#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 86

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome update...
Awww...my zoya knows everything ..
Glad that she behaved so maturely..
Loved their hug...its so hard for asad to control..
Finally our angel and savior is back..
No awkwardness between them...
That stranger must be akram...
Awww..asad embarrased and blushing zoya...so cute..
Loved how they tease eachother. .
Lovely update..
Update soon...

P.S. I will unres all my comments soon

Thank you so much Yashi !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Yes she finally knows ! 🥺 Zoya is a sensible girl now 😳
Of course its hard for him, he loves her so much and having her close to him only makes him love her more ! 😳 ❤️
Nope ! Its not Akram ! 😆
Thank you so much Yashi !! ❤️

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Lovely update

THAnks Chahat ! 😳

Originally posted by: shonajain

fantabulous update bano
zoe is finally growing mentally
asya. convo was wonderful...they are awsum

naya insaan???
contnue soon
lots of love
shona

THanks so much Shona !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome part loved it

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

THanks ! 😳

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Awesome update Bano.

I loved how you described Zoya's realization that Asad was not the father of the baby age was carrying. Her breakdown in her washroom was so well explained dear👏

How she looks through her iPad to understand the reality of her life was done well too and how she goes to Asad to thank him for his support and the description of her toughts to get justice and how Asad's emotions are spiraling out of control were written so well.

I loves the wholescene of her getting scared until they pick the rest from the park was a good read.

The highlight of the update was definitely their talk in the park. Brilliantly written and all emotions expressed so well👏

Loved the WHOLE update Choti Bajijaan❤️

And thank you for such a super update. Love you🤗

Thank you so much Badi Bajijaan !! 🤗 i'm really happy that u liked it !!! ❤️

I tried to describe it in a realistic way for that Angel that has been through a lot and had been put through so many hurdles ❤️

Well nowadays internet itself became dangerous for kids but well it did brought answers to all Zoya's confusions 😕 Zoya will be seen now as a strong woman who will fight to get herself justice 👏 ab Asad ke baare mein kya kahoon ? He loves her so much ! And having her so close to him only makes him want to have her even closer ! ❤️

Thank you so so so much Badi Bajijaan !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Thanks to u for this lovely comment !! And i love u much more !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

now this was the most endearing chapter of this story...

zoya truly realized what a saviour means!!

curious about the stranger...hope he's someone good...

continue soon

AWww thanks so much Srashti !! 🤗

She realized what Savior meant and who he truly was !! ❤️

Lets see who's that stranger ! 😉

I'm glad you liked it ! 😳

Originally posted by: mayurchan7

Hii...Bano..iam grateful to my stars i got the update through P.M... :-P well jokes apart i must say i wasn't expecting that conversation between them you suprised me and it was on target excellent...but i feel sad for zoya ...that girl is actually becoming fine and adaptable in this world but she again has to be a victim of her horrible past...a very well written scene that was which showed her grief...and then my fav moment in the Update ASYA hug...how she was not letting him move...and how she choose her heartful thankful words awesome...Asad well if you get this situation again and again then he can live his lifetime cherising these moments...you know i have typed this much but still it was only half of the part :-D...zoya realized that her SAVIOUR will always protect her no matter what and she went out with that confidence...humm...the scene in the car was also cute and briliant..well you no iam out of words...but will not ask you about the stranger...because iam not being able to guess him...and can only wait for that to be revealed...but on honest note it was a MAHAUPDATE...long , emotional, and superb...continue soon.

Hey Mayur ! 😃
Thankful to ur stars ? Interesting ! 🤣
Well yeah i had to introduce that conversation because i will show u soon that Zoya will stand up for herself and fight for justice ! 👏
Yes tahts what i want to show that however u try to move on and to forget past, there is always a link up refering or reminding u of the past !
Thank you so much Mayur !! 🤗 well honeslty my favourite part was also that hug because it was full of promises and a lot of silent confessions ! Each times he does live his lifetime whenever she's close to him and this time he had almost left his self-control because the way Zoya was hugging him, uske hosh hi udh gaye ! 😆
Because now she knows and believes that her Savior would be there to save her, no matter what so she didnt get much scared ! 👏
Awww Thank you so much Mayur !! 🤗 each time u make me want to hug u with ur comments !! 🤗

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Kabhi na kabhi usko pata chalna hi tha ! 🥺

I personally love that song !! ❤️ so less words but that says the workd ! *sigh*

They r so cute that we can imagine them everywhere !! ❤️

Arey she has the right na, after all she's falling for this gorgeous man !! ☺️ ❤️

Chalta phirta dictionnary was one of the first nickname she had given him !! 😉 🤣

Hai koib! Kahani mein twist ! 😉 😆

He didnt do it intentionally and afterwards he even gave her a blanket to cover her ! 😳

Why r u blushing ?! 😡 she's the one with him not u !! 😆

Bahane ko choor choor kardo ! 😈 🤣

Haaaw ?! 😲 u alled me devil ?! 🥺 😭 main toh angel hoon lekin Devil mera yaar (that its u) !

But i assure u that he's not Akram !! 😆 or else Ziya would had recognized him ! 😳

Awww 6 ?! U'll make me blush !! ☺️

Sorry but sister Tanveer ke role ka the end ho gaya hai, she's not gonna come back ! 🤢 well though i would want that she do that to him, that wont happen ! 🤔

Lagta hai 6 times padhne ke baad bhi tumhe samajh nahi aaya ke voh koi uncle nahi hai ! 🤣

Really ? I'm non-veg and i love Kabab ! 😆 dekhte hain who is he ! 😉

Thank you so much Niya !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️

Originally posted by: myvirman

<font size="4">thank u very very very much for the update i loved it but i so want to know who the stanger is plz tell quickly and plz a bit more jealousy bit plz of sana and asad but i also want zoya to find out that asad only loves her when r u going to update next</font>

THanks but u'll know with time and update only 😆
Lets see with ur wishes but i'll only go on the way i had planned 😊
I dont know when i will, when i'm in mood and when i get time

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

Lovely update

Originally posted by: princess101

loved the update it was amazing

thanx 4 the pm

update soon pretty please

Originally posted by: gowtu

Awesome updt
Loved it

Thanks 😳