#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys ! 😃
Sounds cheesy but yes i cant believe that i reached the 5th thread with this FF of mine !!! 😳 ❤️
And for that, all the credit goes to u guys who keep supporting me with ur likes and comments !! love u guys ! 🤗 ❤️

Clarification : In this FF and in all my works, the role of Asad Ahmed Khan is portrayed by none other than this dashing young man, Karan Singh Grover ! ❤️

THREAD 1
THREAD 2
THREAD 3
THREAD 4

INDEX :

PART 20 - PAGE 1
PART 21 - PAGE 77
PART 22 - PAGE 94
PART 23 - PAGE 107

THREAD 6

Edited by SBanoMalik - 10 years ago

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@...parth...

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Posted: 10 years ago

res

unrs

finally bitter truth is out

i know thi was going to be painful but i think i was the only one who didn't want that baby ..

i like this emotional chapter ...

everyone is really supportive in her case ...

waiting for next chapter

Edited by ...adin... - 10 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res..:D

unRes...!!
Oh god dat was hell emotnl..!!
U wrote exceptionally well yr..!!
I cud feel her pain..!!
Hope she gets ovr dis soon..:(
ty..:*

Edited by cutie15 - 10 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

Mine
Unres

Congo for new thread
It was awesome

Emotional kardaliii

Zoya lost her baby... Sab kitne pareshan nd sad the 😭
Loved it...
Ya it was short I think...

Full on emotional updt yaar

Edited by gowtu - 10 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

resss

unres

so d baby is gone & Zoya is hurt

I loved Danial he's so sweet & caring came wid just 1 call😃

So Zoya cried after knowing & blamed Asad 4 not saving d baby😭

poor Asad was already emotional 4 his angle & upar se Zoya ke ilzaam

every1 was emotional & tried 2 cheer her but she set motionless💔

last scene finally Asad made her eat some food😊

great updt Bano👏

u r rocking😎

but 1 thing confused me u said Zoya has internal abdominal injuries i was thinking didn't it pained when that bluddy Akram🤬 slept wid Zoya cuz if its that serious it would have pained Zoya why she didn't complained than😕

& Congratulations 4 new thread buddy🥳

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

thank god managed place on 1st page😆

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

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Posted: 10 years ago

Fabulous update bano 👏 👏
Such an emotional update... 😭 😭
I cried reading it...
Feeling really bad for zoya 😭
She lost her baby...
Her emotional turmoil is soo beautifully portrait...
Zoya is going through soo much pain...
Zoya is soo lucky to have such a nice family...
Asad is broken too bt trying to be strong for his angel...
Hope zoya cope up with this pain soon...
Loved it..
Update soon...

PS sorry for unressing late...I will unres my other comments soon...
Actually I m suffering from typhoid so its difficult for me to type and read
Sorry for delay...

Edited by aYASHIKA - 10 years ago

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

unres

well first congratulation for New Thread
and Choti its a highly emotional update
I do feel sorry for Zoya's loss but still glad that Asad was,is&will be there for Zoya

Anyway thanks for PM & CONTINUE SOON

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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@yum_immy

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Posted: 10 years ago

res 😉
Unres...
Great chapter 👏
Asya 😭 how much more are u gonna make them cry ?
Thankfully after reading this update i didnt cried much 😆
But it was such a beautiful yet emotional chapter 😭 ❤️ 👍🏼
Loved it 😳
Ab jaldi jaldi update karo 😉 😃

Edited by yumna.imad - 10 years ago