ASYA SS||The tale of Dominance and submission' (Chap5:Pg23)18/4/1

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Hi Everyone😊...This is the first time I m ever writing a story on a Fictitious Couple...I just got inspired by amazing FF writers of this Forum who write So well on ASYA .I thought to write something on them too regardless of my poor story telling way (Tolerate me😆)...The plot is taken from the Novel "Fiffty Shades of grey" By E.L.James ...And the story will contain a lot of resemblance from the Novel!...Kindly Ignore my grammatical n spelling mistakes😊..Havent proof read it yet!
INDEX
CHAPTER 1 ------------- Below
CHAPTER 2------Page 5
CHAPTER 3---------Page 9
CHAPTER 4---------------Page 14
CHAPTER 5------------------Page 23
"The tale of dominance and submission"
CHAPTER-1
Zoya Farooqui is a beautiful 21-year-old college girl attending Washington State University in Vancouver, Washington doing her graduation in English Literature.She lives in an apartment with her best friend and college fellow "Humi" Humeira siddiqui, who writes for the college newspaper. One day Humeira caught severe Flu and persuades her best friend zoya to take her place and interview a very successful business man and the owner of Khan Constructions. Zoya knows nothing about the interviewee; she was way too nervous but agreed for the sake of her best friend. Humi gave zoya the questions she would be asking .

Before leaving to take the interview

Humi : Did u take the question paper I had given u Zoe?...She could see zoya was nervous and felt bad to put her BF in such a situation but was helpless..

Zoya: Yeah...(smilingly)

Humi: You know where u r going na..

Yes Humi I do have a GPS and 4.0 GPA to figure it out...said zoya laughingly...

Humi hugged Zoya...

Humi : thank u Zoe u r a life Saviour...Take my Car...

Zoya hugged her back and left for Khan construction..

Zoya reached there and take a look of the Khan Construction building. It was huge, Zoya entered the building and took the elevator to reach the first floor. In the elevator Zoya opened the file and read the name of the man she was going to interview "ASAD AHMED KHAN" it reads

Zoya came out of the elevator and the receptionist greeted her as Ms Siddiqui zoya was about to tell her that she is a substitute of Humeira, when a lady came and told her "Sir is waiting for u in his Cabin"..Zoya nodded n went along with the lady..Zoya was feeling extremely nervous when the lady opened the door of the room for her to enter..Zoya thanked her and the lady left...As she was about to put her foot in to the room..she lost her balance and drops to the floor with a thud..Zoya came back to reality when she heared a manly voice asking her if she is OK!..Zoya looked upward and saw before her an extremely handsome man..the Man again asked

Ms Siddiqui r u ok?..Asad Ahmed khan says the man forwarding his hand for her to take

Zoya: I m Zoya farooqui...actually Humeira Siddiqui is down with fever so she asked me to fill in says Zoya while straightening herself up

Asad: I see..So u r from the same journal as well?..

hmm No..I m studying English liguistics..Humeira is my roomate says Zoya nervously.

Asad: Ok u have 10 minutes..Come in..have a seat

Zoya sits on a sofa infront of Asad's desk and opened her pad and searches for her pen but didn't found any..Asad saw this n get up from his seat n handed her his pen n stood there leaning bit on the table..Zoya took the pen and thanked him smiling nervously at him

Zoya: ready?

Asad: Yeah go ahead

Zoya: Ah ok..so this is for the graduation issue of the student news paper

Asad: Yeah I m attending this years ceremony

Zoya: u r (Suprisingly)...I mean umm.. I know!!

Asad : Smiles inwardly

Zoya: You r quite young to own an Empire..to whom..

Asad: To what do I owe my success ( he completes the sentence for her)...Seriously?

Zoya:Yep!

Asad: Business is about people..and I have always been good to people..i motivates them and allow them to showcase their talent..

Zoya: May be u r just lucky!

Asad: Smiles sarcastically..I never believed in Luck!..Hardwork is all i believed in...The key to my success is my communication skills with the indiviuals...I get what I want!

Zoya: So u like controlling things

Asad: oh I exercise control in all things Ms Farooqui!

Zoya:okh.. U r investing in numerous agricultural projects...in various countries..umm do u feel passionate about it..um or do u think world is poor?

Asad: It's the part of my business

Zoya: hmm

Asad: U don't agree?..

Zoya:I don't know .. may be ur heart is bigger than u lead on

Asad: some people says I don't have a heart..

Zoya: why they say that?

Asad: Because they know me well...Next question..

Zoya: You r unmarried..ohh u were adopted at the age of 4 says zoya while reading the paper of question humeira has given her

Asad: that's out of topic..

Zoya: Oh sorry

Asad: Do u have any actual question Ms Farooqui..

Zoya(Nervously reads the next question): R u gay..says zoya looking at asad ashamedly and looks down..its just written here.i m just..

Asad : No ZOYA!..I m got gay

Zoya: I apoplogise Mr Khan...Humeira must be

Asad: Intrusive

Curious may be..says Zoya looking back at him..Whereas Asad took a seat on the sofa opposite to her

Asad: what about u?..why don't u ask me something u wanna know

Zoya: U said people know u well...why I feel its not true says zoya looking in to his eyes

The door opens...Mr khan ur meeting is in 10 minutes..

Asad: Cancel it!..i m not done yet! Says he firmly.

Lady: Yes Sir

Zoya: umm No I m done ..umm i can go...

Asad: I wanna know more about u

Zoya: there is nothing to know about me

Asad:u said u r an english major..Who makes u fall in love with literature Thomas Hardy or Jane Austen. ?

Zoya: Hardy

Asad: I guessed Jane Austen!

Asad: what r ur plans after graduating?

Zoya: i m just completing my final year..Job may be!

Asad: we offer u an internship here

Zoya: I don't think I can fit in here(Laughingly)

Asad: looks intently her

Zoya: I mean just Look at me!

Asad : I am!

I think I should leave...with that zoya gets up collecting her things and all this while Asad kept on looking at her...and came to see off her till the elevator...

Asad: I hope u have got all u needed

Zoya: Yes..i think u have answered 4 questions..n turns as the elevators door open..she enters in it...Nice meeting with u Mr khan..with that she left his place

Asad stood still there!

(I know I bored u all😆)...But Do let me know wat u think of this..n should I continue?

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hafsaraza thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovedd it

it was well written!

please do PM me!

havent read the book but heard it was a good one!

love to read it in AsYa styleee!

humeira sick

she told zoya to go to the office an interview

she found out she was going to interview AAK

she was asking what humeria wanted to ask

they were personal questions haha

Asad asked is their something she wants to askk

loving it

please do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆...Even I m gonna faint too😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊
It was too beautiful ..
Loved it...❤️
In Love with Ms.Farooqui and Mr.Khan
Do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Hurya.. Congo for your first story dear...
It was awesome... Zoya's questions and asad's sudden interest... 😉
Loved it... Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice
Asia story on 50 shades of grey
Should be interesting
Pm plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi dear
Congo on ur first story
And thanks 4 private message

I m excited for this..
Bcoz last night i saw the movie 😳
But never got the time to read a novel..

But now a days i am not regular on this forum but will try to read this and leave my comments
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Interview was wonderful
Asad cancelled his meeting as he wanted to know abt her.
Continue soon plz
Do pm me
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's amazing!! :D
I have been waiting for smthing like this since a longgg time.
please do continue. Update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hurya i just love it plz continue and funny question by Zoya are u a gay ? 😆😆 loving the starting please write down next part soon .

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