#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 85

Originally posted by: cale

nice update...

finally she knows everything from her past...and now I want her to punish those creeps...

She is thankful to asad ...he loves U very much zoya!!!!

Now who is this guy...

Update soon

Thanks Cale !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
Dont worry they'll be punished ! 😡 after all they did to her, they need to be punished ! 🤬
He loves her so much ! how lucky is she ? ❤️

Originally posted by: -ABI-

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well I hope the stranger isn't Akram
about update its simply Awsome Zoya has come far across to maturity

well I love it.
and Choti try to update Hidden Love also😉
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Dont worry bhai, the stranger is definitely not Akram !! 😆
Thankls bhai ! 🤗
Yes after so many hurdles Zoya finally came to a level of maturity 👏

Originally posted by: ankie95

enjoyed this chapter very much
zoya got to know everything
and ermmm and how "those" things work too *embarrassed*
now who is this new guy????
i hope he is not negative
and shirtless asad *blush*
and plz update hidden love soon *puppy face*

Thank you so much Ankie !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳
Well yes, Zoya is becoming sensible and mature after so many hurdles !! 👏
Hahaha lets see who he is ! 😆
Shirtless Asad ! ☺️ ❤️

Originally posted by: cutie15

See i knew it wud be exciting..!! ;)
It was fun nd cute nd amazing..!!
Sooo sweet dey r yr..!!
I just love how he cares for her..!!
Nd zoya has become even more cuter..!!
lovd d update.. issi tarah jldi jldi update krna..;) :P
Thank u..:* :*

Awww thats so sweet !! ❤️ Thank you so much cutie !! 🤗
Asad is just perfect !! my dream man ! *sigh*
Hahaha i dont know agla update kab ayega !! 😆

Originally posted by: navk

awesome update

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

awesome update :)
too gud loved it
cheesy ?????? NOT EVEN A BIT
u r just wonderful , just update soon :) plzzz :) :)

Awww so sweet !! Thank you so much dear !! 🤗

Originally posted by: zoyaah

awesome update

you are a good writter

continue soon

waitingb to know ho is this man

Awww Thank you so much dear !! 🤗 thats really sweet !!! 😳

Originally posted by: Amulya9

oh my goodness...u updated..
I loved it a lot..
ye meri favorite chap hoga ab...
from d first scene 2 last scene... I admired ur writing skills n ur maturity ..how d way u handled things...
take a bow...Bano
I was really shocked when Zoya questioned him abt baby..
flashback is amazing...
I respect asad a lot.. he's really a sweetheart.. I'm jealous of Zoe now 😆
my Zoe baby changed a lot n finally understood she shouldn't cry thinking abt pastl n khan family love matters her d most ..
love d way they both slept...
now who's that man
I know Zoe looks so adorable in asad shirt.. 😳
loved their shopping scene...
I'm madly in love with this story of urs...n u know that. 😳
muaahhh fr this fantastic chap..
sry fr d delay in unressing..
update soon

Yes i did ! 😆
Really ?! Favourite ?! 😃
Awww Thank you so much Amu !! 🤗 i love u !!! ❤️ but i'm not a great writer, only a 16 years old amateur ! 😆
Awww Amu u r such a sweetheart !!! 🤗 love u ! Love u ! Love u !! mwah !! ❤️
Even i'm jealous of zoe since the beginning because Asad is in love with her ! and i love him ! ❤️
Kaun hai voh ? 😆
Yes Zoya would be looking like a baby in his huge shirt !!
I know that but everytime u say that, my heart warms up !! ❤️ so mwwwaaahhh for all the love and support !! 🤗
Thanks so much Amu !! 🤗 u dont know how much it means to me !! ❤️

Originally posted by: Amulya9

Bano...love u love u love u...sooo much...
kya mast update hai yaar...
ur really an amazing writer... ur just killing me with ur mind blowing updates
tight Huggies n kisses 2 u
kal unres karoongi

And i love u too sooo veeerrryyy mmmuuuccchhh !! 🤗 😳 ❤️
Hahahahah stop making me blush !! 😆 i'm only 16 and an amateur ! 😉
Tight huggies and kisses to u too !! 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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<font size="2">Jisne bhi kaha hai bada khoob hi kaha hai ki DIL KO DIL KI RAH HOTI HAI ❤️</font>

