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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

I'm not a fan of vampire stories
But one with sanam ahil and written by you, gotta read
It's so creative and intense
It's like I can hear him breathing on her through your writing and see him staring at her so intensely
Great job
Excited for next part
Please pm
Please update
Thanks

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awesome n Wonderful chapter🤗
Loved it. 🤗
Such an intense n passionate story.
I always like supernatural story.
Curious about ahil's past.
Sanam marked ahil as her n healed his broken soul.
Continue soon🤗

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

wow! Superb update..
Sahil marked eachother for always..there love is so passionate..
Wating for ahil's past to unfold..
Continue soon
thanks for pm

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom
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khushbo maine socha first place pe mai rahungi par tune baazi maar li

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Wow awesome n hwwt update ahil is damn sexy its getting interesting plz continue soon😊

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

👏☺️

A very HOT, SEXY & Delicious chapter.

So romantic and dangerous.

We got a little glimpse of his past. I'm so curious about that.

"No one had ever marked him ever since that night when hell broke loose."

I really want to know what happened that night! I didn't miss this in the previous chapters right?

"I want to mark you. You marked me, now I want to do the same." This is... ahemmm

And the time they took to become one...aargh!!!! HOT, SEXY & Delicious!!! ☺️

The concern for each other, so touching.

"The long red scar, which he got exactly a year ago was gone..."

This has a connection with that night when hell broke loose right?

"He was much more than the blood-sucking creature he was. Sanam had healed his brokenness. She had marked his heart with her love. The mark was there to stay. It was not going to vanish anytime soon."

Oh so dreamy... ..Thank you Sanam for healing him!

Really curious what made him a broken man.

I need to read this story all over again. I think I forgot some things.

My heart is so happy right now.

TQ for this beautiful update.

TQ for the pm!

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

all i can say is...wow!
amazing update

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Amazing chapter

so full of passion and intensity

loved reading it

can't wait for the next update

please continue soon 😊

p.s. i tried not to be hyper this time😉

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

khushbo maine socha first place pe mai rahungi par tune baazi maar li

🤣🤣🤣

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

What a pleasant surprise I got in my mailbox today
An update!

This was amazing
I didn't realize talking would lead to this and then that.
It was amazing
So well described but not too detailed so it's xrated
Great writing
Great update

And the wound gone
Lovely

Thanks!!

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