SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

It's lovely
Update next part asap
Can't wait to read it

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Unres on pg 8

Edited by shreya11mehra - 10 years ago

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Superb

Mindblowing

Amazing

Interesting story..

Loved the concept..

Waiting eagerly for new chapter already..

Continue very very soon..

Thnx for PM & an Amazing surprise..

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Awesome Story Saima👏😊

I did know abt TMOI's previous version but I read dis one

Its so different

1st I thought d story is 4m Zoya's POV till it I read dat he mentioned feeling 'her'

Poor children were tortured so much right 4m d day 1

D tattooing scene was so painful

Now Asad has bcum a business tycoon

Hope he is not arrogant n rude types even wid girls

How according to Asad can d commander kill all d Dark Angels? I thought he was a nice n protective person?

Asad cannot forget Zoya n wants to find her

He remember Zoya as d best among d girls

Hope he finds Zoya soon

Waiting for Zoya in present time

Update soon n PM me😃

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

great start Sam di👏👏

It was so thrilling

Asya were tattooed here also

but i like it cuz that tatto always help them reunite

Asad is impressed of Zoya & want 2 find her

I m so excited 😃

thanku 4 pm😛

Sam di ARL ka updt karo na jadli

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

wow tis is very interesting..
fabulous...
asad n zoya are tattooed n tat hw they will know each other...
its amazing...
thx fr the p n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Prashni Singh

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Unreserved @: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/115951695

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

God! This one's AMAZING!!!!

The first two paragraphs and I knew, I'm gonna get hooked up!

I am left speechless.

God! Brilliant concept sissy! 😛

They are tattooed here too. But here I guess they were separated when they were old enough. Or at what age? He's 22 now. So? Will they recognize each other without the help of tattoo?

I can't wait for more!!! 😃

Next chapter please NOW !!!!

Edited by Aneezarp27 - 10 years ago