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sanarujub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

50 shades if grey is a passionate love story...And asya's chemistry match it perfectly

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-silentbang-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Nice update...

They are attracted to each other but he doesn't think that he is suitable for her...

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Just read this its awesome poor zoya she is so hurt n what asad past interesting continue soon 😊

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago

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jaanu013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Nice update.mitwa moment..felt nostalgic..asya convo was cute,but sudden change in asad ..it's expectedzoya feelings she was not suitable for asad and got hurt..she took it other way..beautifully written..continue soon

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Nice update
Zoya thanked him for photo shoot. He asked her to join coffee & she agreed. Their talk abt BF & GF was nice. Asad told Zoya that he was not a right person for her. She felt rejected. He saved her from bike. Waiting for story to unfold. Thanks for pm

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Loved it❤️
Hmm...Photoshoot scene was awesome
Love Humi ..so bossy and caring friend
Asad asking abot Zoya's BF😳 and she questioning him...
Poor Zoya felt dejected😭
So actually who is the right person for Zoya??😕
(kidding)😉
Mitwa moment 😊
Continue soon...
Soon...
Love you Hurya...

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

M loving it...

Beautiful...

Great going...

But what happened to asad suddenly??...

Can't wait.. Plllzzz update sooner na...plz

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Hafsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

hello hurya!

loved it!!

It was well written!

Asad photo shoot at his hotel!

Asad asked Zoya for a coffee date!

he asked her if Paul and Jacob were her boyfriend!

She said no!

Zoya told him that she find him intimidating! haha

He smiled at her!

Asad had to leave so he excused and paid the bill and walked her to the car!

She asked him if he had a girlfriend!

he glared at her

She was about to get hit by the bike but Asad pulled her toward him and they were staring at each other!

Asad broke out from the stare and told him that he wasnt the guy for her! awww :(

Please continue soon!😊

Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Nice updates

Just caught up with last 2 updates

So both r attracted and have chemistry

But Asad thinks he is not right for her

So what r the hardware stuff for if he is not decorating

Ropes tape ties I hope asad is not into kinky stuff

He is dominating intense and passionate but don't make him kinky it not him

Making zoya shy shy and timid is ok zoya was not timid in the show she face it all but she as innocent

So he invite her to coffee but when she says she is romantic he rans

So he don't want romance what does he want just plain physical relation

I never read the book I never saw the movie but heard abt it

But don't copy paste make it your own asya own

Bcuz their love was intense and passionate

Continue soon

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