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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chapter as usual
I will not say much as the chapter has actually made me speechless
Love how rehan understood aahil
The flashback was beautiful of how aahil had proposed to sanam
The paragraphs sanam was writing were a treat to read and actually told what love actually makes a person do and how it cannot be stopped
Overall a flawless chapter
But did not like the fact that the story is coming to an end so soon. I have actually grown really attached to it but i think as they say that all good things come to an end one day or the other.
Well would just cherish the time left and would definitely come back to read this story again and again because i know that i can never get enough of it
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently for the next part 😊

P.S. had said in the beginning about not saying much but i think i just got carried away. Sorry about that😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
this was fantastic. im really excited to find out who the "observer of life" is or what he means. but will the story really end in 2-3 chapters? if you do end it, can you please start a romantic sahil ff? these days, ive been missing sahil a lot! 😭 idk when ill be able to forget them, but till then, i read these ff's to keep me busy. and MAH was so UNIQUE AND DIFFERENT! 😆 i love your writing mahwash. if possible, can you please try to start another sahil ff? im in love with your writing 😆 ❤️ i dont usually read fantasies but this was sooo good i couldnt stop! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..
so rehan still shocked with new found info..A
sanam too mate with clan..
now Ahil too became threat fpr there clan..update next part soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lots of drama. We got to see Rehan adjusting to this truth. We saw Sanam and Aahil living and loving together. When she told him to take his contacts off, I felt that she accepted him totally. Sanam is one smart chick in this; I loved her thoughts on love and what it means. And aww, you even threw in their proposal scene.

But more mysteries! What will happen with this other clan? How will Aahil prevent war and protect his family? And also, this observer.

Sorry to hear the story will be ending soon, but you created a beautiful world and did a great job showing us the love these two people had before his change and the love that continued after. 👏

Thanks for the PM! Update soon.

As for reading books, I can't think of one couple that I have read that had what SaHil had in all of the books I have read. Not to say that I haven't come across some fantastic couples and stories, but SaHil is unique. Good luck on your hunt to find more couples like SaHil. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Story is ending soon...? 😭 Plzz start new story with different concept like this one.I have become so much addicted to read ur stories.Ur writting style is unique which i love most. If it is possible keep writting i know it is not easy.
As usual update is superb 👏
Thanks for pm dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow the chapter was soo intense
Loved it to core
I didnt get on pm
:-(
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Posted: 9 years ago

I love your choice of words for the story Sanam is writing there, such heavy emotions... So remember not to be afraid of love, because in the end, it's the only emotion which will make you feel both safe and strong.. 👏

And finally SeHan took long enough to believe Aahil is actually very much there with them. Nice conversation you've put in there... the Aahan bonding 👍🏼

Sanam has moved to a cottage on the outskirts of the city with a handsome man to keep her company 😆

Aahil introduced Sanam to their Clan... Intense scenario... Your banner once again reflected it all... The big Haveli & the darkness... And among all that, I loved how Sanam responds to Aahil's insecure feeling of losing her there: "You wouldn't! Try it, Ibrahim I dare you." That's Miss Dhabevali there!! 😆

And finally you put in the Royal proposal... how they had decided to give in to their love amidst all the insecurities... of what future holds for them... And this: "...Besides, it says, when you meet someone and share some sort of connection with each other tells us that they are meant to be.. You know why, Sanam? Because they have already met long before anything existed.." ❤️

Sanam blinked being deeply touched by his choice of words.

I'm deeply impressed by your choice of words... Its beautiful really 👏

Sanam has accepted Aahil wholly... And so she loves his eyes... Wow!!!

Like how I said before, Zain was so treacherous! 😡 I'm glad you made Aahil finish him off.

I like how Hamza is so much like Rehan when it comes to advising Aahil... He is always there by his side 😊

Who is that mysterious shadow trying to warn Aahil?? And you haven't revealed Aahil's special power yet...

Nevertheless the flow of your story is amazing as usual... You make it all the more beautiful with those flashbacks... And you know exactly when to reveal which part... So again, you're a really gifted writer masha Allah 🤗

And WHAT??!! ONLY 2-3 chapters left? Nahiii 😭

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovesonu2408 - Thank you so much, Lovely. Reading your review is a huge compliment to me. Really. You're a sweetheart. It's all because of your love and support that keeps me going. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the flashbacks and their moments together.

