#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 87

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Whatever u r doing there.. leave dat n come to india n plllzzz start writting serials. ..u ll be a tough competetion to big writters like ekta kapoor, gul khan, palki malhotra.. n many more.. n m not kidding[/B]m damn serious.. .m sure many ppl will agree with me[B]

Seriously, kaha se laati ho yaar ese nayyab ideas..
I really want to know ur real age.. coz i dont belive u r a teenager.. ur work doesnot seems of dat.. .

About the update, kya bolu.. kuch hai hi nahi.. from the start to end.. .SPEECHLESS. ..dont have words to explain..
Right from the starting to till here, the way u have moulded the characters, specially zoya, its soo mature u know.. .
How beautifully u have shaped the storyline.. .
I was always a fan of ur stories. ..but today it increased another level.. ..commendable. ...

I suggest u plz think about writting seriously.. .
I always wanted to c ur previous story(stalker leading) in a show played by our amazing kabhi obviously.. .
But today.. .i cant express what m feeling..

Soo, update toh, each n evry bit was great.. specialky zoya s fkashback, knowing about her pregnency was commendeble..

Main baat toh bhool gayi tere chakkar me.. .arey wah, itni jaldi update kar dia.. ..doble surprize..

N ye new entry, first i thought ayyan.. then i think koi zoya wel wisher, dost ya relative ho.. ..pata nahi.. .lets c..

Sorry if i foret something,...i ll pm u.. ..

Amazing. ..

Omg ! Omg ! 🤣 u r so sweet !! 😆 hahaha i'm only an amateur ! Nothing much ! 😆
U r so sweet and its an honour to hear this !! Thank you so much Shanz !! 🤗

Believe it or not, i'm only 16 ! 😆 awww Thank you !! ❤️

Awww ! I'm so honoured !!! U're making me blush ! ☺️ ❤️

Hahaha i'm only an amateur Shanz ! Mere mein voh baat kahan jo dusre writers ke paas hai !
Awww thats so sweet yaar !!! 🤗

Hahaha Thank you so much !! I'm glad you liked it !! 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: captjs

loved loved loved this chapter... zoya becoming matured... who is the stranger?

THanks dear 😳 lets see who is the new comer 😉

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Bano dear

I just love it

My cuty cuty ASYA

I like this mature Zoya

And the after shower hug scene was so yummy😆

Ab yeh stranger kon hai?😲

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

Thank you so much Aseela 🤗
Yummy ?! 😲 🤣
Dekhte hain ke kaun hai voh ! 😉

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Yeahh na. .thanks dear.. .yes, she is brilliant. .

Thank you so much both of u !! 🤗 mwah ! ❤️

Originally posted by: jas91

Again awesome updt Bano👏👏

D way Asad was relaxing in d grass

so Zoya got 2 know Asad was not baby's father😲

she felt dirty & guilty poor baby😭

She got scared thinking if Khan's will hate her knowing this but than she realized than Khan's knew & loved her despite d truth she felt relieved & her respect & love 4 them increased😃

D scene when she was hugging him & saw their reflection on d mirror was beautiful scene👍🏼

Right in front of her, she saw her own reflexion in Asad's arms and then she knew that she could look at herself in the mirror without any guilt.

D song was so meaningful here loved d song selection deary😃

Finally Zoya is back 2 her original self😉

awe how she was admiring sleeping Asad

she went 2 get water & ek anjan admi recognized & chased her😕

Zoya got scared thank god Asad came on time 2 save her🤗

It was so surprising that d older Zoya would have been scared but here she was back 2 her jovial self immediately after getting conscious😆😊

Zoya changed into Asad's shirt & he got shirtless☺️❤️

Asad enjoyed her expressions when she was explaining her story😆

Zoya teased Asad 4 his lack of experience of buying girl's cloths😉

but Asad bought pink salwar suit he has classic taste😎

after enjoying their alone time they picked a worried Dillu & family from d park😆

D man is following them kaun hai yeh banda😕😡

Awww Thank you so much Sweetheart !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Asad i tell u ! He'll be the death of us ! ❤️
Finally she got to know the truth ! 🥺 😭
Khans r the best !! 😎 🤗
Yes she hugged him and saw herself in te mirror and relized that she has nothing to be ashamed of ! 👏
Thats one of my favourite song so i really enjoyed writing it down here and u e right it was meaningful in this story and completely corresponded to them ! ❤️
He didnt really chased her but lets say tried to get a closer look ! 😆
Savior is always there whenever Angel is in troublz ! 😳 ❤️
She was back to her jovial self only because she knew that her Savior was there and that he wouldnt let anything happen to hzr !! 😳 ❤️
Shirtless Asad ! ☺️ ❤️ i miss Jahanpanah-six-packs ! 🥺 😭
The man is not following, he only noted the plate number !! 😆
Love u Sweetheart !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️

Originally posted by: -Sushma-

Awesome update!!!

Glad that all is well between AsYa...

Who is the new guy?

I hope he not a bad guy...

Continue soon and thanks for the PM...

- Sushma

Thanks Sushma ! Let's see who he is ! 😉

Originally posted by: falak333

love it...

asya convo was damn good...

hope the shameless is not going any where nd we will enjoy some ahemm ahemmm moment in future...

pm me when u update plzzz

Thanks Falak ! 😆
Well lets see ! U'll keep getting AsYa scenes, less or more romance ? Let see ! 😉

Originally posted by: --RUBAB--

Appy! Curious Update,,,,,,,
But Loved It TO The Heart

Haha thanks 😆

Originally posted by: Amin21

Oye hoy bano yaar

What an emotional but amazing update

Just awesome

Perfectly done

The zoya remembered those dark memories

Felt really pity for her I was about to cry for her specially for those who faces these kind of violence in their real life .

The scene where zoya asked asad was the child his was adorably written yaar

Thumbs up👍🏼

N I think this unknown person is not a bad one maybe he will help zoya in her fight for justice

Lets hop so

Hahah Thank you so much Amin !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Yes she was an innocent angel and a beast took advantage of her ! 🤬
Hahaha lets see who is that guy ! 😆

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014

thanks for surprice updt bano

plz updt soon

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n fabulous...

luv it...

asad n zoya are so cute...

zoya found out everyhting about her past...

really hope zoya with the help of asad will teach haseena n akram a lesson they will remember...

mindblowing...

beautifully written...

naybe the guy is one of zoya relation r friend...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

nice update

Thanks 😳