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Mahu34 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Noesha - Thank you so much for reading and commenting. 😊

NanduVijay - Aww. I seriously have no words to respond. You're a such a wonderful reader yourself. I'm very humbled that I manage to surprise you with each new chapter. Even I enjoyed writing the lines in Sanam's book. I have to be honest, those are very personal lines which had written in one of my old diaries. So I thought it was well fitted to use. 😳 Yes, the proposal was a flashback and happened before their marriage.. Stay tuned and I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter the same way.


Sahil333
- Thank you, Lovely. 🤗 I'm so honored that you're enjoying the thrill of the story. Oh, you just stay tuned for the next ones. A lot of things are coming up..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh it ws so damn awesome..
This vampire thing is consuming me so welll...
Cont soon please
And try 'Saving Grace' by Julie Garwod
I am sure you'll like it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Manyata5

Oh it ws so damn awesome..

This vampire thing is consuming me so welll...
Cont soon please
And try 'Saving Grace' by Julie Garwod
I am sure you'll like it


Thank you so much, Lovely. I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. Oh, a new book.. I'm def going to give it a try.. 👍🏼
I hope you'll stay tuned for the next chapter. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
A new update with a new surprise
I must say u very well know how to keep your readers at the edge of their seats
Flawless update
Sanam's transformation was really the unexpected turn in thw chapter
The chapter was definitely very intriguing
I can't help but read this chapter again and again
The clan discussion was a treat to read
Looking forward to the next action-packed update
Please don't make us wait too long
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!i m jst surprised...
a big surprise-sanam transformed.i doubted tht bt never expected tht.
Ahi-what can i say...his every move,action i jst lv it..
clan argument always intersting..
i jst love the whole piece..sahil r togethr nw...
nothng is dengerous whn thy bothr togethr...
mindblowing chap...nw waiting for nxt action pack chap.
updt soon.thnks 4 pm..
wish u had a happy diwali...
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahwash22


Thank you so much, Lovely. I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. Oh, a new book.. I'm def going to give it a try.. 👍🏼
I hope you'll stay tuned for the next chapter. <3


There's a story on this forum based on "saving grace" written on Asad-Zoya Pairing

Must Read ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Gosh, this chapter is so marvelous 👏

Very SaHilicious and I'm loving it so much!

Always love the interaction between father & son. You know, the things they agree or disagree with 😛
I like the appearance of Nazeera, she's a very strong woman...


"Tell me this, Abu... If the thirst of power is so consuming that you no longer see the thin line between right and wrong - then what do you have left? A man, who was capable of joining the other side, in other words, burying a woman under the ground, hunt the second leader of the very same Clan he is member of and cause a havoc... If he can do all this right in front of our beings, think what his next move might have been?"

Aahil is so right about this, especially in blue!


"I have a good reason to do so. It's too dangerous to let you close inside."

"It's too dangerous."

This reminds me of Oliver and Felicity of the show Arrow. He didn't want her to come close near him, just to keep her out from danger. Thankfully they are a couple now, coz their love for each other is bigger than all the other stuff surrounding them. At KVB-AT, Prags came up with the show Arrow. I had stopped watching it, but these past days I'm you tubing segments/videos about Olicity like crazy.😆 Sadly I still can't find full episodes online yet 😔. Crazy Olicity fans are posting segments of episodes and awesome collages of them. Please excuse me for going overboard with this 😳


In once swift motion, Aahil sunk his sharp fangs into her skin.

Wow!!! 😲 That was sudden, didn't expect that so soon?😆 What a painful transformation she went through!

Happy she's one of them now and I hope she will be of great help for him during the war. Will she own special powers because of Aahil and that because it was HIM who transformed her? She's THE Chosen One right?!!!


Sikander, Oh gosh... another arrogant prick! Full of envy and jealousy.

"Do you want us to clap after delivering such a horrible speech?" A deep voice emerged from behind the huge crowd. Moving aside, Aahil appeared in his full glory. Crimson eyes glowing in the dark. Although he didn't arrive alone. He took a step aside, revealing his wife standing behind him. No fear or confusion appeared on her delicate face.

"And the true Emperor arrives."

A calm expression ceased across Aahil's face as he wasn't even bothered by him at all.

"You know.. Zain had the same exact look on his face, - envy and jealousy.. It can be a dangerous combination, so you should be careful.. You never know where it might bring you.."


Hi-5 for Aahil 👏. So glad he brought Sanam with him.


"I can feel a sense of fear.." She suddenly spoke with her gentle voice. Crimson eyes landed on her in pure surprise.

She opened her eyes and glanced around, finally resting her gaze on opposite leader. She took a step forward without any second thought. "You are afraid."

Whow Sanam, you go girl, be a bad ass!!!😆...Please, make her a Bad Ass Mahu...


Aahil took a step forward recognizing the man from the shadows that night. He gritted his teeth. "I should have known. You were there to manipulate me, but you forgot who you're up against."

So Sikander is the life observer? I thought he would had a positive impact in the story. Ah well...he will go dowm for sure!


"I choose you. I choose The Clan. I choose us." She said stepping in front of him and into his embrace.

Aahil understood what she meant. Wrapping his strong arms around her, he whispered. "I'll do anything to protect you. Come what may, I'll do anything to win over destiny."

Again, this brings me back to Olicity 😉...Oliver had already saved Felicity life a couple of times already and that was before they were a couple. And finally he has chosen her.


Next chapter is action packed you say?!. I just can't wait for the update then.

TQ for the pm!

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Posted: 10 years ago
love the update so sanam transformed
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Posted: 10 years ago
whoa this was amazing! i did not expect sanam to transform! i thought aahil might become human but seriously... wow! all this happened so fast. it was another amazing chapter 😆 👏
⭐️ ❤️
will be waiting for the next update... thanks for the PM by the way 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter
Sanam loves ahil a lot and vice versa
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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