SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Res for CBP, bhai's , gowtu, aseelah api, sum, sukhi, binnu, srash, trish, anopama, shama and all bhai's

Huggies Aloo 🤗

Sam di sorry 4 lateness 😳

finally this long ongoing story came 2 an end

& what roller coster ride it was sachi kayi baar main confuse hui ke story kidhar ja rahi hai😆

& Di sachi u truly outdone urself here too 👏👏

we were always on the edge ki what's gonna come nxt & u never disappointed us

when Asad was shot I thought no u can't do that I had trust on u but also new u gave a sad ending once😆 & u know I hate sad ending. I believe real life main already boht realism hai kam se kam humari stories main toh happy ending honi chaiye.

& in a sense this optimism 4 something happy awaiting 4 us in future keep us moving

this is only my thoughts ppl may feel I m fool 2 think that but I don't care🤣

Coming back 2 story

So commander wanted every1 2 keep continuing their job & missions

& Asad was sceptical about that

Di I also thought they could have avoided it cuz its life threatening but they chose 2 go by it

so its fine main kon hoti hun bolne ko😆

Waise I loved Asad's proposal infront of ppl who meant everything 2 them

Overall it was a really entertaining story wid so much thrill & suspense😃

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#812

This story is completed already!!

I still feel like it was yesterday you started it Di..😕

Awesome story and and even awesome ending..👏

Asad and Zoya's love stayed true even though they faced a lot..

Although somewhere in the middle there was a doubt but they stayed strong..

Will miss this story a lot..😔

Love you loads Di.. 🤗

PS: Maybe a TMI III ??😆 Will be waiting to read all your stories..😊

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poppy222

@poppy222

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#813

Wow this is speechless I don't have word to describe how I found this story, is just awesome outstanding I think this is among ur best writing it is far away from ur usual writing which make it fabulous nd amazing tnx for this story may Allah bless u with more ideas to write more story may Allah bless u nd fulfilled all ur dreams ameen