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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#741

This is like my favourite part..
they both are getting engaged. .
wow..its getting so more interesting. .
loving it..!
Update soon with a little romantic moment. .;)

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Chap 9..Asad is ready to marry for Ayaan...But both are ready to give it a try...
Awesome

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Oh thank u so much for this speed update

I love it

Now i am in peace

I am looking forward to it

You are right dear 80% of marriages are done only arranged

Love will find its way later.And trust me its also worth it.

Pls update soon

Pls pm me soon

I didnt get pm for this

I know u are sending pms later

Love u dear

Take care

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Mvinfff

@Mvinfff

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Very nice part! Please update next part soon.

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Chapter 8

superb update 👏

asya met and six more months passed😲

now what is Shireen aunty doing yaar even ayaan was shocked😲😲😲

hayyee eagerly waiting for next update

please make it ASAP

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Aishwarya

@pumpkin.honey

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#746

I was lucky enough to check my pm when u updated chapter 9 as well, so got to read double updates n d suspense in d 8th chapter did not lasted long fr ME 😉
Haaye!! their meetings were sooo sweet. Js loved each n every encounter
U know, I guessed it already dat shireen came fr Asad's proposal 😎
I can't believe Asad was d 1 to initiate first here, hez a bit less introvert if m nt wrong
Wow, so marriage fixed so soon, without any hurdles.. Cool 🥳
Well, yeah m missing any kind of romance between d 2 here bt also loving a bit different kinda story
so thumbs up, hugs & kissesss fr a lovely writer 🤗

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#747

Wow...Back to back updates...!!!!

read two in one go & i was like loss of words to express how brilliantly u written it...

the first part of their meeting after six years...that is the best scene...their shocking state, both want to hug each other but that awkwardness in their action...that silent moments & then taunting & then talking at the same time...all is i can imagine...that happiness of seeing each other after a long period is visible in their actions...

again they left abruptly & then their meeting in party, song sequence, & then again u part them but this time with a proper goodbye...

Then come the new phase of life for Zoya...she get a family in khan's but again that misunderstanding & she kept herself distant from him...& then come that proposal...

The part after that proposal is the best part i can say...The two peoples who doesn't know how to love decide to come together to try a new phase of their life...the one was always busy to give happiness to family & the other who was fought for survival...I just loved their talk...amazing that was..!!!!

Isn't it the first step of Love...they respected each other...both r the inspiration for each other...Asad was her inspiration to achieve a success in life & Zoya was his inspiration for enjoy the life...they care for each other...feel proud for each other...so they r on the path of love...& having each other by their side they will explore the new feelings of love soon...

I like Shireen for being that much thoughtful...

Awe...Asad is becoming a possessive now...loved when he told Ayaan that she is yours soon to be bhabhie...

That hurt when he told I m your Bhaijaan you recall it or not...

Ohh i forgot to mention that starting scene when he come to her apartment & asked for food & zoya was all surprised by his behaviour...loved it...

In short I like each & every word u penned down here...

Superb Job...👏👏👏

Love u dear 🤗🤗

is next update on the way...😉

Take care...😊

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#749

wow lovely update

as far as its about concept

personally I loved it

it sounds more realistic and whats common between most of the people

really enjoyed reading this update and for sure will the upcoming updates

eagerly waiting for next

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#750

awsm one luvd it
superb update
cont asap
waiting for d nxt part
thnx for d pm
t.c

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