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Posted: 9 years ago
Can't wait to read next part full of action.Never thought u will make sanam vampire 😲 Loved sahil conversation.They are really cute together
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Posted: 9 years ago

I really can't tell you how much I had been waiting for this!!! For Sanam to transform! And this line got me so thrilled: "...Sanam will become one of us and I will bring an end to it once and for all." 😊

The conversation between Aahil & his father is so deep & intense... I love how Aahil is able to see through all the plans of his enemies & get a clear picture of it all in spite of having a lesser experience than his elders... And yaayyy!!! Nazeera is again with him 👍🏼

Then SaHil moments... amazing as usual... Sanam so determined, & Aahil so protective of her ❤️

And then... my most awaited part... The transformation!! Wow... You've described it sooo well... 👏


"Know you are never alone."..."I never was." Hayyeee


"Do you want us to clap after delivering such a horrible speech?" A deep voice emerged from behind the huge crowd. Moving aside, Aahil appeared in his full glory.... ARI is sooo witty 😆


"I can feel a sense of fear.." She suddenly spoke with her gentle voice. Crimson eyes landed on her in pure surprise.

She opened her eyes and glanced around, finally resting her gaze on opposite leader. She took a step forward without any second thought. "You are afraid."

So Sanam can sense others' emotions?? Interesting power you've given her

"...Why don't you just take your little party and get the hell out from here!..." 🥳 😆

"I choose you. I choose The Clan. I choose us." She said stepping in front of him and into his embrace.

Aahil understood what she meant. Wrapping his strong arms around her, he whispered. "I'll do anything to protect you. Come what may, I'll do anything to win over destiny."

So of course, thrilling update this was... Enjoyed it... But you say the next chapter will be action-packed?? Oooh!!! Seems like a war is about to happen between The Clan & The Brotherhood!!

Update soon Lovely 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
The chapter was definitely very intriguing
I can't help but read this chapter again and again
Thrice in short
The clan discussion was a treat to read
Looking forward to the next action-packed update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally got a chance to read this in peace! Great job. 👍🏼

The uncertainty and turmoil these two feel over the decision to turn Sanam was perfectly done. He loves her so much that he couldn't let her go, even when letting her go meant keeping her safe. 👏 You drew Aahil beautifully with your words. And how Aahil has a supporter in his grandmother, was also great.

It's getting exciting with the enemy now out in the open. Can't wait to read what happens next. Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
So now sanam is also an vampire wow
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Nilusoni, MysticRiver, Adventure_gurl, Shailu123 & Jazz2010: Thank you so much, guys! I appreciate for the read and comment. 🤗


Muskaan17rocks:
Thank you so much, Lovely. As always, you have brought a smile on my face. I am most excited for the fact that I maintain my readers at the edge of their seats. Wohoo.. I'm glad you enjoyed the unexpected turn of the chapter. More to come.. Stay tuned. ❤️


Lovesonu2408:
I know, right. I guess, I did make you all shocked by the transformation. I absolutely LOVE My Aahil in this story. He is everything what I wanted him to be. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Stay tuned for the next chapter. Oh, and I hope you had a great Diwali. 🤗


Sahil333: I have to say, how awesome you are!!! Honestly, reading your long review is the best thing ever! And those favorite spots, are almost the same as mine too. I am humbled. Thank you so much for all the love. Writing the section between Aahil and his father is something I enjoy very much. I love the dynamic between them. I am glad you're liking Nazeera.. She is an important figure in the story.

I remember how you guys talked about the show Arrow. I've seen a few seasons.. It's a good show and as you said, I can tell the similarities you're drawing between him and Aahil. They both are vulnerable and afraid to hurt their loved one. *sigh* Such brave characters who sees love conquers everything.

Hmm, let's see how Sanam is the upcoming chapter.. Thank you once again, for all the love. You are a truly an amazing and observant reader. ❤️

Tazzz: Thank you for the comment. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter, more specially the transformation. I had a great fun writing the part. Stay tuned for the next one..


Onlysahil:
Thank you. Seems like I have shocked everything about Sanam. - but trust me, it's clever move.. You'll see on the next chapter. I am glad how you loved SaHil's conversation. They really do complete one another. 🤗


Innocentangel4u:
After reading your PM, I was so touched and motivated. I kept smiling for like sooo long. Then I came across your review and I knew the smile would not vanish.

I am glad you enjoyed all the different moments in the chapter. Oh yes, Aahil is very witty and on control. Hmm, you'll see more about Sanam's power.. Thank you once again, Lovely. I am happy you are enjoying the story. It means a lot. ❤️


Manyata5:
Thank you for the love. I am so glad you are enjoying the thrill. As I said, the next chapter is something you all have to wait and read. 🤗

Darkice7_12: I am so humbled you loved the chapter. Phew.. So relieved to read that the whole transformation was received well. Aahil is an intense and protective man who will do anything to keep Sanam safe. Stay tuned for the thrilling chapter. ❤️

Edited by mahwash22 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
She's now a vampire... Thankfully they'll now be together for eternity😆. Thank u @mahwash22.. This is a much needed respite from the horrible storyline of the show.. Please PM me whenever you write anything new on SaHil?😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovesahil

She's now a vampire... Thankfully they'll now be together for eternity😆. Thank u @mahwash22.. This is a much needed respite from the horrible storyline of the show.. Please PM me whenever you write anything new on SaHil?😳


Thank you, Darling. 🤗 I'm glad you liked the change in Sanam. Well... Let's see what the next chapter brings. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
a very beautiful updt.i m speechless..
1st part was intense passonate full of love..
&thn 2nd part was full of agony,frustration..
ahil's word was so harsh bt sanam manage tht well.
raza died.
i m jst spellbound how cn u write so well with full of emotion.
ilove the updt.bt nxt chap will b lst one..hhmph!
thnks 4 pm.cnt soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful as always
U always manage to make me speechless with such flawless work
Firstly thanks for the treat of such a long chapter
The first part was definitely so full of love between our precious sahil
The second part was their dark world. Although aahil's words were really very hurtful but loved how sanam managed to calm him down
Raza's death came as a shocker
And the story of aahil's grandparents was so sweet
I never have said before but i just love your banners. They actually give a beautiful effect to the chapter
I really have goosebumps after reading this chapter
Next chapter the last one😭
Will misa this story a lot
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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