<font size="2">See I had been expecting for an update and you updated 🤗 What a sweet little surprise..</font>

<font size="2">I apologize for not commenting before.. but I have valid reasons haan! 😆</font>

<font size="2">Work-Work-Work and upar se my poor litter fingers.. all battered cause of my new obsession > GUITAR 🤣 didnt give me much time even for sleep.. 😔</font>

<font size="2">I hope you forgive me for the short coming..and even if you don't😡I'll eat you up buss</font>

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<font size="2">Back to update..</font>

<font size="2">this was truly beautifully written I mean.. you are so young.. so very young and how matured you are.. beyond your age and it brought tears to my eyes reading the update ❤️</font>

<font size="2">The most complicated theme that even I would fear to prod into.. you bravely attempted to write and expressed it such innocent words.. ❤️</font>

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<font size="2">You take my heart buss ❤️</font>

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<font size="2">Frankly I hadn't expected this to come at this point of the story.. but it left me boggled.. I mean I have no words to describe how beautifully you have written the whole part..</font>

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<font size="2">Especially the place where Zoya comes to know the truth and confronts Asad.. such a complicated scene you wrote in so simply ❤️</font>

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<font size="2">I feel envious of you now 😆 NO I REALLY DO.. how the hell are you so matured beyond your age haan? 😆 I mean when I was sixteen all I did was to look at my maths exercise book and draw stick figure cartoons and watch Tom and Jerry and other cartoons 🤣</font>

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<font size="2">You strummed the emotional strings of my dear heart sweetheart! ❤️ Lovely and emotional read.. and I really REALLY REALLY hope that kids of your age learn something called as COMPASSION from you 🤗</font>

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<font size="2">God Bless you sweetie 🤗</font>

Ankie !!! 🤗

Hahahaha i'm glad then ! 🤗 dekha even i can give surprises ! surprises isses kehte hain, Ms. Ankie ! 😉 ❤️
Hahahaha so u r learning guitar ? 🤣 good luck with ur fingers because they'll take time to heal if u continue like that ! 😆
Oh yeah i remember ! If u r a KSGterian u can also eat humans, right ? 😲 🤣 hahaha dont worry its ok !! 🤗

Ankie u make me blush a lot and give me goofy grins and i so love u for that !! 🤗 mwah ! ❤️
Thank you so so so so much Ankie !! 🤗 awww !! Well my maturity's credit goes to fairytales, it might be hard to believe but whenever i used to read fairytales, the morals always touched me and if i may say, they made me grow up before time ! 😆
U r really sweet Ankie !! Thank you so so much !! i love u bas ! 🤗 ❤️
Complicated theme ? U mean rape case ? I admit that even i was a little hesitant with that because its something really hard to realize for us girls that the workd is not sage anymore ! 🥺 because of that fragileness of the matter, i didnt dwell on it ! 😕
Well i tried to write it my best knowing that its a sensitive matter and i guess that my own simplicity and innocence might have appeared through the words 😕 but I'm glad you liked it !! 🤗

Awww did i took it ?! 😃 🤗

Well i had to bring it up because i want Zoya to get justice and stand for herself ! Ankie this comment of urs is making me blush, grin andif u continue, i'll start crying !! 😆

Well i tried my best to make people look at the girl ! She might have been a rape victim but tha doesnt make her a disgusting himan being ! She' a 'victim' and instead of helping her and supporting her, people make her feel little, as if she has no life, no personality and NO CHARACTER ?! 😡 for me thats not tolerable ! Those people r beasts ! 🤬

Hahaha i f u say so then it means i'm mature ! 😆 but well, now u know my secret i.e fairytales !! 😆 really ?! Envious ?! Hahahaha i dont really take myself as a mature person but more like a person down-to-earth, though i have crazy deeams and still believe that prince charming exists ! 😭 😆
Well i dont watch cartoons, i hate drawing since nursery and mathd exercice toh mere baaye haath ka khel hai ! 😉 😆

Awww i'm really honoured to be called an example for young people !! Thank you so so so much Ankie !! If i drummed the strings of ur heart with my update, then u did the same with this comment of urs !! 🤗

Thank you so much Ankie !! 🤗 and i love u !! ❤️