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Wow awesome update 👏
So Ahil's family is vampire clans
It must be hard for both of them
Finally that Zack is dead 😡
Now how will rehan react
Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

Man!! Girl, You are dope! 😲😆 How in the world did you even...Goodness! Is this even for real?!

I haven't read a better supernatural story damn! This is sensational girl! Breathtaking! I never really loved supernatural stuff, I confess okay. I really didn't. And that is why I wasn't even catching up to this story. Yes, I have told this earlier too! It was never my cup of tea man! Never that interested in it.

First of all, sending a lot of love your way. It must be tough getting the dentist thing. I hope you take good care of yourself and a lot of rest.

You have to believe me that I was awe struck when I saw your name across the response. I was like; "Whaaa.." 😲 Seriously you really made my day, Lovely!

...But you, you made it so exciting for me, legit! It was amazing! It was just too good to be true..heh, the irony! 😆 I am starting to love this story. And probably will be the only supernatural I would evr love! Trust me, even if now I have kinda started liking supernatural, courtesy - YOU. I can't read other stories still. This would be my first and last...😆

Maybe, maybe coz it has Aahil and Sanam in it. And maybe, I like how the "love" in this story overpowers those strengths he has, and how he is so weak and vulnerable! Man, I love men being vulnerable, due to love and craving and still it makes them so powerful..its just too amazing to read!

Don't we both love men who crave love while being a tad vulnerable at the same time.

You know what the biggest and most heartfelt compliment I've ever received is right this one! Honestly. I'm not even lying or just saying out of the blue. - The fact that someone surprises your writer by becoming interested in their story when it's not their cup of tea to begin with is so damn overwhelming.. I take this with much humbleness. 🤗

I just read the last two chapters AND I am in awe of you and your writing. I just love how you keep your readers on an adrenaline rush from start to end, that edge of the seat-ness, that we have to control from falling off the edge..ehh..zyada ho gaya shayad..😆😆

Never mind. 😆

It's never too ziyada.. I absolutely LOVE your reviews. I just love how I make you speechless sometimes and the little; "Eh.. you get what I'm saying?" - reading that I just know I got the right response I wanted. 😳

I can't say much about these chapters. My favorite parts are how HIS story was described. ANd my absolute favorite part was, when he described that moment of turning into a vampire. OMG. That was really an OMG moment for me, really! THAT ECHO of pain! Eeekss! 😲

Hai?? Even that is my favorite part too! High-Five girl! I wanted just the right way to describe what Aahil went through. Yes, the horrible echo of pain..

Do you even want to know what was the favorite part in the last update?! Really!? 😆😉 Okay there were:

When she was on about how she likes her things to be intense and "hard"..Duh! Obviously! 😆

That little restaurant part when they walked hand in hand..

AND then, that fight came, and I thought this should top my list, I didn't know till then you know?

😆

And the last part too! Where she was telling him "this is not you!" Oh damn!

This is one master piece! I am awed, girl! Simply awed! 👏

❤️

PS: I am actually on a rest, had my dental implant surgery two days ago. And it was so painful! 😭 That is why I wasn't able to come online...

Loved the entire update. it was a mind blowing and a nail biting update. The conversation between Aahil and Sanam are just superb. Just loved there conversations and read them again and again. The way how Sanam bringing Aahil out of his insecurities are good.

The fight between Aahil and Zain was nice. Aahil had got many action sequences in your story.

Waiting for the reaction of Rehan and Seher after knowing about Aahil's truth.

First the banner is sooo fitting I must say... Totally reflects the fiery fight you've pictured in there 👏

Aahil is so worried for Rehan... One of ARI's amazing hidden qualities 😊

I loved this part: 👍🏼

Feeling his hand caress the inside of her wrist, she met his intense eyes and knew what he was thinking of.

A small smile began to spread across her lips as a memory filled her mind. "Do you remember what you used to say to me?"

Aahil nodded.

"Say it again." Sanam requested.

His eyes lowered and ran his finger across her skin. "This is your lifeline, but what you don't know is that my life began from here. You gave me purpose to live again... by accepting what I am.."

And this too: 👍🏼

"... I saw it as another chance to be with the people you love - who love you back with equal feelings. If your ancestry had not taken place in history, then I wouldn't be sitting here talking to you, - especially not after the horrible accident we both went through." ... You made Sanam truly come up with such a beautiful perspective there 👏 ...

Those little moments they spend together just strengthens their bond more & more ❤️

Oh! So the other son is Rehan eh?? Seems like my guess was wrong after all 😆

The candlelight dinner is so full of emotions... & the flashback too... How Aahil got half of the restaurant booked just for them; that too when they were only engaged; it's so gentlemanly & romantic ... That's ARI after all 😛

I forgot to mention this before... I really like the engagement' perspective you have given our SaHil 👏

Coming to the fight... Wow!! It felt like a thrilling action-packed movie... 👏 sooo realistic it was!!

"...Your lover will serve a painful death along with your dear human brother..."... So Zain knew about Rehan too... He was such a threat to all of them... No wonder he wasn't even worthy of being the leader 😡...

By the way, Aahil sees the pasts of other people right?? In the last part, he saw his grandmother Nazeera's past... This time he saw Zain's past... Zain truly is one treacherous selfish character 🤔

And you've brought in Aahil's faade of showing his bad image really well... "This is exactly who I am!" Aahil shook his head..."Maybe that's who I am."... And how Sanam has this ultimate healing effect on him... "I know who you are deep inside and.. Sometimes, that's enough. You're not a weapon of destruction nor are you a threat." 🥺 *sigh*

So Aahil will tell the story one more time to SeHan... I hope they understand him & stand by their side... But of course they'll all be in grave danger right?

Loved the part as usual... Oh, and you know what... I don't think I ever want this story to end ❤️...

Lots of love... 🤗 Continue soon Mahu...

NanduVijay; Yay, thank you so much for the kind words. Even I enjoy writing Sanam the calm one in the relationship. Aahil needs his guidance and to take it from his wife is a special thing. Also, thanks for mentioning how you liked the fight sequences. I don't think I can hide the fact that I love action. 😳

Innocentangel4u; Even I'm in love with my banners. I'm not even kidding, I can keep staring at them for hours. 😆 Oh, I love the way you've put it; "Reflects the fiery fight you've pictured in there."

I have to say how touched I am for the fact that so many have loved the "lifeline-scene." Even one of my favorites too.

Aahil is nothing without Sanam.. And she is nothing without him. They balance each other's flaws very well and that's what I wanted to create. - So happy that it was well received. The restaurant scene just came to my mind and thought; why not? He's a Nawab and he can easily do this.. Aww, thank you for liking their engagement period and for this one; "Wow! It felt like a thrilling action-packed movie.." I've never known how much I truly adore writing like this before. Thank for you so much for such in-depth response. Reading something like this is so heartwarming and what really gets me going.

"Oh, and you know what... I don't think I ever want this story to end ❤️..."

I can truly never thank you enough for showing so much appreciation and love. Hugs to you, sweetie.

Adventure_gurl & Nilusoni; Thank you so much for your support. I'm glad you both enjoyed the chapter. 🤗

Loved it! I wonder how Rehaan will react.

I don't know what to say.. Each chapter just gets more and more intense. You've written this beautifully .. Is that really our aahil?? So many questions pondering.. What will rehan now do??

Hey awesome update yaar 👏
Love sahil moments❤️
So is there any danger for clan or humans?
Who is this Brotherhood😡
And who is that man😕
Continue soon😊

Res