SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: BurstingBubble

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This is Highly intriguing
I have never read anything as such but I am hooked up to the story
The tattoo AZ ... Hayyyee
As I let go of her hand I promised her that I would find her and that one day we would be together, I intend to fulfil that promise somehow. I know she is out there, and I will find her.
The sharpest shooter, the meanest fighter but yet so innocent, yet so loving, there could only ever be one Zoya, my Zoya.
Lovely lines😳
I'm loving the fact that this is from Asad's POV
Waiting to see how Asad and Zoya meet
Continue soon


Thank you so much

Am glad you liked it

😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: p_s05

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Unreserved!


Written from Asad's perspective and the first person, I am loving this already - Like exceedingly! I guess this shall be my second favorite after "A Reason to Live" - I'm intuitive! ☺️


Their anguished childhoods were harrowing.


The tag AZ = Asad + Zoya! #Fate #Destiny


"For commando and his fort I was a Dark Angel, for the world outside I was young successful business tycoon."


"As I let go of her hand I promised her that I would find her and that one day we would be together, I intend to fulfil that promise somehow. I know she is out there, and I will find her."


Hayee! On a serious note though, they militants, cannot help but wonder their final fate.


But


"the Dark Angels wore The Mark of Innocence."


Is the essence!


Hey Prashni

Thank you so much for the thumbs up with this one, hope I can live up to your expectations and keep this as your second favourite

Lots of love 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: _Tanaz_

It was really awesome update. Continue soon.


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: treasure11

Yayyy!!!!!

Mindblowing storyline!!

Missed you!!

❤️


Thank u so much my dearest

Hope you are well 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was Awesome Beginning.😊
The storyline was Very Interesting,I likes it.😊
The flashback of Asad(KSG) and Zoya was so nicely explained.😊
The way Asad(KSG) explains about Zoya was so nice.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PriyaCherry.



Hey Priya

Thank u so much for liking it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow that was damn intrstng nd amzng saima...
Awesome start it was... Loved d updt...
Superb...

Hey Zack is here also :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D
Haha mujhe acha lagta Zack aapke strys mein...


Dark angels... Nd asad is a commando...
Whr is zoya !!!! Wow asad n promise ki k woh zoya ko doondega...
Then he ll...

Continue soon


Hey Gowtu

Thank u so much sweetheart

No Asad is not the commando, he is the man who had them brought to the land of angels, he trained them.

Updating shortly 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: sanah12

Hello sis...
Hope you enjoyed your holiday...
Coming to the update I seriously wonder where you get such amazing concepts and ideas..
They are beautifully written with such deep meanings that leaves me in an awe...
Loved it to the core!!
Asya were together through that hell but when they finally got rid of it they are no longer together but I'm sure asya will find a way to each other...
Beautifully written
Eager to know what's gonna happen ahead...
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm...


Hey Sanah

Hope u r well sweetie...my holiday was a total nightmare lol...another story for another tine

Thank you so much for liking the concept and first chapter

Lots of love
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome

loved it
but only one doubt it isnt a dark story? right
plz update soon

hey
Thank you so much

No not a dark story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

OMG OMG BADI API..ISSE AMAZING SURPRISE TO MERE LIYE KOI NAHE HOSAKTA...

A NEW STORY BY YOU AHHHAAAHHHAA

WOW KYA CONCEPT HAI, KYA STARTING...
AMAZING, INTERESTING AND AWESOME...
WHAT A START...👏

ASAD A BUSINESS TYCOON
ZOYA KAHAN CHALI GAYE????? OR KYUN GAYE..
ASAD AB USE FIND KAREGA NA...😃

LAST WALI BHE MERE FAVOURITE THE TO YE WALI TO DOUBLE FAV HOGE😃😳
ME TO BHT BHT BHT EXCITED...NOW YOU HAVE TO DO A FAVOUR..JALDI JALDI UPDATES DENE PARENGE MJHE..

OMG I CAN'T...LOVE U BADI API FOR STARTNG THS ONE...
HAYE MAI BOLO TO KYA BOLO😳

THANK U SO SO MUCH...
LOVE U🤗


Hey little Api

Thank you so much my sweetheart am so glad you liked it

Love you too🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Cindrella3

Wow! Just wow!!!!!👏❤️ Where do you get all these ideas from???!!! You're just amazing!🤗 You don't know how much crazy I am about your works. Brilliantly written.👍🏼 Please...please...please... continue soon and please pm me if possible. 😭


Thank you so mch my dearest am so glad you liked it

Will update soon 😊

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