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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Ths updt is all abt feel,passoin,intense,hot
Jo hona hai wo hoga chahe jitna try karle rokne ki
sahil made lv.his little gestures & his beautiful bold sanam.
Totally lv the updt.&as i hv a special crush on vampires...& agar wo ahil ho...
Ab to yehi ek zaria hai sahil ko yaad karne ki..;-(
beautiful updt mahu,cntinu soon.thnks 4 pm.

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Super cool it was...

Awesome concept...

Supernatural themes r my favorite...

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story...

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sarra

@sara7iris

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

omg omg omg thank you so much for this story
this is awesome .amazing and interesting and different I have fallen in love with this story
today update was hot and passionate..
Sanam marked ahil with her love and he didn't expected that
ahil past make him cold I can't wait to know his past and his family history ...I think this clan is responsible for his change into a dark man
I can't wait to read more from you ...pls update soon

Edited by sara7iris - 10 years ago

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

This was so hot ☺️ And so necessary 🤗Thank u so much for writing this! It makes the pain feel a little less! I will def read it again when I am feeling less sad ❤️ But I was certainly transported to another world while reading this, forgetting all about QH! Mahwash, please keep writing and updating, for SaHil and SaHil fans!!

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Beautiful update! Loved the passion between the two and how sure this Sanam is of her need for him. Also, love how he calls her Jaan. I know in the show he called her that when they were pretending, but was there every a moment when he said it sincerely and she knew? Can't remember, but can totally imagine him saying it in that half smirky/half sincere way. 👍🏼

Can't wait to read more about Aahil and his past. Who has hurt him?

Who is Sanam? What is her everyday role?

How did the two chance upon each other in that first chapter?

Don't keep us in suspense. Update soon!

Edited by darkice7_12 - 10 years ago

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Tina Saigal

@TIA.Tia

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

First of all sorry for the late reply an thank you so much for the PM of the update.. I'm absolutely in love with this story.. So Aahil can read Sanam's thoughts.. The convo. between the two was so subtly sensual that it made me blush..😳

So Zain is he trying to be the bad guy or just protecting Aahil from something unknown which he thinks can harm Aahil..😕 Watever the reason may be I hope he stays away from Aahil and Sanam's love story..

Aahil wanting to fulfill Sanam's hidden desires.. Awww So many feels...Feeling hot.

The bite mark on Sana's neck given by Aahil..*Swoon* * Thud* 🤢

Edited by TIA.Tia - 10 years ago

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Tina Saigal

@TIA.Tia

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Sanam asking Aahil "Did I break you?" nd Aahil respnding "Yes" was such an Awww Moment for me.. Wow the passionate love the kiss, and the feel of each others skin and the passion to give into each other's undeniable and undying love and the confidence Sanam has on Aahil of not ever trying to hurt her and Sanam mending his broken soul and healing her eternal wounds.. It just gave me a rush and made me feel little kinky.. Such a superb update. The plus point of reading the second chapter so lat s that I go to read the third chapter along with that and now I'm on the edge to find that what's gonna happen further.. No gonna pressurize you to update fast and all.. But please have some pity n us poor readers and don't levy so much of hotness on us.. I don't know about others.. But I can't handle so much of heat.

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Thanks a ton for the wonderful feedback, Lovelies. Each and every one is being so appreciated. It really warms the heart - especially that this is a whole different genre for me to write in. Feeling so happy that you guys loved it. ❤️

It really brought a smile on my lips after being sad about SaHil's fate on the show. Writing is my way to deal with the emotions I might have after watching something I don't like. 😳

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!...

I will try to update as soon as I can. (Don't worry, I will show mercy on my lovely readers.) ❤️

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sarra

@sara7iris

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

thanks for the PM

res
I will read and after I will comment

unres

amazing and awesome update I love it
something is coming and everyone is wide-awake about that
why everyone is talking about ahil anger and why they want him to controle that ?
This zain want created problem for ahil in the clan
I like the part ahil and hamza convo it was really intense ...
hamza he have a very horrible past
I can't wait to read more from you
PLs update when you have time

Edited by sara7iris - 10 years ago