ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1021

RES...Ankiee , Tehs , Jas , Aroo , Ashii , ABI , Annie , Asif , Aapii , Anopama , Aseelshah , Shama , SUE , AZsumay , Khushi , Nikki and all other Lovely People who follow this story.. 😃

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1022

An epilogue is much needed

You can't just end it there

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1023

This was such a beautiful chapter

Just loved reading it

Their confession was so sweet

Can't believe it ended already

I wished we had got a small epilogue on their married life

But i totally understand that life makes us busy

Thanks for such a beautiful story😊

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1024

I'm crying..:(
This was so so beautiful. .:)
I loved it sooo much..
their confession was so intense and simple..
this was an awesome story with a beautiful ending..
I wish you would have written an epilogue. .
anyway thank you for such an amazing story..
hope you'll write more.. plzz.. I love your writings..
hope to see you again. .
thank you..:)

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1025

Loved the update...A beautiful one..
Sad that it ended so soon..that also without an epilogue..
But it ending was really amazing..
You did a great work...
Thanks for this..
❤️

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zehra07

@zehra07

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1026

A perfect end to an awesome story👏

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1027

a wonderful story ended 😭
superb...
finally they get married...
i liked very much asad's dream...
and also asad accepted shireen and called her choti ammi...great..
wow...zoya confessed first...
dotted line joined with their signature...
loved the way gou ended the story with the title of story...
loved the whole chapter...
enjoyed the full story very well...
journey through this story was superb...
surely gonna miss this one...
come back with another wonderful story...

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1028

Awesome update
Like asad dilshad convo in dream. She told him to accept his feelings. Both missed each other & finally zoya took first step & confessed which was reciprocated by asad. Their dotted lines connected to each other by saying QH to each other. It was beautifully written story
Thanks for pm