#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 88

Created

Last reply

Replies

911

Views

47.2k

Users

74

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Awesome update

I loved the saviour and angel bon ding

Who was the man
Don't tell me that he is akram
Continue soon


Thank you so much dear !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Angel and Savior r back with a bang ! 😎

Lets see who he is ! 😉 and dont worry its not Akram ! 😆 but someone else ! 😈 😆
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smj7

gosh bano!!! you write so well it was so heart warming update🤗

so complicated things also your express in simple words..
glad zoya acted so maturely ...im in love wit blushing asad❤️..hope dat stranger is not akram...surprise me with an update soon😆tc🤗


AWWw Thank you so much Mish !! 🤗 thats so sweet yaar !! ❤️
Well i try my best to write it in the most apropriate way ! 😳
Zoya is now a sensible woman ! And blushing Asad toh... 😆
That man is not Akram dont worry ! 😆
Well yeh surprise tha toh phir nahi ayega ! 😆
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suganti

zoya know the truth that asad is not the father of the baby

at first she felt guilty but then she realised that she's not at fault
she also felt proud of the khan family
aww..she was watching asad sleeping
now who is this stranger..because of him zoya fell into water but her savior saved her in time
loved how zoya teased asad about the woman's clothes thing
awesome update..love it
thanks for the pm


Thank you so much Suganti !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Well lets see who he is ! 😉
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So zoya learns the truth of her life
She has matured quietly
And she realiEs the people around her knows her truth and love her just the same
They didn't banish her ordisaarove of her
And best of all was her saviour he was definitely deserve his name
Love the bedroom scene and them them just sleeping in each other arms
So who is the new stranger is it Akram
Oh she almost drown but savour is there
Oh he bought her clothes
Love her blushing seeing him bare chested
Continue soon see the stranger is who


Thanks Anopama ! 🤗
Yes she finally got to know one of the truth of her life ! 🥺
She's lucky to have Khan family but even more lucky to have a guy like Asad ! ❤️
She realized that he really was and is her Savior ! ❤️
The stranger is definitely not Akram or else Zoya would had recognized him ! 😊
I'm glad you liked it !!❤️
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uzma_nayeem

hey... actully its a first time i m commenting on ur story... ur all stories r jst jst fablous... im all of 3 'mental love' is my fav. here i m loving asad's character nd every thing about this story is special... it tell us every one have right to loved and cared... thankx fr this awesome story. update soon


HEY Uzma !! 😃
Thank you so much ! I'm glad you liked them ! ❤️
Even i love Asad here ! He's the perfect guy ! 😳
True this story has a depth tahts more than whats said ❤️
Glad to hear from u and will be waiting for ur feedback as well 😃
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

What an update sis. Amazing, awesome, beautiful, mindblowing and wonderful.The FB scene was beautiful.So my princess now remembered everything.She realized that she has a family who loves her so much. And try to concentrate on her future.Aww zoya hugged asad. Thats so sweet. Love this scene.Asya convo was so beautiful. Just love each and every asya moments.Now i just waiting for their confession and then zoya's revenge.Who is this stranger? Is he a well wisher of zoya or something else. Vry curious. Hope u cleared it in next part. Cant wait for next part. Update soon.Loved this part. ❤️ Raj


Awww Thank you so much Bro !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳 ❤️
Finally the truth of her life is out ! 🥺
AsYa nok-jhok really brings a smile on my face and the way Zoya hugged him really warmed my own heart while writing ! ❤️
Hahaha lets see who's that person ! 😉 good or bad ? What do u think i planned ? 😈
Thank you so much for the sweet comment bro !! ❤️
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Zoya remembered everything & felt disgusted. She then thought abt asad & realised that he knew everything & always supported him. She felt love & care from everyone in his family which became her family now. Asad told Her that he wants her to punish akram & haseena. Both slept peacefully in each other arms. The stranger scene was little surprising. Maybe some well wisher or zoya friend. Asad saved zoya & then they went for purchasing cloths. Both enjoyed their time together & finally got a call from worried dilshad. Both become normal again. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm


Thank you so much Asif ! I'm glad you liked it ! 😳
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletmalik


read two parts together

awsome updates👍🏼
loved them❤️
itwas light-hearted with fun moments in the first one😃whille second one was a little scary as zoya fell into the lake nd was drowning😲
loved nazma's nautanki😆
loved sana,the chudail😆
angel nd saviour are back😳
loved all the asya parts😳
who is this new person??😲
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm


Thank you so much Scarlet ! I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
Well lets see who is that new person 😉
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ak020203

Lovely update

Wonder who that stranger is..
Thanks for updating


Thanks 😳 well, think, think, think ! 😉 😆
Miss-Appy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

I'm really busy next week so i guess that i'll update in the 2nd week !! 🤗

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

6 months ago

AsYa OS - The Weight of Love - A Bag Full of Love ll Contest Entry

Theme - Theme 1 : The Bag (Graphicer - WildestDreams) The Weight of Love The rain drummed softly against the glass windows of the airport, a...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".