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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: unique55
Is this story is inspire from 50 shades of grey??? Because scenario are very similar... The way Ana n christian met hmm but zoya was confident in the show unlike Ana she was little timid u start it well!!!
Continue soon!! 😳 😳

Yes it is ...I mentioned that on the first page itself😊..U will also find a lot resemblance in the story further too...

Thank u😊

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Nice update
Humeira questioned Zoya abt interview. Jacob a good friend only.
Asad & Zoya met again & she asked for photograph. She admitted finally that she like him. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
I love you the way you describe their chemistry its awesome...
Continue soon and thanks for the pm...

Thank u😊

will do it soon..

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_Lavender_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579
It was so freaking awesome!!
I didn't wanna stop reading it!!!

I wanted it to go on and on!

Update soon!!!!!!

And thnx for d pm!

Thank u for this lovely comment😊

Will do it soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Loved it...😊
AsYa encounter was awesome...
Zoya has lot of male frnds...😉
continue soon

Thank u dear😊

@Bold haha...Nice observation😆

Soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MsGrumpyShumpy
Its ok to take i spiration from the novel but plz try to give ur spin on it instead of merely copying the dialogues and scenes. I want to read AsYa in that scenario but not as Christian n ana but as asad and zoya. Do try to write the same scenes but maybe in ur way rather than copying the entire sequence. People who have already read the book will be bored. No offense to u though its just a suggestion

Hi😊...Actually I made it quite clear on the first page it self that what ever I post will resemble or will be similar to what is written in the novel...Its based on that Novel only ..and that's what I tried to do

@Bold I cant make everyone happy...But at the same time I feel people who want to read will find their own happiness in my boring update May be!

I will keep ur suggestion in my mind..But I guess this is all I can manage but as the story will proceed u may find few changes in it ..I hope I didn't sound rude to u😊

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: -Hurya-

Thank u dear😊

@Bold haha...Nice observation😆

Soon!

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Nour7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

I've read the two chapters in one go , loved the beginning
waiting to read more
thanks for the pm

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Dhanyatha rao

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

omg im shocked neva knew u had a hidden talent n u tel me its not dat gud n ur just tryin jhutti kahiki its sooo gud read both d chapters in one go its awesum n u better make zoya herself d photographer