ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Abi

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#751

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jas91

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Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Read both d updts

u did a fantastic job👏

U really have great talent👍🏼

d way u described scene make them sureal

so Asya wanted 2 hug eachother meeting after 6 yrs

than their awkwardness wid cute nok jhok & teasing was treat 2 read

Asad was proud of her achievements & Zoya was delighted cuz 4 d 1st time she had some1 who admires her success

d colloge party where Zoya again become laud like she used 2 b in past, Asya sang 2gather

Asad left her after party & even came nxt morning 2 see her off that was d most sweetest thing

6 months passed & Zoya came in touch wid Khans & they like her

in those meetings 4 d 1st time Asya saw each other in a different way 😉

Shireen came wid Asad's rista which Zoya refused & Asad came late night 4 explanation

Zoya's guiltiness which she calls burden hurt him but she agreed on d nxt day itself

d pain hurt tears shows they r already in love just have 2 realize that

Asad told his truth he why he was marrying but he is ready 2 meet her half way & Zoya also told her truth if she think she feels she means something 4 him

& yes most of d weddings happen on this concept only love comes later wid time😊

I hope Asya's journey 2 love will start soon wid u on d writing front😆 & yes its a delight 2 read a story which is so simply sweet & a pleasurable read. Love u 4 sharing it wid us🤗

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-PizzyLuvAsya-

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Aha finally they meet after so many years

Aww their meeting was very romantic

Very well written update

Continue soon dear

Waiting right here

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#754

lovely update swapno

enjoyed a lot

ek confussion hai tumhary pm k bad i res'ed but wo page 98 pe hogya kesy?????

but asya vali update ne mood acha kar diya

asya ka proposal waooo

thnxx for pm

update soon

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sasir

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#755

Awesome
Asya going to marry...yayyy
Plz update soon

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Prashni Singh

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#756

The last two chapters were highly captivating, literally loved every moment of them. Awesome job, well done.

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shreya

@1788shreya

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Nice chapter

Loved it

Waiting for the surprise

Are they came for asya's alliance

Update next chapter soon

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-.-Mariam-.-

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Awesome update..

Loved it..

AsYa meeting was NICE..

Curious to know what Shireen said to her?

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#759

loved the update!!
u always make me realize why i love asya so much!

their shock...then desire to hug each other like a long lost friend...teasing...banters...i just loved everything!!!

if this isn't perfection, nothing else is!

i hope shireen proposed asya's marriage! fingers crossed...

cont soon

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Waqt Zaya

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Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#760

because I thought this time I should provide you with a comment

Originally posted by: swapno
Parts I really liked

"Please don't go like this, you were hungry. Please have dinner, then go" Zoya tried to stop him, but he shook his head saying "I cannot stay here after this, Miss Farooqui, please" Asad left from there with a broken heart. Zoya sat at the door with a thud.

"Miss Farooqui. What has happened to you? Why you are here?" he was really worried for her as Zoya started to wail. Asad guided her to the living room. Zoya was crying in front of him and he stood there dumbfounded. What could he say?

"Miss Farooqui, please stop" but Zoya was crying.

"If you are not sharing what is troubling you then how can I resolve it?" Asad explained. He waited for her cry to subside. After some time, Zoya stopped and Asad offered her a glass of water.

Am I even making any sense here?
Yes you are
Only as they say sometimes one meeting is enough for love, but sometimes many meetings cannot help it. I personally am going for the second option. In fact, most of the matches in this world are following second option only. They will fall in love and will realize it. How?
Like mommy like babbby.. Yes! Meetings help to know one person better than only one meeting. A single meeting is often superficial and one's true habits and traits are known by many meetings, you truly develop the emotion called as love or else it is admiration that blinds one as Love.
Good Job.. Now make them fall in love 😡