ASYA SS||The tale of Dominance and submission' (Chap5:Pg23)18/4/1

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@BelleAme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Hey hurya 😃

Read part 1 and 2 in one go
Loved it...
Hahaha Jacob? Twilight fan? 😳 😆

Waiting waiting...

Loved the interview 😛

Jaldi update Karo..will be waiting 😊

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simmi

@-simmi-

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Is this story is inspire from 50 shades of grey??? Because scenario are very similar... The way Ana n christian met hmm but zoya was confident in the show unlike Ana she was little timid u start it well!!!
Continue soon!! 😳 😳

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: BelleAme
Hey hurya 😃

Read part 1 and 2 in one go
Loved it...
Hahaha Jacob? Twilight fan? 😳 😆

Waiting waiting...

Loved the interview 😛

Jaldi update Karo..will be waiting 😊

I thought that you had disappeared...
Good to see you

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

I love you the way you describe their chemistry its awesome...
Continue soon and thanks for the pm...

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Lasya Adiraj

@KSGmaniac_24579

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

It was so freaking awesome!!

I didn't wanna stop reading it!!!

I wanted it to go on and on!

Update soon!!!!!!

And thnx for d pm!

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Loved it...😊
AsYa encounter was awesome...
Zoya has lot of male frnds...😉
continue soon

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MsGrumpyShumpy

@MsGrumpyShumpy

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Its ok to take i spiration from the novel but plz try to give ur spin on it instead of merely copying the dialogues and scenes. I want to read AsYa in that scenario but not as Christian n ana but as asad and zoya. Do try to write the same scenes but maybe in ur way rather than copying the entire sequence. People who have already read the book will be bored. No offense to u though its just a suggestion

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Tamanna

@Tamanna91

Explorer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hurya 🤗
Loved it 😳
Next chapter jaldhi update karna... 😊

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Ranjani

@Gouri_Joshi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

hey it was a great update
and I love long updates
update soon
& please pm me

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_Lavender_

@_Lavender_

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: BelleAme
Hey hurya 😃

Read part 1 and 2 in one go
Loved it...
Hahaha Jacob? Twilight fan? 😳 😆

Waiting waiting...

Loved the interview 😛

Jaldi update Karo..will be waiting 😊

Hi😃 Thank u so much dear...Its just an adaptation of a novel I m inspired by😆..But u r a splendid writer⭐️

No!!...I don't like imaginary vampire stories much..Just like that the name came to my mind😆