Muskaan17rocks - Aww.. Thanks Lovely. First of all - don't you ever say sorry for writing too much, because that's what I want you to. 😆 I'm so touched that you loved the special moments in the chapter. Even I loved writing the paragraphs Sanam wrote. Definitely a treat to pin down. I know, even I'm a bit sad to know it's soon coming to an end, but I promise you that it'll be an thrilling ride from now on. So you better get yourself ready.
Thank you once again, I'm so happy and touched by your review.


Tazzz -
Thank you so much. Everything will soon be revealed of who the "observer of life" is.. Haha, you're sweet. I'm touched that you think so. I will try my best to come up with a story.. I guess I can reveal that I do have a OS coming up and maybe something which is potential enough to be a SS. But I do need to find time to pin down..


Kanwal4Salman -
Thank you for reviewing and reading. Yes, looks like things are slowly getting better.. I hope you'll enjoy the next few chapters too.


Adventure_gurl, Nilusoni, Navk & MysticRiver -
Thank you so much, guys.. Means a lot that you all liked it.


Darkice7_12 -
First of all, I have to agree with what you said about Sahil being unique - because it's so true! I actually managed to write a few book titles which I need to get my hands on. (..as if I'm going to get the time to read, but let's just ignore the minor detail here, 😆)

You're not the only one who was totally mesmerized by Sanam's character. Honestly, there have been so many incidents where I just stopped to grin or pad myself on the back. 😆 I looove her character and the fact that she is the only one who gives hope to Aahil.. You'll see more of her in the coming chapters. I almost cannot wait to reveal the few scenes.. *EENKS* - I just couldn't stop myself from writing the proposal flashback, even though it was small, but it did give an insight of their relationship.

There seems to be more mysteries, doesn't it.. Promise that it'll be revealed in the next few chapters.. Also, thank you so much for showing so much love. You're seriously a sweetheart. I'm always filled with such a good-feeling after having read your reviews. I appreciate and hold every word you've said very dear to me.


Lovesahil -
I know.. It's rather sad that it's ending so soon, but as someone said, good things must come to an end. Thank you for showing support and I hope you'll enjoy the coming chapters.


Onlysahil -
*BLUSHING* Thank you so much. I'm so honored that you love my writing style. I may come up with something..


Jazz2010 -
Thank you for liking it. I appreciate it. Oh, I'll send a PM next time if you would like..


Innocentangel4u -
Excuse me while I finish fangirling after your awesome-and-so-perfect-feedback.. If you think my response might be a bit confusing to follow, than you know the reason.. Honestly, I have no idea to even express myself. Lovely, you've made me speechless, for real.. I really do thank you from the button of my heart. I'm touched the fact that you pin-pointed the places you loved including the words..

It's no secret that I was a big supporter of Aahan-bond. Gosh, the brotherly relationship was so cherished.

"Sharing the cottage with a handsome man to keep her company.." Even I laughed while typing it. And yes, Miss Dhabewali is very much there..

I actually really wanted to throw the proposal into the mix. I absolutely loved writing those dialogues. So heartfelt and special. So glad you loved it.

Nice observation.. Hamza is very much like Rehan. He helps him to see rationality in his choices too. I'm actually really humbled by how much you're enjoying the story and how I reveal each thing in the chapters.

"So again, you're a really special writer mashaAllah" - SWOON! Thank you so much, Lovely. Keep showing support and love.

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Posted: 9 years ago
You are impressing me with each and every chapter. There is not even a chapter that i didn't find interesting not only this story also your other stories. You are a wonderful writer.

I was expecting Rehan to behave this way. Poor guy, still not able to accept his brother being alive. Hope he understands everything soon and accept his brother as he is.

So Sanam finally completed her book. Loved the lines she has typed in the book. He has also introduced her to the clan. The proposal scene, is this the one that has happened before their marriage?.

Looks like more action sequences are on their way with the introduction of this rival clan. Waiting for them.

Is the Observer of life a trick played by the other clan to change Aahil's mind against his father or real?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter...again, another suspense around the corner 👏

Lovely SaHil moment...❤️

The mysterious observer of life? Who could that be?

The Brotherhood...I'm scared that It's going to be very ugly with the war between them.


TQ for the pm!

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