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I want to thank each and every one who have commented and liked. I'm very humbled by the response I'm getting for this story. Touched beyond words.. 🤗

I'm really glad to read how you all loved the ancient story of Aahil. I took a lot of time to think it through and to see if it would make things clearer.

So it finally made sense, huh? 😆 - Reading this definitely made me sigh with happiness. I wanted Sanam to make her decision. Right now, the only thing which is important for her is having him back into her life. Let's see what happens in the next few chapters..

Muskaan17rocks: I'm glad you loved the chapter. When I read your review I was really touched - especially reading this;

"You deserve all the praise for this update coz I feel that this story will actually have a special place in the history of Sahil ffs."

I have no idea how to response for this. For real. All I can say is thank you for showing so much support and love for my writing. It means so much. 😳❤️

-Awaari-: Have I told you how I absolutely love the way you give your reviews. Thank you for the beautiful words. 😳

LoveSonu2408, Jazz2010, MyAnastasia18, Adventure_gurl, Tazzz, Noesha & NanduVijay:Thank you for all the love. Keep staying tuned, lovelies.. 🤗

Sahil333:Thank you so much! Now, the real journey begins... Haha, yes, can someone please get KV and Surbhi to adapt this? 😆

Innocentangel4u: Oh, that's good then. I'm excited to know you loved the chapter. To read that you thought the backstory of Aahil felt realistic is overwhelming for me. Thank you so much for the awesome compliment... There's some real rivalry going on.. You'll get to see some glimpse of it soon.. I actually chuckled by how many times it reminded you of something..

It was a "aww" moment, wasn't it? Even I sat with a warm smile across my face. Hmm, is Zain the other son? Not really.. But you'll get to know about it in the next chapter.

A writer will ever get tired of hearing what the reader thought of a specific story. Trust me, no matter how many times I read my reviews it always have the exact same feeling. I tend to keep my feedback very close to me. So therefore, keep them coming, Lovely.

"I really feel this story of yours is one of its kinds on the forum." - Whoa.. Say what? You've made me speechless.. again. Thank you so much. ❤️

Darkice7_12: Glad to know you enjoyed it. I've got to admit that my favorite scene has to be where the transformation takes place. - Where Hamza and Junaid rescue Aahil. I really wanted to create a bond between them. I'm honored that you though it was great. ❤️

Thank you for quoting the line. It is beautiful, isn't it? Love is all about choosing to be with the person you love, no matter what.

This was definitely again one OH MY GOD! Chapter

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Muskaan17rocks: I'm glad you loved the chapter. When I read your review I was really touched - especially reading this;

"You deserve all the praise for this update coz I feel that this story will actually have a special place in the history of Sahil ffs."

I have no idea how to response for this. For real. All I can say is thank you for showing so much support and love for my writing. It means so much. 😳❤️

beautiful update...i love it..

Wonderful chapter...
Your banners always go with the story, so dark and mysterious.👍🏼

I love their lighthearted conversation and how Sanam is so understanding of him. Makes him calm and at ease. I wonder when Aahil will meet Rehan and how he will tell him the truth. He has to do it asap I think!
Love the convo between father and son. Now again, a mysterious secret for Rehan. Why doesn't his father want to talk about hidden secrets. Sure it would help Aahil to lead the Clan?!

"I have no intention to ruin the future, Aahil!"
How will Aahil protect the future when all is a secret for him? This is way too serious to keep away from him. I'm holding my breath what the consequences will be.

"Neither have I. Would you be able to look at Rehan once he'll get to know the truth? Come whatever may, I will not let the same destiny run through our family."

"Let it be!" The senior man ordered.

"I will not." Aahil clenched his jaw and avoided his father's soulful eyes.

Oh, I love how Aahil stood firm to his dad and not afraid of him!
What kind of destruction can Aahil cause with his power? This is BIG!!!

His father kept studying him silently. "I'm afraid of letting the power consume you - Then tell him the truth, no need to hide it from him right?

"But I promised something to someone and I intend to keep it - even if it's the last thing I do."
His promise to his grandmother right?

I thought the fruitdrink that Sanam made for him was funny. The whole convo at the dinner table was very nice. The FB was a nice touch too.

His worry about her safety was so touching. Very nice that there was romance between them.

And then the face off between Aahil and Zain...
Zain can't fight Aahil alone, he just need his friends to help him destroy Aahil. He's such a coward 😡

A dark laugh echoed as everyone stood completely thrown off. His laugh grew louder as each breath he took.
This is a glimpse of his power right?

