eyes as caught a pair of red eyes.

You know, I was so happy that the first thing she saw was HIM. He was there by her side. It was kind of so romantic. ☺️ Don't get me wrong, I know she's in pain and he's hurting too 😆

He he, finally got a chance to post my comment 😆

Beautiful and awesome chapter 👏

Thanks for the pm!

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Loved the tale!

Read in one go...

Awesome

I guess the twist will be that even sanam will become a vampire or something

Looking forward to the story

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Thank you for reading, liking and reviewing. I will be updating the next part Tomorrow. So stay tuned for another thrilling update coming your way. 😉

Muskaan17rocks: Thank you so much for the comment! I'm so touched how you're enjoying the dynamic in the story. Let's see what the next part brings.. Once again, thank you for showing all the love to this story.

Shailu123:Thank you, dear! I'm glad you're enjoying the part to the fullest.

Kabhibloom:Aww.. Thank you. Trust me, I myself, enjoy writing these thrilling parts between the two men.

Pagalpinky:Thank you for leaving a comment. I guess we have to wait and see what happens.. How will Sanam really react? Stay tuned, Lovely.

Siyasharma94:Thank you so much.

LoveSonu2408: I know!! So sorry for keeping you all waiting - but I am glad reading all these heartwarming reviews. They are totally worth reading after spending countless hours of writing.

Darkice7_12: Thank you, Lovely! Reading your name among the comments always manages to bring a smile on my face - Feel so honored. I know, I am keeping a lot of things in the dark, but everything shall soon come out in the open.. Stay tuned and keep loving and leaving such beautiful comments.

NanduVijay: Thank you for reading and commenting. There is a evident tension between the two men. Keep reading..

Najma123: First of all, I need to hug you.. Sweetie, I am so happy to hear from you after such a long time. I really feel honed by how much you adore my work. I will keep sending you PM's and I just hope you'll continue to read.

Nilusoni:Thank you.

Innocentangel4u: Thank you, sweetie. Aww, I am so happy that you could wait the long wait. I've got to say, you have observed well - Sanam does still not know his name.. Why is that? Anyway, I'm happy to know that you enjoyed the thrilling update.

Adventure_gurl:Thank you for reading. Stay tuned and maybe you'll get your answers..

MrDarcyfan: It's always a delight to read your name among the reviews. I had this big smile across my face for I don't know how long. Mandy, your review was the best thing ever. You know what, I think I need to give credit to The SaHil Heaven for making me think sci-fi.. I absolutely LOVE writing this! It's the best thing ever happened to me. Really!

Sahil333: Whoa.. What a review! First of all, I am so happy that your net is now functioning. 😆 I love you for this! You have no idea how touched I am by reading such a long comment. Reviews like these makes a writer keep writing. KV always looks hot, doesn't he...

Oh, I like the thinking about Abeer being compared to Nida.. Hmm.. Interesting thought indeed. I am so in love with writing this story. It's such a thrill for me too..

*sigh* Aahil could not sense anything as his mind and focus was put on only one person... The movement caught him off guard. Let's see what Aahil does in the upcoming chapters.. I totally get what you mean by the last part.. 😆 Even I thought it was romantic. I LOVE how you have put quotes from the story. Always delight to see what the readers favorite parts are.

Manyata5: Thank you so much, Lovely. I'm touched you're enjoying the thrilling tale.

Edited by mahwash22 - 10 years ago