SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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BurstingBubble

@BurstingBubble

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Posted: 10 years ago

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This is Highly intriguing

I have never read anything as such but I am hooked up to the story

The tattoo AZ ... Hayyyee

As I let go of her hand I promised her that I would find her and that one day we would be together, I intend to fulfil that promise somehow. I know she is out there, and I will find her.

The sharpest shooter, the meanest fighter but yet so innocent, yet so loving, there could only ever be one Zoya, my Zoya.

Lovely lines😳

I'm loving the fact that this is from Asad's POV

Waiting to see how Asad and Zoya meet

Continue soon

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

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Unreserved!

Written from Asad's perspective and the first person, I am loving this already - Like exceedingly! I guess this shall be my second favorite after "A Reason to Live" - I'm intuitive! ☺️

Their anguished childhoods were harrowing.

The tag AZ = Asad + Zoya! #Fate #Destiny

"For commando and his fort I was a Dark Angel, for the world outside I was young successful business tycoon."

"As I let go of her hand I promised her that I would find her and that one day we would be together, I intend to fulfil that promise somehow. I know she is out there, and I will find her."

Hayee! On a serious note though, they militants, cannot help but wonder their final fate.

But

"the Dark Angels wore The Mark of Innocence."

Is the essence!

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Snow_kf

@Snow_kf

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

It was really awesome update. Continue soon.

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Yayyy!!!!!

Mindblowing storyline!!

Missed you!!

❤️

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Thanks for PM.

It was Awesome Beginning.😊

The storyline was Very Interesting,I likes it.😊

The flashback of Asad(KSG) and Zoya was so nicely explained.😊

The way Asad(KSG) explains about Zoya was so nice.😊

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Amazing start

Very nice concept

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Wow that was damn intrstng nd amzng saima...
Awesome start it was... Loved d updt...
Superb...

Hey Zack is here also :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D
Haha mujhe acha lagta Zack aapke strys mein...

Dark angels... Nd asad is a commando...
Whr is zoya !!!! Wow asad n promise ki k woh zoya ko doondega...
Then he ll...

Continue soon

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Hello sis...
Hope you enjoyed your holiday...
Coming to the update I seriously wonder where you get such amazing concepts and ideas..
They are beautifully written with such deep meanings that leaves me in an awe...
Loved it to the core!!
Asya were together through that hell but when they finally got rid of it they are no longer together but I'm sure asya will find a way to each other...
Beautifully written
Eager to know what's gonna happen ahead...
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm...