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You Can Throw Your Words, Sharper Than a Knife 👏

SaHil are amazing as usual... their intense sizzling chemistry... how they complete each other... as you always say 😊 ❤️

And such a beautiful scenario you've described there, before they go to The Clan resident: "Time to let the world to know who runs the show." Aahil said taking a long look down the dark hill where trees surrounded the place. 👏

Sanam stood beside him clad in pure black. Glancing beside her, she saw him matching the same color with a simple red line across his shirt at the buttons. Aah that's the shirt in the banner, eh?

Aahil is so concerned about the well-being of his people... Junaid's wound was either ways the final nail on the coffin... first that Zain, then Sikander 😡... And Aahil knows his father too well: Aahil took a glance at his father and wondered why he hadn't said anything yet.
"You're not going to stop me? Tell me not to go ahead with it?" 😲

Wow!! You really meant it when you'd said action-packed'!! 👏 I loved Sanam's fight with that Sikander... And Nazeera too was there to help... but finally Raza Ibrahim had to pay for it... Aahil is sooo broken there... with all those feelings of guilt... Such intense emotions you've portrayed...He was not ready to mourn his father's death one more time. 😭

Aahil tries to push Sanam away... but she retaliates with double the love & understanding 👍🏼 ❤️ ... Because it was never about being perfect, but to embrace the flaws. And you've written amazing lines for them too 👏 ... Aahil was really really harsh here: "What are you going to do, Jaan? Seduce me and cast one of your love spells? Because frankly, it's all you do right? To provide pleasure whenever I need it or whenever you crave it.. And to be honest, you've done a fairly good job at it too."

Sanam handled him only too well with that fake talk of "I wish to leave him. I want my freedom back." 😉

Nazeera & Aftab... their love story is too cute... with the emerald ring... Actually I'm lost for words... don't know what to say... too overwhelmed... It was like watching a movie... And it totally explains why it took you so long to get the right kind of flow to it. ... It's turned out to be perfect as always... Loved reading it... And you say The next update is going to be the very last chapter of the story.'?? 😭 But please do continue with something different... The SaHilians on the forum have already become so inactive nowadays... And there is a dearth of SaHil stories too... So YOU really need to continue writing, my dear lovely writer 🤗

Lovesonu2408:

Aww, you're making me speechless by your perfect comment. I'm really happy to know how much you enjoyed the two parts. I had to portray how close Aahil was to lose his sanity, that's the reason of his cruel side. But worry not, Sanam was there to guide him. 🤗

Muskaan17rocks:

Thank you, Lovely. I'm so humbled that you loved the long parts. The only person who could handle the dark side of Aahil is Sanam. She had to witness the person he could become.. I know, I must have shocked a few readers with the twist of Raza's death. I have to admit, how much I enjoyed telling the backstory of the grandparents ❤️

*sigh* You're making me blush from all the praising you've done. Thank you so much, Lovely. Thank you for loving the story and always supporting me.

Nilusoni, Adventure_gurl & -Awaari-:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I guess, I do have a soft spot for including emotions into the stories I write. 🤗

Tazzz:

First of all, I have to say how wonderful you are by giving such a long comment. Thank you so much, I appreciate each and every feedback I got. So, you liked the shirt, huh? Even I did. I often get carried away with including too many details some times. Haha..

I loved making Sanam a bit badass while fighting Sikander. Happy to know you liked the scene between her and Aahil about tricking him. I thought, that would be the only way, he would actually understand what he is doing.

I know, the story is coming to an end next time. It's really sad, but the it has to be done. I only hope you and along with everyone else, will love it too. ❤️

Innocentangel4u:

I always look forward to read your long and heartfelt comments. The words I've written in the beginning are taken from a song called; "Black Roses" by Clare Bowen. - It's such a beautiful and captivating song. You should really listen to it.

Yay, I'm glad you loved their intense chemistry. I'm honestly touched by how you've quote some of your favorite scenes.

Aahil is both compassion and fair. He knows what has to be done, if he needs to protect his people. As you said, Aahil was pretty harsh in his words, but it was all his dark-side speaking.

I am absolutely humbled by your kind words. Thank you so much, Lovely. Reading your beautiful comments have always been something to look forward to. Gah.. I loved writing Nazeera and Aftab's love saga. It's so close to my heart. Once again, thank you for all the love. ❤️

Lovesahil:

Thank you so much. Honestly, when I read your review, I had to sit down for good 5 minutes before I had to ability to response. I'm just gonna send you a warm hug on a cold December night. It really warms the heart, just so you know. Aahil's words were harsh, but it was only done so he could see clarity again.. by Sanam's help. Once again, thank you for all the love. 🤗

"Because it's us. - It's what defines our souls. I'm wild and you're just following my steps."

Sanam bit into his lip, taking all control in her own hands.

"Sanam.." He grunted at the back of his throat.