"Try it, I dare you! Touch her and we'll see just what I'll do."

"There's a reason why I have the highest rank of all. It's because no one really know what I'm capable of doing. You see, I'm the wild card."

Uff, so proud of Aahil here

Oh gosh, Zain is painting Aahil as a bad leader by luring the beast out of him in front of the clan, well part of it!😡

What..a..thriller..after..this! The fight between Aahil vs Abeer was so good, but the fight with Zain was brutally great 😎👍🏼Oh wow, Aahil can see someone's past? So that's one of his powers, I like this.(like phoebe)

"Aahil!!" A heavy thunder like voice echoed.

"Stop this! I will banish him myself. Let him go!" He looked over his shoulder, seeing his father. "This is not you, son."

"This is exactly who I am!" Aahil shook his head, eyes still glowing brighter at each breath he took. Turning his attention back on Zain, he led out a dangerous tone causing shivers all around..

"This one's mine!"

Without any warning, he snapped Zain's neck causing him to fall down on the hard cold ground. Zain gasped but it was too late..

Good...Zain is dead now 👏.

No one even dared to breath or take a step forward.

It was almost like it was beyond their understanding. They had not seen anything like this nor did they know it was possible to make someone vanish for good. Let alone put someone's mortality to an end.

Oh wow, what a power he has...👏...Love...love this Mahu...take a bow 👏

So no one knows this, beside his dad?

Abeer inhaled a breath already witnessing the brutal fate of Zain. Thinking it was best to disappear, she backed away, but her eyes caught a pair of red eyes looking right back at her.

"Your days are counted, Darlin'." Hamza whispered.

🤣 this part was really funny😆

"Leave." Aahil commanded to the rest of his fellow Clan Members and did what they were told.

Now they know who the real leader is. HE IS THE CHOSEN ONE!!! And better not mess with HIM 😆

She reached a shaking hand forward to touch his cheek and made her way further down where his heart was beating. She furrowed her brows, trying so hard to understand what just happened.

Aahil tried to ignore the defeated tone in her voice. Instead, he nuzzled into her skin, trying to find some sort of comfort in her warm embrace. "Didn't you tell me I was still yours?"

What a heartfelt moment between them.

Sanam inhaled. Part of her could still not believe this was real. God, when did her life turn into a science fiction novel?

😃

If Aahil doesn't understand to give Sanam some breathing space to take it all in, then yes he's - cold and heartless!"

"Listen to my voice. This is not the man I fell in love with. Please.. Come back to me.. You promised you'll always be my Aahil."

The power Sanam (or better said, his love for her) has over him..Girl, I could quote all that you have written after this, but it would be too much right? 😊

"These are not only born with one purpose. They are capable of love too. What your heart can do no other man have that authority over.."

Aahil was almost blown away by her capacity of seeing beyond these things.

Love the above!

So far I've commented while reading 😃. Didn't want to leave things out.

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So Rehan and Seher know also. That's a good sign. And I love the reunion of the brothers. So emotional.


Phew that was a long comment on a long update 😳

This chapter was full of suspense and was brilliant!!!👏

Update soon please, want to know what the Clan thinks of him now!!!

I don't know where to start. This was amazing. I actually felt very proud of Aahil 👏 😆 I'm so excited for the next chapter because Rehan and Seher are about to find ouuuttt!!! Every chapter has something so special in it! You surprise us every time! 😆 Ufff I need to read ALLL of your SaHil stories. This one is so unique! I've probably reread this 3 times. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Loved the interaction between Sanam and Aahil. She was his "sassy and beautiful" wife and he was her "intense and hard" hubby. I loved the descriptions.

Didn't we all like how intense Aahil was? And the loving Sanam, who accepted him after seeing his strength and what he can do.

And the truth is coming out to everyone! 😲 How will Rehan react?

And aren't vampires long living?

what's in store for our favorite couple?

Update soon!

*grabbing all the positive vibes* 🤗

Wow amazing update .

u are an awesome writer and written everything beautifully..
so sanam saw the monester side of Ahil but accept him as she love him..
zain part is over i guess...
now its time to truth for sehar and rehan..
i hope they will take it as good as sanam
update sooon

Man!! Girl, You are dope! 😲😆 How in the world did you even...Goodness! Is this even for real?!